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Es bastante bueno por lo general los autores suelen chetar a sus personajes de formas absurdamente descaradas (aquí x lo menos te dan un contexto)
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I was enjoying it until the system came in. Completely unneeded for a story like this when the MC did not even need it and was already setup to be strong.
I like it definitely Unique among other pokemon fanfics, The update is kinda slow or maybe I'm just excited to get Chapters
i like the story about mc being a gym leader, especially his cheat, i also like the pokemon battles in his gym with a mix of comedy, overall i like it. please keep updating
Ngl the system kinda ruins the story, it's perfectly fine without one and there isn't even a tag for it.
I like the story idea but the constant explanation of every single moves typing hurts me on an emotional level. There will be almost nobody reading a Pokémon fanfic that doesn’t know most of the moves already and can sus out the rest. Actually made me drop the story during the Red fight.
The simple explanation for this story is “reincarnater becomes gym leader and trolls challengers with the most toxic, cancer inducing strats possible.” It’s hilarious.
This gets a 5 from me you've done an excellent job translating especially since I've checked out the raws and they're real bad to the point that I read one paragraph and was like this does not translate well I noped out of there so fast. My only Complaint is i read 100 chapters in a day now I have to wait for more so I can binge read them again.
I definitely need more I caught up so fast and I'm totally hooked. Love the Gym leader premise, love the despicable Toxic stall and Parafusion tactics etc. Really good just need a few hundred more chapters lol. Hard finding a good Poke Fic on here.
Honestly really like this its new for me if there are any others about being a gym leader id like the recommendations.
Very funny character who is a total troll but in a very funny way very well written. It updates every day at 11 am. Its also very interesting having the Mc be a gym leader while still going on adventures
This is really good, hope the updates keep coming because I practically caught up in a single evening.
Very interesting story so far, i like that the MC has multiple teams as well as using actual strategy against opponents.
The premise is good. Writing is ok. But the 'System' mechanic came out of nowhere, there wasn't even a tag for it. I expected the gym leader mc use his meta-knowledge to his advantage, which he still uses, but those moments feel shallow when he literally uses short-cuts with his System. And the exaggerated female praising is just plain cringe. It's like the author written it with one hand... I certainly hope he wouldn't be one of those mc that treats men different from fem just to show he's the toxic 'alpha male'.... Toxic gym leader I mean.
translator-san, or author, put the raw in the synopsis please, to make this easy for the gang MTL find....
Uma fanfic interessante de pokemon, possui um bom desenvolvimento cuma ressalva do sistema que torna o mc meio op mas que pelo desenvolvimento do autor pode se relevar. No mais uma fanfic que vale a pena sua leitura
This work is very good, when I read it, I couldn't stop reading.I really find this work difficult, keep going and keep up the enthusiasm .iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
It begins with a great start. Bonus gym Gary Oak went against, with an isekai protag. Sadly, it devolves into "system" slop quite fast. The story didn't even need it in the first place as a counter type gym would actually be a fascinating read, but instead we get shortcuts through the beginning where instead of character development we get menus and stuff from doing basic things the MC would have done anyways. Also, we get the regular intelligence debuff for Canon characters that is all too common in this type of story.
Interesting story, love it original content but I think system make the mc too op but still like the story and another plus point of story is that there many good battle
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pretty good............................................. i hope you continue it............................. .......................................................
The writing is good Characters are good but I don’t feel like anyone other than MC will ever get fleshed out It feels like the MC will never loose, which if you like I guess that’s good but otherwise it’s bad Battles are unique and nice which is its strong suit The pokemon the mc uses don’t feel fleshed out To be honest the story is alright it’s good but it could be way better There is a lot of potential in the novel but it is all ruined because of the system. now to people who like system still hear me out. I like systems but only when they are given to mc who either need them or make it interesting. The MC does not need the system he is the sun of a billionaire and posses unique ability(which I am okay with since other people in the world posses them). He does need the system in anyway Honestly to put it into my perspective In one of the latest chp someone goes “wow I wonder how he got so strong it’s so unfair , I wonder who thought him”. And I was like the system the system is literally spoonfeeding him. The novel is so close to perfection, if you want to read for wish fulfillment read it. It’s a really good novel if that’s what you are searching for
Es bastante bueno por lo general los autores suelen chetar a sus personajes de formas absurdamente descaradas (aquí x lo menos te dan un contexto)
merry christmas............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I was enjoying it until the system came in. Completely unneeded for a story like this when the MC did not even need it and was already setup to be strong.
I like it definitely Unique among other pokemon fanfics, The update is kinda slow or maybe I'm just excited to get Chapters
i like the story about mc being a gym leader, especially his cheat, i also like the pokemon battles in his gym with a mix of comedy, overall i like it. please keep updating
Ngl the system kinda ruins the story, it's perfectly fine without one and there isn't even a tag for it.
I like the story idea but the constant explanation of every single moves typing hurts me on an emotional level. There will be almost nobody reading a Pokémon fanfic that doesn’t know most of the moves already and can sus out the rest. Actually made me drop the story during the Red fight.
The simple explanation for this story is “reincarnater becomes gym leader and trolls challengers with the most toxic, cancer inducing strats possible.” It’s hilarious.
This gets a 5 from me you've done an excellent job translating especially since I've checked out the raws and they're real bad to the point that I read one paragraph and was like this does not translate well I noped out of there so fast. My only Complaint is i read 100 chapters in a day now I have to wait for more so I can binge read them again.
I definitely need more I caught up so fast and I'm totally hooked. Love the Gym leader premise, love the despicable Toxic stall and Parafusion tactics etc. Really good just need a few hundred more chapters lol. Hard finding a good Poke Fic on here.
Honestly really like this its new for me if there are any others about being a gym leader id like the recommendations.
Very funny character who is a total troll but in a very funny way very well written. It updates every day at 11 am. Its also very interesting having the Mc be a gym leader while still going on adventures
This is really good, hope the updates keep coming because I practically caught up in a single evening.
Very interesting story so far, i like that the MC has multiple teams as well as using actual strategy against opponents.
The premise is good. Writing is ok. But the 'System' mechanic came out of nowhere, there wasn't even a tag for it. I expected the gym leader mc use his meta-knowledge to his advantage, which he still uses, but those moments feel shallow when he literally uses short-cuts with his System. And the exaggerated female praising is just plain cringe. It's like the author written it with one hand... I certainly hope he wouldn't be one of those mc that treats men different from fem just to show he's the toxic 'alpha male'.... Toxic gym leader I mean.
translator-san, or author, put the raw in the synopsis please, to make this easy for the gang MTL find....
Uma fanfic interessante de pokemon, possui um bom desenvolvimento cuma ressalva do sistema que torna o mc meio op mas que pelo desenvolvimento do autor pode se relevar. No mais uma fanfic que vale a pena sua leitura
This work is very good, when I read it, I couldn't stop reading.I really find this work difficult, keep going and keep up the enthusiasm .iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
It begins with a great start. Bonus gym Gary Oak went against, with an isekai protag. Sadly, it devolves into "system" slop quite fast. The story didn't even need it in the first place as a counter type gym would actually be a fascinating read, but instead we get shortcuts through the beginning where instead of character development we get menus and stuff from doing basic things the MC would have done anyways. Also, we get the regular intelligence debuff for Canon characters that is all too common in this type of story.
Interesting story, love it original content but I think system make the mc too op but still like the story and another plus point of story is that there many good battle
[img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten]
pretty good............................................. i hope you continue it............................. .......................................................
The writing is good Characters are good but I don’t feel like anyone other than MC will ever get fleshed out It feels like the MC will never loose, which if you like I guess that’s good but otherwise it’s bad Battles are unique and nice which is its strong suit The pokemon the mc uses don’t feel fleshed out To be honest the story is alright it’s good but it could be way better There is a lot of potential in the novel but it is all ruined because of the system. now to people who like system still hear me out. I like systems but only when they are given to mc who either need them or make it interesting. The MC does not need the system he is the sun of a billionaire and posses unique ability(which I am okay with since other people in the world posses them). He does need the system in anyway Honestly to put it into my perspective In one of the latest chp someone goes “wow I wonder how he got so strong it’s so unfair , I wonder who thought him”. And I was like the system the system is literally spoonfeeding him. The novel is so close to perfection, if you want to read for wish fulfillment read it. It’s a really good novel if that’s what you are searching for
The system ruined the story. Was absolutely unneeded.