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it good but the mc is kinda edgy/cringe in path he took. I mean its ok if join/hunter like hunter guild so he can be neutral to the organization or he can be an adventure. but then suddenly he something like hunter guild, dream hunter etc with watch fabulous uniform(lol) then even his recruitment is kinda something what i kid might make. that part of the idk has same vibe with 'the power of friendship troupe'
ok, i read the raw, and plus 120 here, and if this history end here, i will be satisfied, is a complete new view of one piece world, the author put some time skip, but, it's became great, one of the best one piece fanfic this i read, for a short history 150~ chapter, don't know if break or finished, but, this is gorgeous... i come for the silver, and find this shining gold, good work translator, you are doing a great job, keep the good work, and i gonna be reading here with you, is literally, a great fic. thank you. for theses this doesn't know, is harem, only three or four till now, and this fourth is because it is not really confirmed, it is MTL... is hard to understand, the author doesn't make this easy, but, after the time skip, this come as a happy surprised.... wait and read, because this is worth u.u
So far, so good. the only problem (for me) is it's a bit slow-paced. like; an entire chapter only tells about the news of the world.
for translation I would give 3.5 half stars just keep posting what's the original name 🐧
this fic is indeed translated, however if you haven't mastered the skill "brain stroke while reading" this translation isn't worth reading until the translator finally understood the importance of editing. the fic itself is okay promising even, however the premise is that the translation and the much needed globalization have improved considrably. for global readers this translation is bad, not that the translator is bad at it but its just that he does not know how to edit and globalize a chinese works.
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The progress of the story so far is good, it needs more chapters, the MC is good it only needs MORE CHAPTERS I'm rating this 5 Stars for now cause I'm a huge fan of OP MC and OP Sword users, a reccomended FF to read
It's good to read, despite having Chinese elements, it's not that boring... it's just boring sometimes, but most of the time it doesn't add that much to the story, so you can skip it.
i swear this had more chapters and had better flow? like i was just reading it then boom no where to be seen but this one. im so confused
I would definitely give this story a read it has a sold story with some interesting plot developments
it good but the mc is kinda edgy/cringe in path he took. I mean its ok if join/hunter like hunter guild so he can be neutral to the organization or he can be an adventure. but then suddenly he something like hunter guild, dream hunter etc with watch fabulous uniform(lol) then even his recruitment is kinda something what i kid might make. that part of the idk has same vibe with 'the power of friendship troupe'
ok, i read the raw, and plus 120 here, and if this history end here, i will be satisfied, is a complete new view of one piece world, the author put some time skip, but, it's became great, one of the best one piece fanfic this i read, for a short history 150~ chapter, don't know if break or finished, but, this is gorgeous... i come for the silver, and find this shining gold, good work translator, you are doing a great job, keep the good work, and i gonna be reading here with you, is literally, a great fic. thank you. for theses this doesn't know, is harem, only three or four till now, and this fourth is because it is not really confirmed, it is MTL... is hard to understand, the author doesn't make this easy, but, after the time skip, this come as a happy surprised.... wait and read, because this is worth u.u
So far, so good. the only problem (for me) is it's a bit slow-paced. like; an entire chapter only tells about the news of the world.
for translation I would give 3.5 half stars just keep posting what's the original name 🐧
this fic is indeed translated, however if you haven't mastered the skill "brain stroke while reading" this translation isn't worth reading until the translator finally understood the importance of editing. the fic itself is okay promising even, however the premise is that the translation and the much needed globalization have improved considrably. for global readers this translation is bad, not that the translator is bad at it but its just that he does not know how to edit and globalize a chinese works.
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The progress of the story so far is good, it needs more chapters, the MC is good it only needs MORE CHAPTERS I'm rating this 5 Stars for now cause I'm a huge fan of OP MC and OP Sword users, a reccomended FF to read
It's good to read, despite having Chinese elements, it's not that boring... it's just boring sometimes, but most of the time it doesn't add that much to the story, so you can skip it.
i swear this had more chapters and had better flow? like i was just reading it then boom no where to be seen but this one. im so confused
I would definitely give this story a read it has a sold story with some interesting plot developments