rwby of ragnarok

LV 4

sumsum_83460

A good story, but a bit confusing with the first chapter rewrite but if you disregard it it is good.

LV 13

RedBeard73

I’m optimistic with the story so far, I like a lot of what I’ve seen, and the future is pretty open with a lot of potential. It is however, not perfect. I think Adam and Eve accepted him as their new son a little too quickly without much confusion. I am worried about the personalities of a lot of the characters, especially Ruby, with the gender role changes. The reason so many people like the girls in RWBY isn’t just because they are bueatiful, but because of their personalities, and I’m very worried those are going to change, Ruby we have already seen be less innocent, which is a big part of her character. I also do not like how open the MC was with Ozpin. Ozpin is willing to use those around him, especially children, to fight in his never ending war, sending them off to certain death. He manipulates others and only tells them what he wants them to know, so to willingly give him all of this info seemed like a really dumb idea. The only way I can see this not being a problem is if you change the character of Ozpin to a better person, but then he’s a much different character. This might seem like a little thing to rant so much about but it’s honestly a big sticking point for me, it along with a few other small factors, almost made me drop the story.