Wizard starting from shoeing donkeys

LV 3

Happy_Pony_9464

A rather enjoyable read so far (for the free chapters). The main character is hard working with a happy attitude. No main issues with grammar and english, is it a translation? Small critic : sentences are too often too short with an overuse of the exclamation mark and some idioms seem asian (chinese?). I wish the interactions with the sheriff were handled better and that chance encounters will remain rare as they seem too forced by the author and remove agency from the main character. Same thing when people force the main character’s into a decision that seal his whole future and he happily agrees without taking the time to think about it or discuss it with his familly or more knowledgeable people about the consequences those choices entail to... especially when you just isekaied a few days ago into a completly different society. As most isekai, the previous life, familly, story, has no impact so far. I appreciate how the MC used his first sundays, it’s an exemple of agency and shows his character. Beside that, it’s a gpod start. Good luck author!

LV 15

MMan1175

The mc is boring. He’s kind of a one trick pony. He quickly gets a skill that lets him double his strength for a bit and just keeps playing the pig to catch the tiger. The author tries to offset this by making him tired after use but he’s always convinently fighting one on one with nobody around so the same trick works over and over. This would be fine if he was the one initializing the conflicts, I would even appreciate an mc that styles himself around a strategy, but as a pure hearted mc he’s very reactionary. He does initiate one fight but it’s so completely different from how he normally acts it comes across as almost bipolar.

LV 4

Everythingonurmind

Cons: 1. while the story starts promising with a rather decent world building. However, the development has tons of issues. examples: I.too many assassination attempts for very minute reasons like bumping shoulers, the mini arcs development is like going from one assassination attempts atc to another for story to develop. II. too many love intrest and potential harem in the future, most young and old ladies have a crush on the mc specially as the story progress, like atp of story at chapter 200 there are more than 7 females that love mc for no or very small reasons whatsoever. 2. translation it starts as a decent translation but by each chapter the quality of translation is getting worse, such as constant switch of pronouns, constant switch of 1st and 3rd person, mc calling himself plus in his internal monologue as "lord rein" instead of "I" or just "rein". 3. pacing it's abysmal, it's either too fast or slow as a snail pace, thus giving you a rather frustrating and unsatisfying feeling even in cool moments where readers should feel satisfaction. I would recommend this only if you have nothing else to do, and want to waste some time.

LV 14

the_guitar_man

Honestly one of the best books I have read in a while. Although it has some problems where it feels like the author forgot about his limit break increasing with stats and some other things overall it’s amazing. Probably my only real problem with this book is that they can’t release chapters fast enough(joke)

LV 15

Conna

Ive really been enjoying this book. It has unique ideas and is a fun read, but I was reading the book over view and I’m at chapter 90 and the MC has never been called Laine that I’ve seen. It’s mostly been Rein.

LV 12

Madaradagod

Starts off strong but but starts to fall apart about 200ish chapters in. The characters also feel cookie cutter and some parts and names change through out the book

LV 4

tom_de_leeuw_8866

i wouldn't have started if i knew it was harem please add the tag. besides the common problems most harem books have there are some other problems. 1 the mc is incredibly dumb in allocating his resources. 2 the title of the book does not reflect its contents he only unlocks wizardry after nearly 100 chapters and even then it takes a suport role in his melee combat style instead of becoming the focus point like the title promised. these are the most glaring issues but there are others like naming pacing and inconsistencies to name a few. the story is moderatly creative and if i didn't find harem insufferable to read would probably have continued to read it as a brain dead just read book.

LV 15

Dwain_7721

Great story. Love the constant battles, stuck up nobles, corrupt church, and a character not afraid to clap a baddie. The privilege chapters are crazy expensive though.

LV 15

Adm_Mat

Man it’s a great concept but the mtl in the later chapters is painful to read. Try if you don’t have nothing else.

LV 15

egondro

I feel like the title was a lie and the story is grindy as heck. The character is obsessive yet extremely impulsive and annoying. The author also keeps injecting “gift” scenarios into the story and no linear even progress. It’s grind then jump. Grind and jump. As far as wizard goes. Their isn’t a whiff of magic at all. Supernatural, cultivation power yes but magic as we interpret wizard is not there at all. I think maybe he means the Chinese idiom of wizard which is old virgin. Very disappointing and do not recommend.

LV 15

uRb4IN_

Words cannot describe this novel. Luckily, a meme can.

LV 4

captainfatbelly

book looked good then partook in chapter splitting auto 1 star