Reincarnation: Only I Can Play The Villain

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ponysha

Interesting, but something needs to be done about the names ...........................................................................................

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Epic_Gaming_7548

if it wasn't almost illegible it would be a good story, can i vaguely understand whats happening; yes, does it give me a headache; also yes. the primary issue is the names; 'ji chuan' is the name of the nurse and someone is named 'fire extinguisher' and literally 'nameless.' thank god the mc's name is only 5 letters in total so it isn't messed up... often

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grimmhorizon

when I read your synopsis . I understood it like your character would go back to the real world and take on the protagonist there. more specifically the ones sent back in time to play video games and it was your job to take their opportunities away.i even glanced at your chapter titles and saw virus, I thought damn that's a great idea for those mmorpg protagonists. if the computer has a virus then they cant play the game. it wasnt til I read the story that I realized the dungeons were different worlds.

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Daos_Nine_Heavens

Это хорошо но перевод немного плох[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Sohal_Ahmed_2001

The story is interesting but please properly translate it

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Marc_5685

good fanfi .......................................................................................................................................................

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Lizrock

1 punto por no traducir los nombres bien. [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

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Daos_Nine_Heavens

Хорошо [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Lycrat

Please edit it, otherwise it's a good story.

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Daos_Nine_Heavens

Перевод очень плохой ничего не понятно[img=Безмолвный][img=Безмолвный][img=Безмолвный][img=Безмолвный][img=Безмолвный][img=Безмолвный][img=Безмолвный][img=Безмолвный][img=Безмолвный][img=Безмолвный][img=Безмолвный][img=Безмолвный][img=Безмолвный]

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rerizzen

this needs to be translated properly and it would be a good story