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I feel like I've read this before... But that in ff Midoriya unlocked telekinesis and a bunch of shit which made him overpowered af. Please don't do the same author. Just leveling up his stats itself will make him op. Also please don't make it a harem or go crazy with romance(as you've mentioned they are 16 yrs old). These are not demands just simply my wishes. Anyways can't wait to read more of this author best of luck.
I have read your previous work (Marvel and dc fics) 1 - Don't make it harem 2 - No Early Romance 3 - System stays hidden from others 4 - Dont make stupid decisions. . 3rd is optional depending on the story. Enjoy writing. pretty useless review i know, what can i say about a story with only 15 chapters
I feel like I've read this before... But that in ff Midoriya unlocked telekinesis and a bunch of shit which made him overpowered af. Please don't do the same author. Just leveling up his stats itself will make him op. Also please don't make it a harem or go crazy with romance(as you've mentioned they are 16 yrs old). These are not demands just simply my wishes. Anyways can't wait to read more of this author best of luck.
I have read your previous work (Marvel and dc fics) 1 - Don't make it harem 2 - No Early Romance 3 - System stays hidden from others 4 - Dont make stupid decisions. . 3rd is optional depending on the story. Enjoy writing. pretty useless review i know, what can i say about a story with only 15 chapters
What Happened man You stopped updating the series?