Reviews of Apocalypse: I have a supermarket stocked with supplies by brown crow - Webnovel

It's my dream apocalyptic theme. Owning either a store or rental apartment... So imagine my disappointment when the Female lead goes from okay ish to full out idiot. She's shallow,and overly generous (with guys she thinks are cute.) Also somehow is a Mary Sue with a harem??? Like is it necessary to have so many admirers?? ALSO one male lead is.just flat out weird (He eats bowls of sugar... no joke here.) Besides that the story is on adrenaline, moving fast with thems crushed together. Maybe if slowed down it would be better.

I read a few chapters there’s no real character development idk who the MC actually is and the plot is more scattered then scarecrow brains. I’m lost in translation but not only that. Confused. I love the concept of the story super market. It could have been amazing with more fleshing out and atleast trying to make things just a bit more realistic. It kinda gives you a bunch of character types where used to but with no plot or anything. Too much too fast babyyyyyy my brain crashed out reading dizzz lol