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It's very good and very entertaining, honestly I only commented because it caught my attention that the story is so criticized when it is something so good, I just want to tell you that everything is excellent, I look forward to more.
The story is good the mc is good the characters are not enough 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💖💖💖👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I don't care if a fanfic is ai or not, but this is trash. Why can't you use a single braincell to make sense of the story? Not only that the author is playing a trivia game with us, why can't you just say what's going on. You are your own worst enemy at this point and let's not forget, there's no chance he will finish this fanfic. This is going to be dropped at any moment now.
boring not what i thought it would be and then add in the thing that very rarely makes a novel better (multiverse travel) and this is just not worth it for me.
the story is good just need more world building and more chapters keep up the good work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
you're not an author. You're just mimicking one with this Ai generated shit and I hate those................................................
Pretty good so far, A bit slow and that's exactly why it's so good Street level fights are very interesting actually and you've shown it pretty well here.. Go for unique abstract templates maybe some game characters if possible He needs to be OP over a period of time but in a very unconventional way.. Not straight up fire fist or ryujin jakka
always improving constantly getting better chapter after chapter i got hooked after chapter 6 i highly recommend giving it a try (no romance so far ch33 which is good)
So far so good I'm still enjoy this fanfic 💯. Just hope you expend the world building more............................. ...... ...... ..... ............ ......
i like it................................................................................................................................................
Interesting concept and story, MC has suffered but not broken yet. lets see what this has to offer. For now, I am satisfied with what this story started. This has potential.
Revelar Spoiler
I love stories that have peter parker in it where he is the main character and will have a harem because he is my favorite character in marvel and my one and only friendly neighborhood spider-man in my eyes and opinion.
It's very good and very entertaining, honestly I only commented because it caught my attention that the story is so criticized when it is something so good, I just want to tell you that everything is excellent, I look forward to more.
The story is good the mc is good the characters are not enough 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💖💖💖👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I don't care if a fanfic is ai or not, but this is trash. Why can't you use a single braincell to make sense of the story? Not only that the author is playing a trivia game with us, why can't you just say what's going on. You are your own worst enemy at this point and let's not forget, there's no chance he will finish this fanfic. This is going to be dropped at any moment now.
boring not what i thought it would be and then add in the thing that very rarely makes a novel better (multiverse travel) and this is just not worth it for me.
the story is good just need more world building and more chapters keep up the good work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
you're not an author. You're just mimicking one with this Ai generated shit and I hate those................................................
Pretty good so far, A bit slow and that's exactly why it's so good Street level fights are very interesting actually and you've shown it pretty well here.. Go for unique abstract templates maybe some game characters if possible He needs to be OP over a period of time but in a very unconventional way.. Not straight up fire fist or ryujin jakka
always improving constantly getting better chapter after chapter i got hooked after chapter 6 i highly recommend giving it a try (no romance so far ch33 which is good)
So far so good I'm still enjoy this fanfic 💯. Just hope you expend the world building more............................. ...... ...... ..... ............ ......
i like it................................................................................................................................................
Interesting concept and story, MC has suffered but not broken yet. lets see what this has to offer. For now, I am satisfied with what this story started. This has potential.
Revelar Spoiler I love stories that have peter parker in it where he is the main character and will have a harem because he is my favorite character in marvel and my one and only friendly neighborhood spider-man in my eyes and opinion.
nice. .