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it is pure stat comparison between chapters not worth reading pure grind emotionless bot mc no friends or no relationships mc grinds and thats it
It's good story after leaving some things behind,you guys give this story chance,it's way better then letting 5 year old killing Hokage and become a sage or something.this one have some story structure.
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original title is Naruto: My Progress in Konoha mtl514 - war almost almost almost over. still can't use MS without going blind, can't use it openly. maybe in 100 more chapters mc will return to konoha.
Reads easily. But the pace is slow, which I suppose will be a good thing in the long run when the story is finished and there's plenty to read. The only problem is that the MC is too self-obsessed for my taste, and is already starting to mention the whole transcending-the-world fanfic multiverse bullshit.
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This is without a doubt the best naruto story I've read so far (I read up to chapter 473 in the rough), most naruto stories violate the original scenario (power system) this story doesn't, besides, it almost seems like a story " own" because the mc basically hasn't met almost anyone from the canon and that makes you curious about what will happen when they meet... the writer is good too
The story was quite good at the beginning but the translation slowly got worse and worse and has now reached a point where its basically unreadable.
Boring and very dragging, the grind can be fun to read if it is better written but its felt like a chore reading it and MC chakra is way to nerf.
2/5/5/1/3 The quality translator showed previously is gone. In later chapter specially after 100 chapters the quality of translation has become mediocre. Its so bad you might actually confuse it with MTL. The update stability is good. Always a chapter a day from time to time bonus chapters. The story development is also to my liking. It is slow paced. "No nonsense 10 year old slapping kaguya" type bullshit. Character design is non existence. We only know slim but firm body with toned muscles. Black onyx eyes and black hair(typical uchiha) World background is also quite nice. Even its not perfect or anything it isn't bad either. All in all a good read,the story always remains fresh but translation is garbage. So up to you if you wanna read it.
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NEVER GIVE UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I liked the concept the story is translated well enough for me. It stays true to its name this story is about a person who is grinding and the only thing I don't like is the"shit talent" concept in a uchiha body of all the bodies it genetically is not possible
Oh, God, what's wrong with this fic... Mc is so pathetic. The talent of the Uchiha body he possesses now is outright waste (like seriously? There is also another fic with the same concept with simulation shit, though that one is still readable) He got a grind system and despite that, his talent absolutely sucks! Come on, he's Uchiha, for fk sake. They are Warring Era's top level Shinobi Clan! Mc is 8 and his chakra got completely used up after doing 4 attempts in Clone Technique, which he still failed in the end. Tch... Update Stability—5
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the writing is very boring, not much happens but a lot of text is written. {needs more text, needs more text, needs more text, needs more text, needs more text, }
Is this the same story as Uchiha with proficiency system. Guess you both started translating the story at the same time
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If you want to publish a "polished" MTL story, the least you can do is include the RAW story name in the story synopsis.
trust me when i say this this story stretches tf out and when they say grind they mean it, grinding up skills is 70 percent of the story. Quite literally some chapters is just planning how to grind, doesnt get much better but does get worse.
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waste of time - regrettable 😒 read upto 27 chapters - awakened his sharingan after boreing us for to long. his sates like this physic- 6( after awakening) - 7 spirit. - from 7 to 9 🙄 chakra - 2510 to 2570 . after so many chapters and many months of mindless hardwork later. ( without any other development of story) so u can imagine how he will be fighting in next 200 chapters with some mob character ,while using every braincells of author 😮💨
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
it is pure stat comparison between chapters not worth reading pure grind emotionless bot mc no friends or no relationships mc grinds and thats it
It's good story after leaving some things behind,you guys give this story chance,it's way better then letting 5 year old killing Hokage and become a sage or something.this one have some story structure.
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Grind machine ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ --------------------------------------------------------------
original title is Naruto: My Progress in Konoha mtl514 - war almost almost almost over. still can't use MS without going blind, can't use it openly. maybe in 100 more chapters mc will return to konoha.
Reads easily. But the pace is slow, which I suppose will be a good thing in the long run when the story is finished and there's plenty to read. The only problem is that the MC is too self-obsessed for my taste, and is already starting to mention the whole transcending-the-world fanfic multiverse bullshit.
Good, please continue..........................................Good, please continue..........................................Good, please continue..........................................Good, please continue..........................................
This is without a doubt the best naruto story I've read so far (I read up to chapter 473 in the rough), most naruto stories violate the original scenario (power system) this story doesn't, besides, it almost seems like a story " own" because the mc basically hasn't met almost anyone from the canon and that makes you curious about what will happen when they meet... the writer is good too
The story was quite good at the beginning but the translation slowly got worse and worse and has now reached a point where its basically unreadable.
Boring and very dragging, the grind can be fun to read if it is better written but its felt like a chore reading it and MC chakra is way to nerf.
2/5/5/1/3 The quality translator showed previously is gone. In later chapter specially after 100 chapters the quality of translation has become mediocre. Its so bad you might actually confuse it with MTL. The update stability is good. Always a chapter a day from time to time bonus chapters. The story development is also to my liking. It is slow paced. "No nonsense 10 year old slapping kaguya" type bullshit. Character design is non existence. We only know slim but firm body with toned muscles. Black onyx eyes and black hair(typical uchiha) World background is also quite nice. Even its not perfect or anything it isn't bad either. All in all a good read,the story always remains fresh but translation is garbage. So up to you if you wanna read it.
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..............Good Lucky.......please...............carry on............................................................... ....................Good Lucky.......please...............carry on............................................................... ......
Sigue asi espero mas capítulos y algo de harén pequeño máximo 3.........fjfjfjfjejejwjejeiejejwkwiejejejjdejejejjejeueie8erurj4urjrjrjrjrjejrjrjrjrjrjru
NEVER GIVE UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I liked the concept the story is translated well enough for me. It stays true to its name this story is about a person who is grinding and the only thing I don't like is the"shit talent" concept in a uchiha body of all the bodies it genetically is not possible
Oh, God, what's wrong with this fic... Mc is so pathetic. The talent of the Uchiha body he possesses now is outright waste (like seriously? There is also another fic with the same concept with simulation shit, though that one is still readable) He got a grind system and despite that, his talent absolutely sucks! Come on, he's Uchiha, for fk sake. They are Warring Era's top level Shinobi Clan! Mc is 8 and his chakra got completely used up after doing 4 attempts in Clone Technique, which he still failed in the end. Tch... Update Stability—5
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the writing is very boring, not much happens but a lot of text is written. {needs more text, needs more text, needs more text, needs more text, needs more text, }
Is this the same story as Uchiha with proficiency system. Guess you both started translating the story at the same time
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If you want to publish a "polished" MTL story, the least you can do is include the RAW story name in the story synopsis.
trust me when i say this this story stretches tf out and when they say grind they mean it, grinding up skills is 70 percent of the story. Quite literally some chapters is just planning how to grind, doesnt get much better but does get worse.
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waste of time - regrettable 😒 read upto 27 chapters - awakened his sharingan after boreing us for to long. his sates like this physic- 6( after awakening) - 7 spirit. - from 7 to 9 🙄 chakra - 2510 to 2570 . after so many chapters and many months of mindless hardwork later. ( without any other development of story) so u can imagine how he will be fighting in next 200 chapters with some mob character ,while using every braincells of author 😮💨