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are you the real author of this story or is the other guy the real author I'm confused
Ahem, this is a very angry MC, if you like evil MCs, this is for you. There will be no character development (phew), there will be a lot of bloody entertainment, the MC will quickly become stronger, and this will be worthy of him not due to mythical perseverance (he is really sick of it), but because he is the best.
I don’t really understand why you re-uploaded this fanfic. Sure the first part is edited, but all the chapters after still have “…” for thoughts and are basically the same. I love evil mc’s and really like yours but these are simple things that would provide more immersion in the story
it started good but then when he regressed, mc started to act and think everyone is trash and kept repeating it every single time. in a single chapter he thinks and tells someone they are trash more than 5 times. we get it, move on. anyone doing anything is trash even though he himself died like a trash. till now only true evil thing he has done is kill a family brutally for calling him short. why is he suddenly caring about ants opinions after saying he doesnt ? this book has good potential but mc has 8th grade syndrome and acts cringe half the time and everyone who mc beats half to death gets healed in no time to be beaten again to show how cool and stonk mc is. author if you feel hurt then just consider above my opinion.
are you the real author of this story or is the other guy the real author I'm confused
Ahem, this is a very angry MC, if you like evil MCs, this is for you. There will be no character development (phew), there will be a lot of bloody entertainment, the MC will quickly become stronger, and this will be worthy of him not due to mythical perseverance (he is really sick of it), but because he is the best.
I don’t really understand why you re-uploaded this fanfic. Sure the first part is edited, but all the chapters after still have “…” for thoughts and are basically the same. I love evil mc’s and really like yours but these are simple things that would provide more immersion in the story
it started good but then when he regressed, mc started to act and think everyone is trash and kept repeating it every single time. in a single chapter he thinks and tells someone they are trash more than 5 times. we get it, move on. anyone doing anything is trash even though he himself died like a trash. till now only true evil thing he has done is kill a family brutally for calling him short. why is he suddenly caring about ants opinions after saying he doesnt ? this book has good potential but mc has 8th grade syndrome and acts cringe half the time and everyone who mc beats half to death gets healed in no time to be beaten again to show how cool and stonk mc is. author if you feel hurt then just consider above my opinion.