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- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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Locked at 11 chapters right when it seemed to pick up and not bland…… Needs to be unlocked further in my opinion
Bland, and locked chapters way too early…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
I only read 3 chapters and could take no more. The part I read just felt forced, trite and just sad. Then I noticed the early chapter locks and decided nah, not happening. If it had sufficiently grabbed my attention then possibly but when an author locks it early then it is nothing but a cash grab and readers can expect more of the same drivel dished out.
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
Locked at 11 chapters right when it seemed to pick up and not bland…… Needs to be unlocked further in my opinion
Bland, and locked chapters way too early…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
I only read 3 chapters and could take no more. The part I read just felt forced, trite and just sad. Then I noticed the early chapter locks and decided nah, not happening. If it had sufficiently grabbed my attention then possibly but when an author locks it early then it is nothing but a cash grab and readers can expect more of the same drivel dished out.
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?