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oh boy this is bad, I've fallen absolutely in love with this story. It just feels so right to me, everything done just scratches an itch I didn't know I had. The title explains everything you need to know and I'm glad it does, everyone who goes into this knows what to expect and it's done very well. Defiantly recommend.
i though this fic would be different and give my lilia a justice. but no its still goes like that my dissapointmen is immearsureable and my day is ruined. and author reason was in canon lilia indeed love paul and he still would cheat? bruh that shit was not love it was a trauma that og author tried to justified it.
So I'm going to put this as a heads up for people desperate for any good mushoku tensei fics to read, this is slow, like in a good way that finds its footing outside of how the canon progresses and I love that about a fic but for those who want the mc to be 18 and exploring or kingdom building should definitely wait until the 100s
Hopefully you stay true to not breaking the systems that the cannon light novel placed
Lots of information, but boooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
It's good, not excellent, but good, it explores the magic system a lot, and some things don't make much sense, for example it wouldn't be able to create spells without having something as a reference, but it seems like a good story, I hope it eventually focuses more on the development of the that there is no magic system.
i think this story is good i mean after reading a lot of mc get stronger after a week of his born and make a harem of little girls its good to find someone talk more about story and developpment of character
It's way better than the original, that's for sure. Seraphin is much more likable than Rudeus - not that hard to do, if I'm being honest. However, this story might not be for you if you're not into training montages.
The story is pretty good, but what holds it back is the fact that the author tried to "improve" everything. The whole: "I'm just like Rudeus but better" concept feels kinda weird when a reincarnator is replaced by another reincarnator. By doing everything "better" there are basically no conflicts and the story becomes incredibly dull as a result. Very often an MC who effortlessly breezes through all problems just stops becoming interesting. The in-depth power systems are cool when gone into detail, but when it feels like the entire story is MOSTLY that, it is appreciated a lot less.
Very good character development. Every character feels true to their anime self and not forced to act in different ways. The MC is practical and actively tries to improve his powers.
I’m not great at writing in-depth reviews but it’s I’d say it’s PEAK. I hope you never drop it.
Good read. the slow pace and a lot of magic theory is fine because of the notice. and for me personally the interaction between characters is good. This AU is interesting take on mushoku tensei fanfic, So far have been enjoying this novel please don't drop this, I have a good time reading this, I believe in you
Revelar Spoiler
Good job man, good job. One of the tops that I have read recently. Well-written plot, non-boring main character. All in all, a plus. I will continue to follow. Good luck.
Great novel,probably the best mushouko tensei fanfic i have read.Unfortunably the autor kinda baited us with a character which i quite disliked,overall a incredible novel.4.7
Tbh, the story is not my cup of tea, but I can appreciate the writing quality, the protagonist, and world background, hence why I'm rating those highly. I didn't bother rating story development properly and gave it 5 stars by default as I only began reading after the publishing of chapter 45 and am quitting reading at chapter 18 since I'm not going to waste my time reading something which I don't like. Not to say that the author sucks or whatever, just that the idea is not the kind of thing I want to read further than this based on how everything is going so far.
It basically what if we had a better rudeus that not a bad thing but it seems the author is going a different direction of events is stead of a copy paste
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The story is good, interesting and update consistently. Faithfull story material but not blidly follow "cannon" material. I just hope there few time skip or Seraph will not reach 10 years old even after 100 Chapters.
Author-nim please continue this story I love it so much the characters are amazing and so is the world building i love the way you write Seraphim's inner monologues as well. thank you for writing this and i hope for your continued hope and success as you continue to write this.
As Kw0z mentioned, the story is rather boring at the moment. In the original novel, Rifujin was consistently making pervy events here and there and they felt pretty natural. In this novel, nothing really happens... MC keeps getting overpowered everyday and that's pretty much all? You know, you don't need to make MC be fully-overpowered to start cooking the story. At this point i'm getting the feeling Seraph will be King-level at the age of 13 and if it's like that, that'd be really boring :/
This is basically Mushoku Tensei except the MC isn’t as insufferable as Rudeus, I stopped watching the anime just because that kids presence was grating to my soul; with this fanfic I can read about that same world properly. It’s well written and the author clearly has in-depth knowledge about the lore, I haven’t spotted any mistakes in the writing either. Very good quality fic, I suggest you guys read this.
This is a wonderful and outstanding story. I enjoy almost all of it, I've also enjoyed the authors' creative libertys they're taking like the mana disaster not happening and how gravity magic works. The one thing I'd say I don't enjoy about this fic is the way the Mc was reborn, then sent back in time.
Personally, I absolutely love it. However, this may not be for everyone. This story is what it says it is. An overpowered MC that gets strong realistically. To prove this “realness” the author likes to explain the MC’s thought process and expands a lot on the magic system. This often leads to info dumps that I personally love (as I’m really into power systems and like the nitty gritty details), but some readers might not appreciate it and even find it boring. Honestly, this story is about an MC that’s TRAINING to become the strongest and the explanation on how he does it. Not a lot of adventure or action. (At least so far) If you’re looking for an MC that goes around face slapping and swinging his weight around then be prepared to be disappointed as the MC is pretty low key. However, I still recommend this to anyone looking for an interesting read. I loved it and I’m sure many of you will too.
oh boy this is bad, I've fallen absolutely in love with this story. It just feels so right to me, everything done just scratches an itch I didn't know I had. The title explains everything you need to know and I'm glad it does, everyone who goes into this knows what to expect and it's done very well. Defiantly recommend.
i though this fic would be different and give my lilia a justice. but no its still goes like that my dissapointmen is immearsureable and my day is ruined. and author reason was in canon lilia indeed love paul and he still would cheat? bruh that shit was not love it was a trauma that og author tried to justified it.
So I'm going to put this as a heads up for people desperate for any good mushoku tensei fics to read, this is slow, like in a good way that finds its footing outside of how the canon progresses and I love that about a fic but for those who want the mc to be 18 and exploring or kingdom building should definitely wait until the 100s
Hopefully you stay true to not breaking the systems that the cannon light novel placed
Lots of information, but boooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
It's good, not excellent, but good, it explores the magic system a lot, and some things don't make much sense, for example it wouldn't be able to create spells without having something as a reference, but it seems like a good story, I hope it eventually focuses more on the development of the that there is no magic system.
i think this story is good i mean after reading a lot of mc get stronger after a week of his born and make a harem of little girls its good to find someone talk more about story and developpment of character
It's way better than the original, that's for sure. Seraphin is much more likable than Rudeus - not that hard to do, if I'm being honest. However, this story might not be for you if you're not into training montages.
The story is pretty good, but what holds it back is the fact that the author tried to "improve" everything. The whole: "I'm just like Rudeus but better" concept feels kinda weird when a reincarnator is replaced by another reincarnator. By doing everything "better" there are basically no conflicts and the story becomes incredibly dull as a result. Very often an MC who effortlessly breezes through all problems just stops becoming interesting. The in-depth power systems are cool when gone into detail, but when it feels like the entire story is MOSTLY that, it is appreciated a lot less.
Very good character development. Every character feels true to their anime self and not forced to act in different ways. The MC is practical and actively tries to improve his powers.
I’m not great at writing in-depth reviews but it’s I’d say it’s PEAK. I hope you never drop it.
Good read. the slow pace and a lot of magic theory is fine because of the notice. and for me personally the interaction between characters is good. This AU is interesting take on mushoku tensei fanfic, So far have been enjoying this novel please don't drop this, I have a good time reading this, I believe in you
Revelar Spoiler Good job man, good job. One of the tops that I have read recently. Well-written plot, non-boring main character. All in all, a plus. I will continue to follow. Good luck.
Great novel,probably the best mushouko tensei fanfic i have read.Unfortunably the autor kinda baited us with a character which i quite disliked,overall a incredible novel.4.7
Tbh, the story is not my cup of tea, but I can appreciate the writing quality, the protagonist, and world background, hence why I'm rating those highly. I didn't bother rating story development properly and gave it 5 stars by default as I only began reading after the publishing of chapter 45 and am quitting reading at chapter 18 since I'm not going to waste my time reading something which I don't like. Not to say that the author sucks or whatever, just that the idea is not the kind of thing I want to read further than this based on how everything is going so far.
It basically what if we had a better rudeus that not a bad thing but it seems the author is going a different direction of events is stead of a copy paste
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.................... . ........................................ .......... . .............................. .......... . ........................................ .......... . . ........................................... .. . ........................................... .... ... . ................................................ . .......................................
.................... . ........................................ .......... . .............................. .......... . ........................................ .......... . . ........................................... .. . ........................................... .... ... . ................................................ . .......................................
The story is good, interesting and update consistently. Faithfull story material but not blidly follow "cannon" material. I just hope there few time skip or Seraph will not reach 10 years old even after 100 Chapters.
Author-nim please continue this story I love it so much the characters are amazing and so is the world building i love the way you write Seraphim's inner monologues as well. thank you for writing this and i hope for your continued hope and success as you continue to write this.
As Kw0z mentioned, the story is rather boring at the moment. In the original novel, Rifujin was consistently making pervy events here and there and they felt pretty natural. In this novel, nothing really happens... MC keeps getting overpowered everyday and that's pretty much all? You know, you don't need to make MC be fully-overpowered to start cooking the story. At this point i'm getting the feeling Seraph will be King-level at the age of 13 and if it's like that, that'd be really boring :/
This is basically Mushoku Tensei except the MC isn’t as insufferable as Rudeus, I stopped watching the anime just because that kids presence was grating to my soul; with this fanfic I can read about that same world properly. It’s well written and the author clearly has in-depth knowledge about the lore, I haven’t spotted any mistakes in the writing either. Very good quality fic, I suggest you guys read this.
This is a wonderful and outstanding story. I enjoy almost all of it, I've also enjoyed the authors' creative libertys they're taking like the mana disaster not happening and how gravity magic works. The one thing I'd say I don't enjoy about this fic is the way the Mc was reborn, then sent back in time.
Personally, I absolutely love it. However, this may not be for everyone. This story is what it says it is. An overpowered MC that gets strong realistically. To prove this “realness” the author likes to explain the MC’s thought process and expands a lot on the magic system. This often leads to info dumps that I personally love (as I’m really into power systems and like the nitty gritty details), but some readers might not appreciate it and even find it boring. Honestly, this story is about an MC that’s TRAINING to become the strongest and the explanation on how he does it. Not a lot of adventure or action. (At least so far) If you’re looking for an MC that goes around face slapping and swinging his weight around then be prepared to be disappointed as the MC is pretty low key. However, I still recommend this to anyone looking for an interesting read. I loved it and I’m sure many of you will too.