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31 chapters the mc is still a child, conveniently the mc has a problem with the virus, mikasa's parents die and the plot is stupid Xdxdxdxdxxxx
I personally think it’s really good I mostly turn off my brain to read because most of the novels on here are really bad but I genuinely like this kinda don’t like the MC I understand he’s new and everything and the author will probably write more character development but I just don’t really like him For world building I have it 5 stars since I understand and read AOT 5 times but I update this if he doesn’t explore more of this Writing is 4 stars since I don’t see any weird parts in between or when I’m reading this but I’ll keep a look out in case Updates are easily the best part of this noval the author updates every day or hours apart Story development is just 4 stars since it’s like what 14 chapters now I’ll have to wait till 30-40 chapters before I can really tell Anyways good luck with this novel
Really like where mc is learning to control his power, not like where mc magically mastered it. Love the pace of it as well, I’m looking forward to the future chapters. I wonder how author will implement Blacklight virus armour and stuff. Consuming Armor titan would be brain dead since it might make the plotline haywire and he got to think of sth else. Other than that, it was an interesting read.
Story has potential, that is the most that I can say about it. How does the author blooms the potential is upto him but I really do hope that it blooms good. Good work author the writing is good but too emtion focused, and the story is slow, like hella slow, and slow stories tends to get droped as the author just runs out of the juice too early. Anyway increasing pace and perhaps more non emotional writing are the only advice I can give at the moment.
Please do leave reviews and if you think that i should change something that would be better suited to the story or have some ideas, just tell me. Comment as much as you want.
what kind of trash is this Mikasa father just found MC in the forest and decided to adopt him. so if he see any homeless kids he will just bring them home. and why is the MC says killing bandit is fine but he cannot kill innocent people, author is killing not killing. Give me your own description of killing
31 chapters the mc is still a child, conveniently the mc has a problem with the virus, mikasa's parents die and the plot is stupid Xdxdxdxdxxxx
I personally think it’s really good I mostly turn off my brain to read because most of the novels on here are really bad but I genuinely like this kinda don’t like the MC I understand he’s new and everything and the author will probably write more character development but I just don’t really like him For world building I have it 5 stars since I understand and read AOT 5 times but I update this if he doesn’t explore more of this Writing is 4 stars since I don’t see any weird parts in between or when I’m reading this but I’ll keep a look out in case Updates are easily the best part of this noval the author updates every day or hours apart Story development is just 4 stars since it’s like what 14 chapters now I’ll have to wait till 30-40 chapters before I can really tell Anyways good luck with this novel
Really like where mc is learning to control his power, not like where mc magically mastered it. Love the pace of it as well, I’m looking forward to the future chapters. I wonder how author will implement Blacklight virus armour and stuff. Consuming Armor titan would be brain dead since it might make the plotline haywire and he got to think of sth else. Other than that, it was an interesting read.
Story has potential, that is the most that I can say about it. How does the author blooms the potential is upto him but I really do hope that it blooms good. Good work author the writing is good but too emtion focused, and the story is slow, like hella slow, and slow stories tends to get droped as the author just runs out of the juice too early. Anyway increasing pace and perhaps more non emotional writing are the only advice I can give at the moment.
Please do leave reviews and if you think that i should change something that would be better suited to the story or have some ideas, just tell me. Comment as much as you want.
what kind of trash is this Mikasa father just found MC in the forest and decided to adopt him. so if he see any homeless kids he will just bring them home. and why is the MC says killing bandit is fine but he cannot kill innocent people, author is killing not killing. Give me your own description of killing