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I like the story obviously its not perfect but it is a good story to help pass some time. dddasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasd
This fanfiction feels like a typical Chinese web novel, with a main character who lacks any real depth or uniqueness. Instead of being an engaging or complex protagonist, he is reduced to nothing more than a monster driven by extreme actions that don’t align with the Naruto universe's established tone or logic. One glaring issue is the way the main character tortures, mentally scars, and even rapes Pakura. These actions seem completely unjustified and exist purely as a crude plot device. They contradict the backstory provided for the protagonist, especially given their supposed past existence within the Naruto world. The author occasionally attempts to portray the main character as pitiful or sympathetic, but these moments fall flat when his actions are consistently monstrous. The system or template that supposedly influences him also lacks proper explanation or integration, making it feel like a lazy excuse for his behavior. The story becomes even more nonsensical with events such as the protagonist slaughtering members of Root inside a military ninja camp during the Third Shinobi War. This camp is supposedly filled with elite Jonin, Chunin, and other capable ninjas, yet no one seems to question or stop him. Characters like Danzo and Orochimaru, who are portrayed as key figures in this timeline, are inexplicably sidelined. Danzo—who at this time should be at his peak strength and influence—is rendered powerless and absurdly submissive, accepting the protagonist's dominance without question. This version of Danzo is inconsistent with his canon character, who is known for his cunning and willingness to take extreme measures to secure his goals. Furthermore, Konoha’s culture, particularly the "Will of Fire," is completely ignored. No ninja challenges the protagonist, no matter how many crimes he commits or how blatantly he disrupts their operations. This breaks the immersion and makes the entire story feel forced and unrealistic, as though the world itself is unnaturally bending to accommodate the protagonist's supremacy. While the translation is commendable and deserves credit, the story itself is poorly executed. It relies heavily on shock value, with gratuitous violence and out-of-character moments, rather than delivering a meaningful or cohesive narrative. This fanfiction ultimately fails to honor the spirit of the Naruto series or provide a satisfying alternate take on its world. Rating: 3/10 (primarily for good translation).
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Nice a true villain mc. The tags are not deceiving unlike other novels. MC does all things evil no morals and do anything he wants. MC is a complete psychopath and kills mindlessly. MC is so edgy but not emo. Arrogant like chinese mc but not a hypocrite. Translation is good.
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Let’s be honest here . This is basically a wish fulfillment novel with action pack elements. with no substantial plot. Beside the r 18 scenes 😂. To be honest I’m surprised I gave it this high of a score. Anyway if you don’t care about plot this is an awesome read with good grammar. Keep up the good work .
Obra de Arte sin igual Perfectamente equilibrado y con buen sentido de la trama, todo tiene una razón y se alinea con la forma de ser de homelander para los qué dicen qué mata sin sentido, el autor explica que el mc siempre fue así pero lo ocultó, aunque creo qué pudo de haber hecho qué sea de otra forma esa parte de la trama sobre qué siempre fue egoísta pero lo ocultó al no tener el poder suficiente. Pero el autor está traduciendo, muy bien lo ha hecho modificando algunas cosas del libro original.
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It's good ..................................................................................................................................................................
Dont waste your time. Cringy Chinese elements galore. There is R *pe, an overpowered MC with no plans or goals. mindless killing and faceslapping. Not forgetting the heavy gossip narration where everyone is amazed and shocked by everything the MC does.
La historia no es buena ni mala, pero si es bastante entretenida si te lo tomas casual, en lo personal me agrada el MC, aun que siento que le falta un buen propósito!
Unnecessory violence that don't make sense...it like an maniac mc.No character just replaced homelander...
Another Naruto fanfic…but with the Boys (TV series) added in. Read till chap30. The mc is too overpowered. And i mean too much . Unless this fics intention is that, MC slaps everyone to death and becomes complete degenerate as the selling point, than I don’t see where there can be elements of a proper fantasy fiction.
Here I found the MTL... anyway this is the stars you'll recieive for giving credit, but the transaction was good so 3.8.
To be honest, I don't know what all the positive comments here are about. I have just read up to chapter 12 and lost interest after the first two chapters. The MC has a name that doesn't fit the Naruto universe at all, Luo Lei. Who awakens his abilities in the middle of fighting Pakura. Of course, the fight only lasts for the MC, who now opens his profile and looks at his new abilities. The storyteller also mentions again very proudly how the MC spends a lot of time looking at his skills and repeats this several times. Not to forget, he is still in the fight with Pakura who is very experienced and deadly. Who doesn't notice that he ignores her and simply waits until he has time for her again. So is life as a shinobi a joke? Where you can just daydream for a few minutes and everyone waits for you to be ready again?
The work is very interesting (the further you go, the more interesting it gets). I would even give 5 stars if the translator weren't a rat who changed the titles of the fanfiction and doesn't want to say the original title of the work so that people can find it...
روايه جيده ولكن هل سيظل بطلنا يحتاج إلى قوالب أخرى بعد قالب هوملاندر فكر ف الأمر قوته الان تغلبت على الجميع فكيف عندما يكمل القالب تماما هل سينتقل الي عوالم أخرى وهل يمكنك اعطائي اسم الخام من فضلك
uma historia muito diferenta da maioria boa sorte e nao desista ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
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I can’t wait for the mc to be signing autographs selling toys of himself to the leaf village and beyond I can only hope he also does speeches to the villagers saying God’s Judgment and wasn’t it my Sage of the 6 paths giving purpose to save you maybe star in a movie in the land of snow with the princess or whatever. Homelander the hero we need to protect Konoha
I ain’t gonna lie I need more of this I can’t wait for him to fly and just start lasering people. I also need to know is Ryan possible I mean he did the same thing Homelander did to Becca to Pakura ? I also can’t wait for him to go back to Konoha and kill those two old fossils I also need to see the villages reaction to his strength from how he is killing it in the battle ground.
La traducción es buena pero la historia es una mierd... Sinceramente me aburrió muy rápido WebNovel no molestes con tu mínimo de caracteres lpm
I like the story obviously its not perfect but it is a good story to help pass some time. dddasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasd
This fanfiction feels like a typical Chinese web novel, with a main character who lacks any real depth or uniqueness. Instead of being an engaging or complex protagonist, he is reduced to nothing more than a monster driven by extreme actions that don’t align with the Naruto universe's established tone or logic. One glaring issue is the way the main character tortures, mentally scars, and even rapes Pakura. These actions seem completely unjustified and exist purely as a crude plot device. They contradict the backstory provided for the protagonist, especially given their supposed past existence within the Naruto world. The author occasionally attempts to portray the main character as pitiful or sympathetic, but these moments fall flat when his actions are consistently monstrous. The system or template that supposedly influences him also lacks proper explanation or integration, making it feel like a lazy excuse for his behavior. The story becomes even more nonsensical with events such as the protagonist slaughtering members of Root inside a military ninja camp during the Third Shinobi War. This camp is supposedly filled with elite Jonin, Chunin, and other capable ninjas, yet no one seems to question or stop him. Characters like Danzo and Orochimaru, who are portrayed as key figures in this timeline, are inexplicably sidelined. Danzo—who at this time should be at his peak strength and influence—is rendered powerless and absurdly submissive, accepting the protagonist's dominance without question. This version of Danzo is inconsistent with his canon character, who is known for his cunning and willingness to take extreme measures to secure his goals. Furthermore, Konoha’s culture, particularly the "Will of Fire," is completely ignored. No ninja challenges the protagonist, no matter how many crimes he commits or how blatantly he disrupts their operations. This breaks the immersion and makes the entire story feel forced and unrealistic, as though the world itself is unnaturally bending to accommodate the protagonist's supremacy. While the translation is commendable and deserves credit, the story itself is poorly executed. It relies heavily on shock value, with gratuitous violence and out-of-character moments, rather than delivering a meaningful or cohesive narrative. This fanfiction ultimately fails to honor the spirit of the Naruto series or provide a satisfying alternate take on its world. Rating: 3/10 (primarily for good translation).
Revelar Spoiler Nice a true villain mc. The tags are not deceiving unlike other novels. MC does all things evil no morals and do anything he wants. MC is a complete psychopath and kills mindlessly. MC is so edgy but not emo. Arrogant like chinese mc but not a hypocrite. Translation is good.
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Let’s be honest here . This is basically a wish fulfillment novel with action pack elements. with no substantial plot. Beside the r 18 scenes 😂. To be honest I’m surprised I gave it this high of a score. Anyway if you don’t care about plot this is an awesome read with good grammar. Keep up the good work .
Obra de Arte sin igual Perfectamente equilibrado y con buen sentido de la trama, todo tiene una razón y se alinea con la forma de ser de homelander para los qué dicen qué mata sin sentido, el autor explica que el mc siempre fue así pero lo ocultó, aunque creo qué pudo de haber hecho qué sea de otra forma esa parte de la trama sobre qué siempre fue egoísta pero lo ocultó al no tener el poder suficiente. Pero el autor está traduciendo, muy bien lo ha hecho modificando algunas cosas del libro original.
Revelar Spoiler It's good ..................................................................................................................................................................
Dont waste your time. Cringy Chinese elements galore. There is R *pe, an overpowered MC with no plans or goals. mindless killing and faceslapping. Not forgetting the heavy gossip narration where everyone is amazed and shocked by everything the MC does.
La historia no es buena ni mala, pero si es bastante entretenida si te lo tomas casual, en lo personal me agrada el MC, aun que siento que le falta un buen propósito!
Unnecessory violence that don't make sense...it like an maniac mc.No character just replaced homelander...
Another Naruto fanfic…but with the Boys (TV series) added in. Read till chap30. The mc is too overpowered. And i mean too much . Unless this fics intention is that, MC slaps everyone to death and becomes complete degenerate as the selling point, than I don’t see where there can be elements of a proper fantasy fiction.
Here I found the MTL... anyway this is the stars you'll recieive for giving credit, but the transaction was good so 3.8.
To be honest, I don't know what all the positive comments here are about. I have just read up to chapter 12 and lost interest after the first two chapters. The MC has a name that doesn't fit the Naruto universe at all, Luo Lei. Who awakens his abilities in the middle of fighting Pakura. Of course, the fight only lasts for the MC, who now opens his profile and looks at his new abilities. The storyteller also mentions again very proudly how the MC spends a lot of time looking at his skills and repeats this several times. Not to forget, he is still in the fight with Pakura who is very experienced and deadly. Who doesn't notice that he ignores her and simply waits until he has time for her again. So is life as a shinobi a joke? Where you can just daydream for a few minutes and everyone waits for you to be ready again?
The work is very interesting (the further you go, the more interesting it gets). I would even give 5 stars if the translator weren't a rat who changed the titles of the fanfiction and doesn't want to say the original title of the work so that people can find it...
روايه جيده ولكن هل سيظل بطلنا يحتاج إلى قوالب أخرى بعد قالب هوملاندر فكر ف الأمر قوته الان تغلبت على الجميع فكيف عندما يكمل القالب تماما هل سينتقل الي عوالم أخرى وهل يمكنك اعطائي اسم الخام من فضلك
uma historia muito diferenta da maioria boa sorte e nao desista ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
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I can’t wait for the mc to be signing autographs selling toys of himself to the leaf village and beyond I can only hope he also does speeches to the villagers saying God’s Judgment and wasn’t it my Sage of the 6 paths giving purpose to save you maybe star in a movie in the land of snow with the princess or whatever. Homelander the hero we need to protect Konoha
I ain’t gonna lie I need more of this I can’t wait for him to fly and just start lasering people. I also need to know is Ryan possible I mean he did the same thing Homelander did to Becca to Pakura ? I also can’t wait for him to go back to Konoha and kill those two old fossils I also need to see the villages reaction to his strength from how he is killing it in the battle ground.
La traducción es buena pero la historia es una mierd... Sinceramente me aburrió muy rápido WebNovel no molestes con tu mínimo de caracteres lpm