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So far I have read till 80 chapters and what I can tell is that while the story does take place in Marvel the focus on marvel universe is very less. The focus seems to be more on showing the MC's capabilities as a businessman who uses psychology and stock trading to create a business. The fight scene of MC had nice buildup like he is about to do some insane stuff but the fight ended in 1 sentence where as when the MC is building his business it goes on for multiple chapters
pretty interesting story but dropped it after the first romantic encounter came in. I could stand the Chinese trope of the mc enjoying smoking all the time (all the time!) but the moment he decides to date a girl, she immediately becomes his property and only exists for the mc?? it seems braindead and wrong and I ain't no feminist. just a warning if that ain't for you
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Es una buena historia que te va a capturar con el desarrolló del como unos pequeños cambios son para mejor y eso se muestra aqui. Ademas de que sea un Superman que esta oculta es genial, te deja con la intriga de cuando dejara de ocultar sus poderes a todo el equipo y del como reaccionaran el mismo mundo al verlo como casi un dios entre mortales
you will understand my note when you read chapter 13-14. This work went downhill so fast haha
it's a good novel, even if the mc is superman op, he still does thing kinda normally and takes time for other to do their part so they have at least some screening time not just about mc flexing, the chinese translation part i kinda forgot about it, this novel is not the same with other chinese tl one, usually other mc will go xia that or xia this, eagle country suck, nationalist mc, there's barely any here, maybe about some chinese food here and there banter with jessica but that's it idk about future chap.
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Great fanfic, well written and entertaining. Only improvement it could have would be to explore his powers more. Mc never thinks or talks about it as if he couldn’t care less about it, leaving the readers clueless.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. 🙄🧐🤔😁🤪
Nice translation... 5/5. You did really good job. I hope you keep this up. Good luck friend. Dont give up[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'm still waiting for the MC to use his Superman powers. I'm chapter 82 and 99% of this story have nothing to do with Superman power. It's like the author is using Superman just to get more readers
This is an excellent Marvel fanfic and the translator is doing an excellent job. Although I still found some mistakes here and there, they aren't many and they don't affect the flow of the story so I would still give this five stars. The only thing I find (currently at chapter 80) disappointing is the fact the translator has dropped his chapter release rate... Previously he released five+ a day and now he only release 2~😩
it feels like I'm reading about a Robot and not a whos just been thrust into a New World, and for him everything is Meh. it has one of those Robot Diseases that the MCs in Webnovel got.
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It started out laughable but then got better. Then it started throwing in a few China1 and that was mildly annoying. The MC is going through the MCU, a fairly common trope. The story is interesting enough to keep this in library.
Honestly, it's one of the best superman fics out there. Doesn't get your blood boiling through action just yet, but it'll come soon; I can feel it. It's for a chill read who likes logical thinking and actions.The main character, despite being superman, retains his humanity. I know it might seem superfluous but living life like a human has its charms, even if you're immortal.The relationship was a bit abrupt initially, but was executed pretty well. You can see the development and it doesn't feel that much forced and they do kinda fit well together.For the world background of the character, it's actually pretty reasonable. The psychology background is pretty neat, and uses it reasonably. Though, I think it's a bit fast to be in a high positiob as he switched jobs, the justification can barely suffice I guess. Nothing can't be perfect.All in all, I'm super hyped to see more chapters of this fic! Kudos to you translator! Keep it up.
the translation quality is at the top from what I've seen from webnovel 5 stars story development is top gives the mc a plan and the mc sticks to it something that's rarely seen in fanfics 5 stars character design he's given us a good base for mc but there still some missing i.e. what does he look like before powers activated and after, in the police force, as a gambler and as a shield agent we also haven't don't know how big he is unless i missed it does he kryptonian powers or supermans genetics they may be similar but there are differences as supermans is genetically, physically above most if not all krytonians 4 stars, updating stability is great as it may not be every day but there is always more than one chapter every upload which i prefer than just one chapter a day, world background is great there was a major jump from him being in the police force to shield agent and all in between but i feel like we missed something as there could have been more like how does a superpowered being handle police in the USA as he doesnt have the worry and trauma all other police members face, how would he deal with discrimination as a chinese American and how do his fellow police members feel about him leaving upruptly to him now being a billionaire
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Okay here's a honest review from me. first, this is Chinese fanfic. Second, the reason why i give 5 stars are because many people don't read 1 star reviews. Third, MC is stupid sometimes(most of times) and it's going downhill in later chapters.
The translation is very good, despite the "Chineseness", I really liked the work, I'm waiting for the next chapters. The main character is not an idiot, he doesn't look mega super imbalanced (despite his skills), he doesn't pretend to be a weakling, it's nice to read. Respect to the translator!!
great translation! The downside of all translations from Chinese is that MC is not that smart himself and to make him look smart the authors as usual making everyone else dumb to make MC look smart. The novel in itself was interesting to read until chapter 30-40, after which it started resembling all other fanfictions written by authors from that part of earth
Unique and different take on a often used and favorite go to fan fiction of isakei as Superman in marvel. The author does a fantastic job of taking a never really explored path of a kryptonians powers. He keeps the story grounded and entertaining without relying on throwing on the tights within 4 chapters and punching Odin in the face. I highly recommend checking this one out for those of you looking for something to loose yourself into with the world this author has built.
One of the best translation fanfics I have read. Not sure about the complaints of Chinese stuff but there is none, the closes thing you will find is the MC being Chinese-American. Other than that, it reminds me strongly of Detective in Marvel World (or another world, whatever it was called). Except this MC is powerful, otherwise they are similar. Almos like someone read the other story and got tired of the author artificially holding back the MC and decided to do it another way. The MC remains low key in terms of his power, ie do stuff but hide how he did them. He is involved in his own life, not really looking to become the typical hero. Overall, if you like powerful and low key its a good read.
Read to chapter 17 and dropped it as the characters weren’t really fleshed out personality wise and things just felt brushed over and rushed like he meets a girl at a bar, goes to dinner then encouraged by her sister to go home with MC that night and after doing the horizontal tango he essentially declares she’s his girlfriend and she meekly accepts it like that reasonable but given who she is that just doesn’t mesh well with the character at all in my opinion and it just feel like someone trying to make superman/marvel a Wuxia novel. Overall it’s a mediocre story in my opinion but could have potential if the characters and world were better fleshed out and not have so much wuxia elements.
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Revelar Spoiler So far I have read till 80 chapters and what I can tell is that while the story does take place in Marvel the focus on marvel universe is very less. The focus seems to be more on showing the MC's capabilities as a businessman who uses psychology and stock trading to create a business. The fight scene of MC had nice buildup like he is about to do some insane stuff but the fight ended in 1 sentence where as when the MC is building his business it goes on for multiple chapters
pretty interesting story but dropped it after the first romantic encounter came in. I could stand the Chinese trope of the mc enjoying smoking all the time (all the time!) but the moment he decides to date a girl, she immediately becomes his property and only exists for the mc?? it seems braindead and wrong and I ain't no feminist. just a warning if that ain't for you
Revelar Spoiler Es una buena historia que te va a capturar con el desarrolló del como unos pequeños cambios son para mejor y eso se muestra aqui. Ademas de que sea un Superman que esta oculta es genial, te deja con la intriga de cuando dejara de ocultar sus poderes a todo el equipo y del como reaccionaran el mismo mundo al verlo como casi un dios entre mortales
you will understand my note when you read chapter 13-14. This work went downhill so fast haha
it's a good novel, even if the mc is superman op, he still does thing kinda normally and takes time for other to do their part so they have at least some screening time not just about mc flexing, the chinese translation part i kinda forgot about it, this novel is not the same with other chinese tl one, usually other mc will go xia that or xia this, eagle country suck, nationalist mc, there's barely any here, maybe about some chinese food here and there banter with jessica but that's it idk about future chap.
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Great fanfic, well written and entertaining. Only improvement it could have would be to explore his powers more. Mc never thinks or talks about it as if he couldn’t care less about it, leaving the readers clueless.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. 🙄🧐🤔😁🤪
Nice translation... 5/5. You did really good job. I hope you keep this up. Good luck friend. Dont give up[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'm still waiting for the MC to use his Superman powers. I'm chapter 82 and 99% of this story have nothing to do with Superman power. It's like the author is using Superman just to get more readers
This is an excellent Marvel fanfic and the translator is doing an excellent job. Although I still found some mistakes here and there, they aren't many and they don't affect the flow of the story so I would still give this five stars. The only thing I find (currently at chapter 80) disappointing is the fact the translator has dropped his chapter release rate... Previously he released five+ a day and now he only release 2~😩
it feels like I'm reading about a Robot and not a whos just been thrust into a New World, and for him everything is Meh. it has one of those Robot Diseases that the MCs in Webnovel got.
ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
It started out laughable but then got better. Then it started throwing in a few China1 and that was mildly annoying. The MC is going through the MCU, a fairly common trope. The story is interesting enough to keep this in library.
Honestly, it's one of the best superman fics out there. Doesn't get your blood boiling through action just yet, but it'll come soon; I can feel it. It's for a chill read who likes logical thinking and actions.The main character, despite being superman, retains his humanity. I know it might seem superfluous but living life like a human has its charms, even if you're immortal.The relationship was a bit abrupt initially, but was executed pretty well. You can see the development and it doesn't feel that much forced and they do kinda fit well together.For the world background of the character, it's actually pretty reasonable. The psychology background is pretty neat, and uses it reasonably. Though, I think it's a bit fast to be in a high positiob as he switched jobs, the justification can barely suffice I guess. Nothing can't be perfect.All in all, I'm super hyped to see more chapters of this fic! Kudos to you translator! Keep it up.
the translation quality is at the top from what I've seen from webnovel 5 stars story development is top gives the mc a plan and the mc sticks to it something that's rarely seen in fanfics 5 stars character design he's given us a good base for mc but there still some missing i.e. what does he look like before powers activated and after, in the police force, as a gambler and as a shield agent we also haven't don't know how big he is unless i missed it does he kryptonian powers or supermans genetics they may be similar but there are differences as supermans is genetically, physically above most if not all krytonians 4 stars, updating stability is great as it may not be every day but there is always more than one chapter every upload which i prefer than just one chapter a day, world background is great there was a major jump from him being in the police force to shield agent and all in between but i feel like we missed something as there could have been more like how does a superpowered being handle police in the USA as he doesnt have the worry and trauma all other police members face, how would he deal with discrimination as a chinese American and how do his fellow police members feel about him leaving upruptly to him now being a billionaire
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Okay here's a honest review from me. first, this is Chinese fanfic. Second, the reason why i give 5 stars are because many people don't read 1 star reviews. Third, MC is stupid sometimes(most of times) and it's going downhill in later chapters.
The translation is very good, despite the "Chineseness", I really liked the work, I'm waiting for the next chapters. The main character is not an idiot, he doesn't look mega super imbalanced (despite his skills), he doesn't pretend to be a weakling, it's nice to read. Respect to the translator!!
great translation! The downside of all translations from Chinese is that MC is not that smart himself and to make him look smart the authors as usual making everyone else dumb to make MC look smart. The novel in itself was interesting to read until chapter 30-40, after which it started resembling all other fanfictions written by authors from that part of earth
Unique and different take on a often used and favorite go to fan fiction of isakei as Superman in marvel. The author does a fantastic job of taking a never really explored path of a kryptonians powers. He keeps the story grounded and entertaining without relying on throwing on the tights within 4 chapters and punching Odin in the face. I highly recommend checking this one out for those of you looking for something to loose yourself into with the world this author has built.
One of the best translation fanfics I have read. Not sure about the complaints of Chinese stuff but there is none, the closes thing you will find is the MC being Chinese-American. Other than that, it reminds me strongly of Detective in Marvel World (or another world, whatever it was called). Except this MC is powerful, otherwise they are similar. Almos like someone read the other story and got tired of the author artificially holding back the MC and decided to do it another way. The MC remains low key in terms of his power, ie do stuff but hide how he did them. He is involved in his own life, not really looking to become the typical hero. Overall, if you like powerful and low key its a good read.
Read to chapter 17 and dropped it as the characters weren’t really fleshed out personality wise and things just felt brushed over and rushed like he meets a girl at a bar, goes to dinner then encouraged by her sister to go home with MC that night and after doing the horizontal tango he essentially declares she’s his girlfriend and she meekly accepts it like that reasonable but given who she is that just doesn’t mesh well with the character at all in my opinion and it just feel like someone trying to make superman/marvel a Wuxia novel. Overall it’s a mediocre story in my opinion but could have potential if the characters and world were better fleshed out and not have so much wuxia elements.