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I just read the first 70 chapters, it's really a good novel. A very interesting novel. The previous comment also mentioned the issue of using full names for everything. This can be considered a minor flaw. Perhaps the author's native language is not English. But it does not affect the quality of this book.
I have to say this novel is really great, I love it so much! There are some unexpected settings for me! Always able to give me some surprises. Especially for the imagination of some forbidden mantras. Genius!
Great novel with fleshed out characters and good world building with and interesting premise, writing quality is good and understandable. The characters aren't stupid and can and do use their brains, so far the plot has been good and I'm already waiting to read the next arc. Keep up the good work!
You should focus your energy on writing this story and not others. This is a good story.Not too much fluff.
I think this novel is well written, unlike some novels that are written at such a fast pace, it is a novel worth reading carefully. The plot is worth looking forward to. This novel needs to be read carefully and slowly to discover its brilliance!
The plot of this novel is also fantastic! I am reading every novel of yours and will recommend it to others! that 's great! Can we update faster? I need more chapters!
Only reason It's not getting five stars is that the author uses both first and last name for every sentence with every character. "Dean Bruce thought this, Dean Bruce thought that." I lose immersion constantly. Just use one part of characters names for gods sake. Never read a novel that does this and I've read hundreds. Please stop spelling the full name every time, and I will change this review to five stars.
Something changed. For the first 200 chapters I loved this novel. However, after Chapter 200, the quality drastically drops. - The pacing becomes way too fast - The story reads as if a different writer started writing this and they didn’t even bother to read the previous chapters. - Dean just gets a new personality and previous characters are just gone (system is gone too) The novel sucks now, but those first 200 chapters are still great.
I just read the first 70 chapters, it's really a good novel. A very interesting novel. The previous comment also mentioned the issue of using full names for everything. This can be considered a minor flaw. Perhaps the author's native language is not English. But it does not affect the quality of this book.
I have to say this novel is really great, I love it so much! There are some unexpected settings for me! Always able to give me some surprises. Especially for the imagination of some forbidden mantras. Genius!
Great novel with fleshed out characters and good world building with and interesting premise, writing quality is good and understandable. The characters aren't stupid and can and do use their brains, so far the plot has been good and I'm already waiting to read the next arc. Keep up the good work!
You should focus your energy on writing this story and not others. This is a good story.Not too much fluff.
I think this novel is well written, unlike some novels that are written at such a fast pace, it is a novel worth reading carefully. The plot is worth looking forward to. This novel needs to be read carefully and slowly to discover its brilliance!
The plot of this novel is also fantastic! I am reading every novel of yours and will recommend it to others! that 's great! Can we update faster? I need more chapters!
Only reason It's not getting five stars is that the author uses both first and last name for every sentence with every character. "Dean Bruce thought this, Dean Bruce thought that." I lose immersion constantly. Just use one part of characters names for gods sake. Never read a novel that does this and I've read hundreds. Please stop spelling the full name every time, and I will change this review to five stars.
Something changed. For the first 200 chapters I loved this novel. However, after Chapter 200, the quality drastically drops. - The pacing becomes way too fast - The story reads as if a different writer started writing this and they didn’t even bother to read the previous chapters. - Dean just gets a new personality and previous characters are just gone (system is gone too) The novel sucks now, but those first 200 chapters are still great.