Reviews of One Piece : Winged Dragons of the Beast Pirates by PirateKing24 - Webnovel

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MellyK9
LV 15 Badge

good story overall. relatively new concept for a one piece story. Don't know much about the golden dragon of Ra but still I'm enjoying, this is one of the better fanatics I've read. There are a few errors with names and gender but it's now frequent enough to detract much from the story. One of the better story from this author.

3d
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DaoistrymewT

Everything was good until he started adding more wife. Boa and Viola were unnecessary. Especially Boa, she destroyed the dynamics between the mc and yamato

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26d
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CornyChiWAH

One piece X Yu-Gi-Oh? Huge Flaming Chikin x Beast pirate (Yamato waifu?!?!?). I am sold.

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1mth
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Syxenn

he fought and badly injured moria who was said to be as strong as all-star of beast pirate, and killed all his crew members [some of them knew haki] at the age of 5 ,then defeated hyogoro who had learned emission at the age of 8 by this time he already had haki, yet even after so many years when he became a teenager he's still at this level, his haki didnt progress and hasnt even learnt observation haki, he's devil fruit is whats carrying him all this time, kaido said he's even stronger than himself and bigmom at same age yet he cant even defeat marco [more than 10 years before canon] who is only high vice admiral level rn, he's already reaching luffy's age after the timeskip yet is way weaker, the author made him too strong in the beginning so now he is doing damage control, ps: he's haki is said to be weaker than squard despite unlocking it at young age and being brutally trained by kaido from the age of 3. im not saying the mc has to be overly OP but if u make him OP from the start than stick to it, nerfing him leaves a bad taste. if you dont want him to be OP than do weak to strong instead

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1mth
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Tristan_009

yugioh x one piece I love the idea and I love the work you're doing keep up with man.

2mth
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Alex_Rodri

海贼:百兽海贼团的翼神龙 ………………………………………………………………………………………………..

2mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Defective_Angel

overall this is good novel... 1. Very few writing mistake 2. Good comedy 3. Mc personally is likeable 4. Yamato

3mth
Ver 5 Respostas
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3mth
Ver 0 Respostas
MellyK9
LV 15 Badge

good story overall. relatively new concept for a one piece story. Don't know much about the golden dragon of Ra but still I'm enjoying, this is one of the better fanatics I've read. There are a few errors with names and gender but it's now frequent enough to detract much from the story. One of the better story from this author.

3d
Ver 0 Respostas
DaoistrymewT

Everything was good until he started adding more wife. Boa and Viola were unnecessary. Especially Boa, she destroyed the dynamics between the mc and yamato

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26d
Ver 2 Respostas
CornyChiWAH

One piece X Yu-Gi-Oh? Huge Flaming Chikin x Beast pirate (Yamato waifu?!?!?). I am sold.

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1mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Syxenn

he fought and badly injured moria who was said to be as strong as all-star of beast pirate, and killed all his crew members [some of them knew haki] at the age of 5 ,then defeated hyogoro who had learned emission at the age of 8 by this time he already had haki, yet even after so many years when he became a teenager he's still at this level, his haki didnt progress and hasnt even learnt observation haki, he's devil fruit is whats carrying him all this time, kaido said he's even stronger than himself and bigmom at same age yet he cant even defeat marco [more than 10 years before canon] who is only high vice admiral level rn, he's already reaching luffy's age after the timeskip yet is way weaker, the author made him too strong in the beginning so now he is doing damage control, ps: he's haki is said to be weaker than squard despite unlocking it at young age and being brutally trained by kaido from the age of 3. im not saying the mc has to be overly OP but if u make him OP from the start than stick to it, nerfing him leaves a bad taste. if you dont want him to be OP than do weak to strong instead

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1mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Tristan_009

yugioh x one piece I love the idea and I love the work you're doing keep up with man.

2mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Alex_Rodri

海贼:百兽海贼团的翼神龙 ………………………………………………………………………………………………..

2mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Defective_Angel

overall this is good novel... 1. Very few writing mistake 2. Good comedy 3. Mc personally is likeable 4. Yamato

3mth
Ver 5 Respostas
Raja_Sihir

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3mth
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