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- Design de Personagens
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First of all, I have to say this story is incredibly well written. The grammar is amazing and there are barely any noticeable mistakes from what I read. Updates, there is nothing I can really say apart from taking it slow, so as not to burn yourself out, you have all the time in the world to plan and write. And the wishes the MC gained are perfect, you struck a wonderful balance between making the MC versatile, and powerful but not too powerful to the point where he can just walk over any opposition with ease, he still has to work and train his abilities, and he can still get offed if he's not careful. All in all, I'm very interested in the direction you're going with this story, keep up the good work!
First of all, I have to say this story is incredibly well written. The grammar is amazing and there are barely any noticeable mistakes from what I read. Updates, there is nothing I can really say apart from taking it slow, so as not to burn yourself out, you have all the time in the world to plan and write. And the wishes the MC gained are perfect, you struck a wonderful balance between making the MC versatile, and powerful but not too powerful to the point where he can just walk over any opposition with ease, he still has to work and train his abilities, and he can still get offed if he's not careful. All in all, I'm very interested in the direction you're going with this story, keep up the good work!