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This some really good shit man. Keep it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A história é boa, faltam ff sobre Transformers e está tem um grande potencial, espero que o autor não abandone, está demorando para postar.( autor, recomendo guardar alguns episódios na gaveta, para quando não tiver tempo de escrever)
Wish fulfilment and amateur writing. so many plot holes and so unrealistic moments even with all those gifts just made me bored with the story progress thats all for my review.
Boring and cringe 😅 [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
Revelar Spoiler
This book has a lot of potential if written how it is being written currently. It will be much appreciated if you DO NOT DROP THIS
Author said he was rewriting it but this is just slightly better than the original. The Mc isn't changing anything from the cannon besides fixing bee's voice... Bro have a army of Iron man suits and never used it just because the author don't wanna change the cannon 👎
No lo abandones , me gusta mucho.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😆😆😆😆😆🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😁😁😁😁😁😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😁😁😁😁😁😁
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I haven't read it yet, I'm just going to start but seeing the title, the review and the comments (especially the good ones) we'll see how it goes but first 5 stars just because I'm good.
The author has done a great job of incorporating his ideas into the transformers world.
What is going on in this fanfic the writer keeps on rewriting and the readers keep on trolling, but Amma be honest to you whoever is reading the reviews, don't be tricked by them and just start reading this fanfic, I promise you will like it .
"...alex who loved transformers is reincarnated as sam witwicky in the transformers bayverse universe with a few wishes..."
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Srx ...... pourquoi réécriture [img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=In your face][img=In your face]
I'm tired of waiting to re-upload 3 times, the author will probably continue to do so, so good luck and good nerves to the readers[img=Cries]
Did you just rewrite perfection, WHY what went through your head to make you rewrite this!!
You should change the name of the FF to something like "IronMan reborn in Transformers" [img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived]
Me encanta la historia es entretenida Y me gusta el nuevo sam y como va llendo la historia es agradable y un poco emosionante soy un fan de transformes me encantan sus películas y el fanfic de ellas
Well, I posted a one star review earlier with some criticism on much of the bullshits and Sam being able to create technology that honestly requires way more intelligence than I believe he truly has. That shit nears level twelve intellect so I keep that point here. Beyond that, I followed the author's advice and kept reading. Not too bad considering everything else, there are enough good bits that can make you enjoy what's happening, but Sam's abilities really don't match the technological level of the cybertronians so there's still a lot of bullshit all the way to chapter 15. But if you can ignore all that it's readable, and you can get some enjoyment out of it. For the author, honestly, it would be better if you could build up his abilities from low to high gradually instead of coming up with all the things you did. Also, I don't think there is, but if so, you should add an AU warning at the description cause this can irk many readers, I included. That's all, good work and keep on doing your best, I hope your writing skills can grow as you publish more chapters.
Not badly written at all, just not really what I was expecting This isn’t transformers Sam but a Sam that’s has beyond Tony stark level intelligence near super human physical abilities and a slight healing factor. I feel like a certain degree of relying on tech and ai in a story makes it less fun for me personally so I stopped reading it but if that’s your thing than go ahead and give it a try.
Revelar Spoiler Heavy AI usage, at the point you usually read the same thing twice on every chapter, or every chapter a lot of words are wasted of Sam, Jarvis or Bee thanking each other for any reason. Probably some AI thing, but is still readable. As we don't have any good transformers fic, you can use this one to pass some time.
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Ate agora ótimo DESTINO EU AMO ISSO HUASHUASHUASHUASHUASHUASHUASHUASHUASHUAS Foda ter mínimo de palavras para publicar aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Revelar Spoiler
Seria legal ver ele viajar a outras realidades como Marvel MCU, ou algo do gênero. //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
AUTHOR if you do another Transformer novel why not.. novel name is TRANSFORMERS IN MASS EFFECT UNIVERSE they fight the reapers and help the heroes of Mass Effect. REINCARNATED MC GET THE ALLSPARK AND CREATED TRANSFORMERS WORLD AND EMPIRE,, we do need more Transformers novels in here.
This some really good shit man. Keep it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A história é boa, faltam ff sobre Transformers e está tem um grande potencial, espero que o autor não abandone, está demorando para postar.( autor, recomendo guardar alguns episódios na gaveta, para quando não tiver tempo de escrever)
Wish fulfilment and amateur writing. so many plot holes and so unrealistic moments even with all those gifts just made me bored with the story progress thats all for my review.
Boring and cringe 😅 [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
Revelar Spoiler This book has a lot of potential if written how it is being written currently. It will be much appreciated if you DO NOT DROP THIS
Author said he was rewriting it but this is just slightly better than the original. The Mc isn't changing anything from the cannon besides fixing bee's voice... Bro have a army of Iron man suits and never used it just because the author don't wanna change the cannon 👎
No lo abandones , me gusta mucho.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😆😆😆😆😆🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😁😁😁😁😁😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😁😁😁😁😁😁
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I haven't read it yet, I'm just going to start but seeing the title, the review and the comments (especially the good ones) we'll see how it goes but first 5 stars just because I'm good.
The author has done a great job of incorporating his ideas into the transformers world.
What is going on in this fanfic the writer keeps on rewriting and the readers keep on trolling, but Amma be honest to you whoever is reading the reviews, don't be tricked by them and just start reading this fanfic, I promise you will like it .
"...alex who loved transformers is reincarnated as sam witwicky in the transformers bayverse universe with a few wishes..."
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Srx ...... pourquoi réécriture [img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=In your face][img=In your face]
I'm tired of waiting to re-upload 3 times, the author will probably continue to do so, so good luck and good nerves to the readers[img=Cries]
Did you just rewrite perfection, WHY what went through your head to make you rewrite this!!
You should change the name of the FF to something like "IronMan reborn in Transformers" [img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived]
Me encanta la historia es entretenida Y me gusta el nuevo sam y como va llendo la historia es agradable y un poco emosionante soy un fan de transformes me encantan sus películas y el fanfic de ellas
Well, I posted a one star review earlier with some criticism on much of the bullshits and Sam being able to create technology that honestly requires way more intelligence than I believe he truly has. That shit nears level twelve intellect so I keep that point here. Beyond that, I followed the author's advice and kept reading. Not too bad considering everything else, there are enough good bits that can make you enjoy what's happening, but Sam's abilities really don't match the technological level of the cybertronians so there's still a lot of bullshit all the way to chapter 15. But if you can ignore all that it's readable, and you can get some enjoyment out of it. For the author, honestly, it would be better if you could build up his abilities from low to high gradually instead of coming up with all the things you did. Also, I don't think there is, but if so, you should add an AU warning at the description cause this can irk many readers, I included. That's all, good work and keep on doing your best, I hope your writing skills can grow as you publish more chapters.
Not badly written at all, just not really what I was expecting This isn’t transformers Sam but a Sam that’s has beyond Tony stark level intelligence near super human physical abilities and a slight healing factor. I feel like a certain degree of relying on tech and ai in a story makes it less fun for me personally so I stopped reading it but if that’s your thing than go ahead and give it a try.
Revelar Spoiler Heavy AI usage, at the point you usually read the same thing twice on every chapter, or every chapter a lot of words are wasted of Sam, Jarvis or Bee thanking each other for any reason. Probably some AI thing, but is still readable. As we don't have any good transformers fic, you can use this one to pass some time.
J'adore [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Ate agora ótimo DESTINO EU AMO ISSO HUASHUASHUASHUASHUASHUASHUASHUASHUASHUAS Foda ter mínimo de palavras para publicar aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Revelar Spoiler Seria legal ver ele viajar a outras realidades como Marvel MCU, ou algo do gênero. //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
AUTHOR if you do another Transformer novel why not.. novel name is TRANSFORMERS IN MASS EFFECT UNIVERSE they fight the reapers and help the heroes of Mass Effect. REINCARNATED MC GET THE ALLSPARK AND CREATED TRANSFORMERS WORLD AND EMPIRE,, we do need more Transformers novels in here.
have you quit this novel or taking a break?