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the beginning is a bit boring, the mc kind of became a daenerys licker because of a promise against someone he wanted to fight, but as the plot moves forward, it became more and more fun to read, keep up the good work author
Story is interesting. It has potential to become one of best game of throne fics ever. He is not simp for Daenerys. It was always his goal to fight the strongest warrior and after the death of Drogo whom he want to fight, following Daenerys is good choice as she will be in many conflicts throughout her journey which means many battle which means many strong warriors to fight.
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It started very well but what a pity that the Mc is a simple dog [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
he simps for dany and that is fine but only if their partnership was equal and he has no ambition but being a dog
The story may seem boring at first since it progresses very slowly and is only training and the sad life of the protagonist while he is a child, only later when he is older is when the story begins to progress, it is also not said if the protagonist has magical powers or is it just training.
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The story had so much potential and quality was good sadly mc became a simp for dany just like Jon. He became a dog for dany so leaving this story rn and good luck author for your future journey <3 .
Very well written, interesting character but in some moments it is written stupidly but I am still waiting for more ........................
Don't waste your time on this fic like me. Almost 20 chapters of training, then some slice of life out of the blue, then at last mc being led by the nose by Daenerys. Trust me I am not am edegelord but I can distinguish between being in love and being a simp. The mc automatically forgot his goal in latest chapter just after meeting Daenerys for a few days. 27 chapters of pure disappointment.
This story is great so far. I tried finding the Patreon and it brought me to an account that didn't have this story in it.
Good read overall he becomes kinda a servant to Daenerys at chap 28 but at about chap 32 or 34 that’s changes kinda when they become a thing ig they haven’t made it official real they just sleep together but if he does marry her he would technically be a king
Revelar Spoiler the beginning is a bit boring, the mc kind of became a daenerys licker because of a promise against someone he wanted to fight, but as the plot moves forward, it became more and more fun to read, keep up the good work author
Story is interesting. It has potential to become one of best game of throne fics ever. He is not simp for Daenerys. It was always his goal to fight the strongest warrior and after the death of Drogo whom he want to fight, following Daenerys is good choice as she will be in many conflicts throughout her journey which means many battle which means many strong warriors to fight.
Revelar Spoiler It started very well but what a pity that the Mc is a simple dog [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
he simps for dany and that is fine but only if their partnership was equal and he has no ambition but being a dog
The story may seem boring at first since it progresses very slowly and is only training and the sad life of the protagonist while he is a child, only later when he is older is when the story begins to progress, it is also not said if the protagonist has magical powers or is it just training.
Revelar Spoiler The story had so much potential and quality was good sadly mc became a simp for dany just like Jon. He became a dog for dany so leaving this story rn and good luck author for your future journey <3 .
Very well written, interesting character but in some moments it is written stupidly but I am still waiting for more ........................
Don't waste your time on this fic like me. Almost 20 chapters of training, then some slice of life out of the blue, then at last mc being led by the nose by Daenerys. Trust me I am not am edegelord but I can distinguish between being in love and being a simp. The mc automatically forgot his goal in latest chapter just after meeting Daenerys for a few days. 27 chapters of pure disappointment.
This story is great so far. I tried finding the Patreon and it brought me to an account that didn't have this story in it.
Good read overall he becomes kinda a servant to Daenerys at chap 28 but at about chap 32 or 34 that’s changes kinda when they become a thing ig they haven’t made it official real they just sleep together but if he does marry her he would technically be a king
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