Reviews of Rebirth with Ultimate Primordial system by BlackUndead - Webnovel

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ORIGINofALL

kinda love these types of novels and the only thing if you can try to correct is that the system notification like instead of writing "system" try to write like [ System] this as this makes the text a little bit system like you know what I mean

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Yogansh_Agarwal

Please fix ur grammar and also format the paragraphs better. Stop using brackets as a sign of scene change it’s very confusing

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Divinenature

full support for Indian authors here. thank you for story. Just note here, Bro maybe you can take advantage of ChatGPT for writing chapters.

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Anos_Voldigoud

before reading I wanna know will you complete the story or you gonna stop it midway like other fanfics on webnovel.????

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ORIGINofALL

kinda love these types of novels and the only thing if you can try to correct is that the system notification like instead of writing "system" try to write like [ System] this as this makes the text a little bit system like you know what I mean

1mth
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Yogansh_Agarwal

Please fix ur grammar and also format the paragraphs better. Stop using brackets as a sign of scene change it’s very confusing

1mth
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Divinenature

full support for Indian authors here. thank you for story. Just note here, Bro maybe you can take advantage of ChatGPT for writing chapters.

1mth
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Anos_Voldigoud

before reading I wanna know will you complete the story or you gonna stop it midway like other fanfics on webnovel.????

1mth
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