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really good fanfic, it looks like it's turning out to be a harem😮💨, id put that harem tag up
Best HxH Fanfic i have read so far. Really like the nen ability because while its still OP its not some stupid gold finger shit.
4 stars for the translation, 5 stars for the speed. The rest are 1 star. Chapters are filled with MC's expositions, mostly basic factoids that are tedious read. The Lina substory is just bullshit ripoff and MC's decisions after that went full r3t4rd. Dialogues are horrendous when it's not about basic HxH factoid. Author went full Ching Chong with the interactions with nonstop face slapping from goons who have eyes but couldn't see Mt. Tai
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This novel is great! The translation is done well and the plot speaks for itself. The nen ability is unique and interesting, leaving you wanting for more chapters. The characters are well written and nice! I do have a question though. Is there in any way a romantic-subplot to the story at some point? Don’t get me wrong, it’s already quite exhilarating in itself. But would be nice to know if there is some spice to an already hearty novel))
The story is good, I hope it doesn't stop. Thank you👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The translator has done a really good job in translating this but the story is just straight garbage. There can never be a good fanfic but props the the translator and I hope he/she does well in translating future works cause your doing great so far, anyways enough talking cya to whoever’s reading this.✌️
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the translation is good and the story is interesting ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Don't read it, it's a waste of time. Don't read it, it's a waste of time. Don't read it, it's a waste of time. Don't read it, it's a waste of time. Don't read it, it's a waste of time. Don't read it, it's a waste of time.
From chapter 30 onwards, the translation improved a lot. Furthermore, I liked how the Author is translating this work, very consistent and with few errors, a good quality translation. I don't know how many chapters there are in the original work, but I hope the Author doesn't abandon it and continues translating, as this is one of the best hxh novels to date. Oh, if I were just going to say something that I found strange, it would be the MC's name... Isn't that the name of a murderer, Ron? Damn... If I could I would change just that.
I like it, take off the overpowered tag tho. He is stong whithin his tier not op. And tbh i like it like that.
I'm glad you didn't give up on this story, I really like it and I think it has great potential
I really don’t understand Chinese fanfiction how can China in particular create fanfiction that is just generally worse then every other ones out there. Is there something I’m missing because it’s not like every Chinese person wants to write badly writen characters and stories that don’t really make sense.
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The translation is great and I can't find many mistakes with it regarding grammar and spelling, but the story is meh. I thought the addition of anime characters as nen beasts, but they are the only interesting part of the story. It is very repetitive with the mc constantly comparing every character to the phantom troupe as if they are the strongest people in the verse.
really good fanfic, it looks like it's turning out to be a harem😮💨, id put that harem tag up
Best HxH Fanfic i have read so far. Really like the nen ability because while its still OP its not some stupid gold finger shit.
4 stars for the translation, 5 stars for the speed. The rest are 1 star. Chapters are filled with MC's expositions, mostly basic factoids that are tedious read. The Lina substory is just bullshit ripoff and MC's decisions after that went full r3t4rd. Dialogues are horrendous when it's not about basic HxH factoid. Author went full Ching Chong with the interactions with nonstop face slapping from goons who have eyes but couldn't see Mt. Tai
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This novel is great! The translation is done well and the plot speaks for itself. The nen ability is unique and interesting, leaving you wanting for more chapters. The characters are well written and nice! I do have a question though. Is there in any way a romantic-subplot to the story at some point? Don’t get me wrong, it’s already quite exhilarating in itself. But would be nice to know if there is some spice to an already hearty novel))
The story is good, I hope it doesn't stop. Thank you👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The translator has done a really good job in translating this but the story is just straight garbage. There can never be a good fanfic but props the the translator and I hope he/she does well in translating future works cause your doing great so far, anyways enough talking cya to whoever’s reading this.✌️
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
the translation is good and the story is interesting ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Don't read it, it's a waste of time. Don't read it, it's a waste of time. Don't read it, it's a waste of time. Don't read it, it's a waste of time. Don't read it, it's a waste of time. Don't read it, it's a waste of time.
From chapter 30 onwards, the translation improved a lot. Furthermore, I liked how the Author is translating this work, very consistent and with few errors, a good quality translation. I don't know how many chapters there are in the original work, but I hope the Author doesn't abandon it and continues translating, as this is one of the best hxh novels to date. Oh, if I were just going to say something that I found strange, it would be the MC's name... Isn't that the name of a murderer, Ron? Damn... If I could I would change just that.
I like it, take off the overpowered tag tho. He is stong whithin his tier not op. And tbh i like it like that.
I'm glad you didn't give up on this story, I really like it and I think it has great potential
I really don’t understand Chinese fanfiction how can China in particular create fanfiction that is just generally worse then every other ones out there. Is there something I’m missing because it’s not like every Chinese person wants to write badly writen characters and stories that don’t really make sense.
Очень интересно, продолжайте ........................................................................................................................
The translation is great and I can't find many mistakes with it regarding grammar and spelling, but the story is meh. I thought the addition of anime characters as nen beasts, but they are the only interesting part of the story. It is very repetitive with the mc constantly comparing every character to the phantom troupe as if they are the strongest people in the verse.