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If you'd read enough web novels, most of the plot would most likely be predictable (at least for me in the published 84 chapters so far). There is a primary misunderstanding between the leads but I feel like given their characters, it doesn't make it unreasonable that they haven't resolved it yet with a conversation/confession. Grammar is good; easy to read. Closer editing could help the story have less confusion (example - FL asks ML about a possible note he sent her but FL then later says there was no note). Wishing author the best!
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Interesting story, but if I am not sure about my marriage status, I would ask at the registry office to clear my doubts.
Scary title but I'm gonna dive in with an open mind wish me luck!! seems interesting so I'm leaving my first review!
Nice concept. I have seen brother and uncle of the bf but Father is new. Grammar needs to get better but overall not bad.
It's an okay story but there were quite a few grammatical errors throughout that kept diverting my attention away. It was also very heavy on some hard topics/subjects that I wasn't prepared for. It did make me emotional; but more angry than happy or sad. I felt like it lacked balance as I got more stressed the more I read (not a good feeling for me) & I didn't feel like there were enough moments to laugh &/or cry in between the angry moments.
so far I like this book, i hope it continues to be great. i recommended this book.
Great story, I love the main characters. Though I would love them to live happily ever after, I know there are still many layers before that.
If you'd read enough web novels, most of the plot would most likely be predictable (at least for me in the published 84 chapters so far). There is a primary misunderstanding between the leads but I feel like given their characters, it doesn't make it unreasonable that they haven't resolved it yet with a conversation/confession. Grammar is good; easy to read. Closer editing could help the story have less confusion (example - FL asks ML about a possible note he sent her but FL then later says there was no note). Wishing author the best!
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Interesting story, but if I am not sure about my marriage status, I would ask at the registry office to clear my doubts.
Scary title but I'm gonna dive in with an open mind wish me luck!! seems interesting so I'm leaving my first review!
Nice concept. I have seen brother and uncle of the bf but Father is new. Grammar needs to get better but overall not bad.
It's an okay story but there were quite a few grammatical errors throughout that kept diverting my attention away. It was also very heavy on some hard topics/subjects that I wasn't prepared for. It did make me emotional; but more angry than happy or sad. I felt like it lacked balance as I got more stressed the more I read (not a good feeling for me) & I didn't feel like there were enough moments to laugh &/or cry in between the angry moments.
so far I like this book, i hope it continues to be great. i recommended this book.
Great story, I love the main characters. Though I would love them to live happily ever after, I know there are still many layers before that.