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I've read a couple chapters. I'm waiting for more to release so I can binge it.
Author I really really hate Yuri... ...Yuri that 's not done properly Here's Your 5 Stars 😆 and YEP I'm Straight but Hell Yeah! Yuri for the Win!
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Well for the debut, it's pretty good, it has a pretty development potential, the fact that she is litterally a dimensional god/mephitas can be pretty good, it has a lot of potential to tap on it. For the romance i hope it will be Yuri, and she will not just take everyone and be fast and past to a new members, but really developt a romance even if it have a harem but not just 10/20 girls but truly have only one partner or a small group really dedicated, because we can know from the beginning she may end being immortal or live a truly long life. In the end, it has good potential, it take a new protagonist which is refreshing, just hoping the story is well written, and not being dropped at the end
Será que os autores não conseguem fazer uma história de protagonista feminina forte onde que não colocam Yuri, porque parece que para vcs uma protagonista feminina forte tem que comer buceta e coisas assim, eu não entendo e tão difícil fazer uma protagonista feminina que e icônica e não o mesmo clichê, todas as histórias de protagonista feminina e sobre um cara que reencarna como mulher e isso e uma das coisas que eu não entendo pra conseguirem fazer uma protagonista feminina eles colocam Yuri, e igual a polêmica da Bayonetta onde que colocaram uma arte dela com o marido dela e a filha e todo mundo taco hate porque pensaram que a Bayonetta era Lésbica sendo que ela e literalmente o símbolo de uma mulher forte e hetera de todos só pra constar eu sou gay tá então nem venha me chamar de homofóbico
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I think it's a really interesting idea I've read three chapters already and I can tell that it's got a lot of potential the thing I'm interested in is where her dimension spot is going to be located? I mean is it a specific place or can she just access it anywhere and what's the tech level of her place? interesting to wonder about can't wait to read about it I'm picturing a futuristic Anor-Londo/Leyndell cityscape in a dimension of snowfall and Cold like Skyrim
I'm writing this purely for Futa-Elsa's sake. AND NOW HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
My OCD is acting up a bit, but no worries. While we're at it, I hope you can enjoy my story. I love reading Marvel fanfiction, especially ones with mutants resisting or strong female leads. Unfortunately, in many of the novels I come across, the female characters often end up in toxic or abusive relationships, which can be really frustrating to read.
nice one i like it so far i hope you dont Stop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I really like it so far [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
i like i hope you don't drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I've read a couple chapters. I'm waiting for more to release so I can binge it.
Author I really really hate Yuri... ...Yuri that 's not done properly Here's Your 5 Stars 😆 and YEP I'm Straight but Hell Yeah! Yuri for the Win!
[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Well for the debut, it's pretty good, it has a pretty development potential, the fact that she is litterally a dimensional god/mephitas can be pretty good, it has a lot of potential to tap on it. For the romance i hope it will be Yuri, and she will not just take everyone and be fast and past to a new members, but really developt a romance even if it have a harem but not just 10/20 girls but truly have only one partner or a small group really dedicated, because we can know from the beginning she may end being immortal or live a truly long life. In the end, it has good potential, it take a new protagonist which is refreshing, just hoping the story is well written, and not being dropped at the end
Será que os autores não conseguem fazer uma história de protagonista feminina forte onde que não colocam Yuri, porque parece que para vcs uma protagonista feminina forte tem que comer buceta e coisas assim, eu não entendo e tão difícil fazer uma protagonista feminina que e icônica e não o mesmo clichê, todas as histórias de protagonista feminina e sobre um cara que reencarna como mulher e isso e uma das coisas que eu não entendo pra conseguirem fazer uma protagonista feminina eles colocam Yuri, e igual a polêmica da Bayonetta onde que colocaram uma arte dela com o marido dela e a filha e todo mundo taco hate porque pensaram que a Bayonetta era Lésbica sendo que ela e literalmente o símbolo de uma mulher forte e hetera de todos só pra constar eu sou gay tá então nem venha me chamar de homofóbico
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I think it's a really interesting idea I've read three chapters already and I can tell that it's got a lot of potential the thing I'm interested in is where her dimension spot is going to be located? I mean is it a specific place or can she just access it anywhere and what's the tech level of her place? interesting to wonder about can't wait to read about it I'm picturing a futuristic Anor-Londo/Leyndell cityscape in a dimension of snowfall and Cold like Skyrim
I'm writing this purely for Futa-Elsa's sake. AND NOW HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
My OCD is acting up a bit, but no worries. While we're at it, I hope you can enjoy my story. I love reading Marvel fanfiction, especially ones with mutants resisting or strong female leads. Unfortunately, in many of the novels I come across, the female characters often end up in toxic or abusive relationships, which can be really frustrating to read.
nice one i like it so far i hope you dont Stop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]