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This was a bad one. If i haven't read ( priest pray for us ) i think it will be good . But more than one part of the story has been copied from that novel and rewritten here with some twists. Like for example from fright night part in Anton side , And lost girl case from the volume 1 of Priest one . I am disappointed because the author has basically copy and pasted his work from Priest novel.
Hi love story and background at all and character development but please include if you have your own character they're designed in picture for someone because it's really will help thank you then please continue
SPOILERS BELOW ⬇️ ⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️ The writing quality is quite good no complaints there. The update stability is the same this author is known for finishing his books so that should give you an idea. Now story development, this is where my happiness ends. I’m honestly disappointed, a lot of the times the story is all over the place. He moved to Beacon Hills as a vacation and became a teacher, I personally had no problem with that and liked it. What I didn’t like is how everything felt all over the place, one minute he’s teaching, next he’s getting attacked or we get 4 chapters “investigating” a case that all of a sudden takes a turn, he kills the monster but gets knocked out and wakes up in a dimension where the monster who he just kills says some vague stuff and then disappears. Then all of a sudden there’s an apparently super powerful demon who is trying to make a deal with him. Character design is all over the place too, not only for the mc who’s personality changes almost every chapter. He has a special team who wouldn’t hesitate to kill innocents to finish a job, yet suddenly do that on a VERY important job against a class 5 monster. Make it make sense please. (It was previously stated that they were prepared to kill the same civilian even before the mission started and also used her as bait) I like mashup worlds so it gets a 5* from me.
At the beginning of the novel it is a little difficult to understand since the author mixes up the conversations. EJ: The Mc is doing something but suddenly he starts thinking something totally different, some time after he finishes thinking that then he goes back to what he was doing. I don't know how to explain it well but at the beginning of the novel it seems that the MC is crazy.But over time he improves and his ideas become more compact and he stays on the same line instead of thinking about many different things at the same time. I won't lower the stars since I'm really liking it, more than anything a supernatural world where it seems that there are all kinds of dark beings
Revelar Spoiler
podría decirse que la historia está dentro de todo bien escrita, tiene una historia de fondo bien construida y las actualizaciones son constantes, nada que reprochar sobre esto.Pero la verdad el personaje de Ethan deja mucho que desear, es algo aburrido/cansador y poco entendible, no pude llegar a disfrutar leyendo sobre el como protagonista, deja mucho que desear..., talvez en otro momento vuelva a darle una oportunidad pero por ahora no puedo seguir leyendo. Aún así gracias por escribir, se lo difícil que es crear una historia así que espero puedas mejorar algunos de estos aspectos para el futuro.
PT-BR Até agora é uma excelente história, só melhora com o passar dos capítulos e tem uma ótima frequência de atualização, quem quiser ler fique a vontade 😉 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
I love the theme of the created world, is there any other novel you have like that? Apart from the one about the father, which I'm going to start reading now since I've already finished these 30 chapters. The writing is a bit confusing when it comes to the passage of events or actions, like when I talk to the devil, but for now it's a very good novel. I found it looking for things about vampires and werewolves, which is something I love. Yes, all this romance stuff that they put into these novels now, where literally everything is romantic, and this one clearly isn't.
I'm leaving a review for nothing since I'm on the patre.. To put it simply, it's a good thing that I don't know any of the other films or series apart from Teen Wolf, I can't really judge all that to say more
So far I found the story very exciting and sensational, I finally found a fanfic that talks about hunters in the Teen Wolf universe. Very big potential! I hope it continues with the update time
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You only need to read the first chapter to know that it will be a great story, the author has a good reputation for finishing his books so I wouldn't worry about that aspect. Good novel, 10/10, recommended.
Welcome to this novel, where you will see a different perspective of my novel Priest, Pray For Us, where the movies have become reality. First of all, I want to make it clear that I have absolute respect for all religions. The protagonist himself is very clear about his beliefs, and I think everyone will like it. You will encounter action, supernatural events and even alien attacks. The protagonist, due to his massacres of dark entities, is sent to Beacon Hills as a history teacher and with a secret mission. He thought that everything would be normal until strange events began to happen around him.
the story is good as always keep writing every story of yours is good.......................................................................
Welcome to this novel, where you will see a different perspective of my novel Priest, Pray For Us, where the movies have become reality. First of all, I want to make it clear that I have absolute respect for all religions. The protagonist himself is very clear about his beliefs, and I think everyone will like it. You will encounter action, supernatural events and even alien attacks. The protagonist, due to his massacres of dark entities, is sent to Beacon Hills as a history teacher and with a secret mission. He thought that everything would be normal until strange events began to happen around him.
Volume 1 Sagas or movies considered for Volume 1: Teen Wolf, Season 1 Slenderman (2018) From Dusk Till Dawn (1996) Terrifier Volume 2 Sagas or movies considered for Volume 2: Teen Wolf, Season 2 Webnesday
This was a bad one. If i haven't read ( priest pray for us ) i think it will be good . But more than one part of the story has been copied from that novel and rewritten here with some twists. Like for example from fright night part in Anton side , And lost girl case from the volume 1 of Priest one . I am disappointed because the author has basically copy and pasted his work from Priest novel.
Hi love story and background at all and character development but please include if you have your own character they're designed in picture for someone because it's really will help thank you then please continue
SPOILERS BELOW ⬇️ ⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️ The writing quality is quite good no complaints there. The update stability is the same this author is known for finishing his books so that should give you an idea. Now story development, this is where my happiness ends. I’m honestly disappointed, a lot of the times the story is all over the place. He moved to Beacon Hills as a vacation and became a teacher, I personally had no problem with that and liked it. What I didn’t like is how everything felt all over the place, one minute he’s teaching, next he’s getting attacked or we get 4 chapters “investigating” a case that all of a sudden takes a turn, he kills the monster but gets knocked out and wakes up in a dimension where the monster who he just kills says some vague stuff and then disappears. Then all of a sudden there’s an apparently super powerful demon who is trying to make a deal with him. Character design is all over the place too, not only for the mc who’s personality changes almost every chapter. He has a special team who wouldn’t hesitate to kill innocents to finish a job, yet suddenly do that on a VERY important job against a class 5 monster. Make it make sense please. (It was previously stated that they were prepared to kill the same civilian even before the mission started and also used her as bait) I like mashup worlds so it gets a 5* from me.
At the beginning of the novel it is a little difficult to understand since the author mixes up the conversations. EJ: The Mc is doing something but suddenly he starts thinking something totally different, some time after he finishes thinking that then he goes back to what he was doing. I don't know how to explain it well but at the beginning of the novel it seems that the MC is crazy.But over time he improves and his ideas become more compact and he stays on the same line instead of thinking about many different things at the same time. I won't lower the stars since I'm really liking it, more than anything a supernatural world where it seems that there are all kinds of dark beings
Revelar Spoiler podría decirse que la historia está dentro de todo bien escrita, tiene una historia de fondo bien construida y las actualizaciones son constantes, nada que reprochar sobre esto.Pero la verdad el personaje de Ethan deja mucho que desear, es algo aburrido/cansador y poco entendible, no pude llegar a disfrutar leyendo sobre el como protagonista, deja mucho que desear..., talvez en otro momento vuelva a darle una oportunidad pero por ahora no puedo seguir leyendo. Aún así gracias por escribir, se lo difícil que es crear una historia así que espero puedas mejorar algunos de estos aspectos para el futuro.
PT-BR Até agora é uma excelente história, só melhora com o passar dos capítulos e tem uma ótima frequência de atualização, quem quiser ler fique a vontade 😉 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
I love the theme of the created world, is there any other novel you have like that? Apart from the one about the father, which I'm going to start reading now since I've already finished these 30 chapters. The writing is a bit confusing when it comes to the passage of events or actions, like when I talk to the devil, but for now it's a very good novel. I found it looking for things about vampires and werewolves, which is something I love. Yes, all this romance stuff that they put into these novels now, where literally everything is romantic, and this one clearly isn't.
I'm leaving a review for nothing since I'm on the patre.. To put it simply, it's a good thing that I don't know any of the other films or series apart from Teen Wolf, I can't really judge all that to say more
So far I found the story very exciting and sensational, I finally found a fanfic that talks about hunters in the Teen Wolf universe. Very big potential! I hope it continues with the update time
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
You only need to read the first chapter to know that it will be a great story, the author has a good reputation for finishing his books so I wouldn't worry about that aspect. Good novel, 10/10, recommended.
Welcome to this novel, where you will see a different perspective of my novel Priest, Pray For Us, where the movies have become reality. First of all, I want to make it clear that I have absolute respect for all religions. The protagonist himself is very clear about his beliefs, and I think everyone will like it. You will encounter action, supernatural events and even alien attacks. The protagonist, due to his massacres of dark entities, is sent to Beacon Hills as a history teacher and with a secret mission. He thought that everything would be normal until strange events began to happen around him.
the story is good as always keep writing every story of yours is good.......................................................................
Welcome to this novel, where you will see a different perspective of my novel Priest, Pray For Us, where the movies have become reality. First of all, I want to make it clear that I have absolute respect for all religions. The protagonist himself is very clear about his beliefs, and I think everyone will like it. You will encounter action, supernatural events and even alien attacks. The protagonist, due to his massacres of dark entities, is sent to Beacon Hills as a history teacher and with a secret mission. He thought that everything would be normal until strange events began to happen around him.
Volume 1 Sagas or movies considered for Volume 1: Teen Wolf, Season 1 Slenderman (2018) From Dusk Till Dawn (1996) Terrifier Volume 2 Sagas or movies considered for Volume 2: Teen Wolf, Season 2 Webnesday