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The grammar is really bad but it gets better. But the first few chapters will seriously give you a headache. I really like the novel but I will stop reading because one thing that is just not acceptable for me : It seems like all the romantic interests will die. The first girl just die when his ship is attacked. the second girl is met when he travels into the past so she is long dead when he returns to the present. I really don't want to read a story where every female leads we get attached to dies.
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very good, not boring, goes a different way than other similar fanfics, sometimes maybe too verbose but I prefer that than too cursory writing.
the writing is horrible. difficult to understand. have used different names for iconic Starwars characters. couldn't get past half of 2nd chapter.
Solid story, would recommend but I feel like I read this on fanfiction.com like 3 or 4 years ago. Could be the same author but just a thought.
Me alegra que no sigas el canon a la fuerza, no soy un gran fan de la franquicia pero me gusta como va la historia, es buena historia sigue con el buen trabajo
everything except grammar, correct terms, and spelling is great. Problem is, the ungreat stuff gives me diarrhea.
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So far it's a great story. However the grammar is absolutely horrendous, very difficult to understand.
I hope the MC ends up with Ahsoka, she's my favorite girl from Star Wars besides Padme is kind of useless, she basically just gave Anakin trouble, the only thing I remember her being useful for is when she stole something from a her ex-boyfriend who was on the side of the separatists
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The grammar is really bad but it gets better. But the first few chapters will seriously give you a headache. I really like the novel but I will stop reading because one thing that is just not acceptable for me : It seems like all the romantic interests will die. The first girl just die when his ship is attacked. the second girl is met when he travels into the past so she is long dead when he returns to the present. I really don't want to read a story where every female leads we get attached to dies.
Revelar Spoiler very good, not boring, goes a different way than other similar fanfics, sometimes maybe too verbose but I prefer that than too cursory writing.
the writing is horrible. difficult to understand. have used different names for iconic Starwars characters. couldn't get past half of 2nd chapter.
Solid story, would recommend but I feel like I read this on fanfiction.com like 3 or 4 years ago. Could be the same author but just a thought.
Me alegra que no sigas el canon a la fuerza, no soy un gran fan de la franquicia pero me gusta como va la historia, es buena historia sigue con el buen trabajo
everything except grammar, correct terms, and spelling is great. Problem is, the ungreat stuff gives me diarrhea.
Alguien me puede decir por qué mierda tiene la etiqueta sistema? Si me pueden responder lo leo ____________________________________________________________________________
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So far it's a great story. However the grammar is absolutely horrendous, very difficult to understand.
I hope the MC ends up with Ahsoka, she's my favorite girl from Star Wars besides Padme is kind of useless, she basically just gave Anakin trouble, the only thing I remember her being useful for is when she stole something from a her ex-boyfriend who was on the side of the separatists
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