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loving this novel, not overly fast paced or slow paced. The pov switches aren't forced, and although it doesnt have a lot of chapters now im sure the upcoming ones will be even better!
Ok so a few complaints one the coming of age ceremony he goes through his sisters and others do as well I know a lot of people asked about that. The author answered it but then deleted his comment if you click on the author then go to activity you can see it. Two is the author argues with people when they are right and refuses to acknowledge they are and will only accept his own point so if you comment be aware of the likely backlash you will get. Three, the MC likes whores or women who have lots of sex we can see that in I believe it was the second or third chapter for the ceremony. Those were the three that put me off if I read more I’m sure I’d have plenty more but when your at the beginning of a novel and already have three things that put you off it my philosophy is to drop it and maybe comment so others can know what to expect if they chose to read it or help those who also don’t like the same stuff avoid the book.
Mr. Author, I have a question and I hope you can answer it. It concerns the coming-of-age ceremony. Did the hero's sisters perform the same ritual, I mean the ritual of getting rid of virginity? Did they bring in several men and let the girls choose who to sleep with? If true, all of his sisters and future harem are not virgins. I hope he gets at least one girl's virginity.
Not a real review, Just wanted to ask if there will be NTR or Yuri before I start reading
Hello, it's Steel here and it's my debut harem novel. Please if you have any questions or complaints, drop them here and I'm sure to respond to them. These are the additional tags: Yuri - No NTR - Yes (the Mothers are wives of Eros so yeah) Cultivation - Yes Netorare - No Antihero - Yes Cunning MC - Yes The novel follows Aeric who is reborn in a fantasy world were romance, desire and powers are entwined. He enters the world with the Celestial Depravity System with is basically a cheat code that gives him a unique Class and Skill, with the Skill, he can claim the abilities of women by inseminating them with his royal seed. But shooting your load into a woman has proven to cause more problems than it has solved, and that also remains the case for Aeric in the world of Erothyria.
loving this novel, not overly fast paced or slow paced. The pov switches aren't forced, and although it doesnt have a lot of chapters now im sure the upcoming ones will be even better!
Ok so a few complaints one the coming of age ceremony he goes through his sisters and others do as well I know a lot of people asked about that. The author answered it but then deleted his comment if you click on the author then go to activity you can see it. Two is the author argues with people when they are right and refuses to acknowledge they are and will only accept his own point so if you comment be aware of the likely backlash you will get. Three, the MC likes whores or women who have lots of sex we can see that in I believe it was the second or third chapter for the ceremony. Those were the three that put me off if I read more I’m sure I’d have plenty more but when your at the beginning of a novel and already have three things that put you off it my philosophy is to drop it and maybe comment so others can know what to expect if they chose to read it or help those who also don’t like the same stuff avoid the book.
Mr. Author, I have a question and I hope you can answer it. It concerns the coming-of-age ceremony. Did the hero's sisters perform the same ritual, I mean the ritual of getting rid of virginity? Did they bring in several men and let the girls choose who to sleep with? If true, all of his sisters and future harem are not virgins. I hope he gets at least one girl's virginity.
Not a real review, Just wanted to ask if there will be NTR or Yuri before I start reading
Hello, it's Steel here and it's my debut harem novel. Please if you have any questions or complaints, drop them here and I'm sure to respond to them. These are the additional tags: Yuri - No NTR - Yes (the Mothers are wives of Eros so yeah) Cultivation - Yes Netorare - No Antihero - Yes Cunning MC - Yes The novel follows Aeric who is reborn in a fantasy world were romance, desire and powers are entwined. He enters the world with the Celestial Depravity System with is basically a cheat code that gives him a unique Class and Skill, with the Skill, he can claim the abilities of women by inseminating them with his royal seed. But shooting your load into a woman has proven to cause more problems than it has solved, and that also remains the case for Aeric in the world of Erothyria.