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So far so good. Author does a great job describing the conflicts within the character and at least for me has me cheering her on to beat the system . Give it try.
Greedy Family, want for love. Same for the inspiration to keep writing. I hope you are always inspired.
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First few chapters are off to a great start; well-executed take on a familiar premise
Funny story, the fact that the System just literally do almost everything is kinda irritating and funny at the same time. Adelaide though shocked me, I thought she'd be like those Kind girl. it's as if she's also a reincarnator
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Revelar Spoiler So far so good. Author does a great job describing the conflicts within the character and at least for me has me cheering her on to beat the system . Give it try.
Greedy Family, want for love. Same for the inspiration to keep writing. I hope you are always inspired.
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First few chapters are off to a great start; well-executed take on a familiar premise
Funny story, the fact that the System just literally do almost everything is kinda irritating and funny at the same time. Adelaide though shocked me, I thought she'd be like those Kind girl. it's as if she's also a reincarnator
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