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من برای فصل بعدی کلی هیجان دارم امیدوارم کیفیت نویسندگیت افزایش پیدا کنه چون این فن فیک پتانسیل کافی داره و اینکه امیدوارم درباره واکنش مردم روی اتفاق های متفاوت از مسیر اصلی داستان وقت بیشتری بزاری💪 موفق باشی
Давно уже хотел фанфики про этого персонажа почитать. Спасибо вам за работу и продолжайте дальше в том же духе. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Gona give myself a 5 star and Thank you all for all support!! If you have questions feel free to leave below and i try answer them
Good story so far, just keep your feet on the ground and don't give a very absurd and unnecessary power up, the character already has the advantage of being able to escape from fruit users by sea. use this ability and faith in the story, will there be romance? if there is, choose a female character who is not cliché, I recommend one of the big mom pirates... Also show Marco's generous side, in the original work he is very nice and a capable doctor, I hope you explore this side.
Its great, a bit slow start but picks up quickly, great translation, the MC is interesting, takes no BS no prisoners i hope it continiues...
Gona give myself a 5 star and Thank you all for all support!! If you have questions feel free to leave below and i try answer them [img=proud]
Finnally we get to see marco use phoenix to its potentional -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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This is actually really great so far, Nice take on what happens during 2 time skip and Marco starting to hunt down his enemies and possibly re-shape the once whitebeard pirates?
YESS finally a fanfic where the phoenix fruit main focus, i always tought with strong haki its the most OP ...................................
Marco Phoenix is my favorite character, well his devil fruit is. Love this take how he becoems the hunter and we see him more offensive and how he uses healing factor as advantage in fights rather just defend
من برای فصل بعدی کلی هیجان دارم امیدوارم کیفیت نویسندگیت افزایش پیدا کنه چون این فن فیک پتانسیل کافی داره و اینکه امیدوارم درباره واکنش مردم روی اتفاق های متفاوت از مسیر اصلی داستان وقت بیشتری بزاری💪 موفق باشی
Давно уже хотел фанфики про этого персонажа почитать. Спасибо вам за работу и продолжайте дальше в том же духе. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Gona give myself a 5 star and Thank you all for all support!! If you have questions feel free to leave below and i try answer them
Good story so far, just keep your feet on the ground and don't give a very absurd and unnecessary power up, the character already has the advantage of being able to escape from fruit users by sea. use this ability and faith in the story, will there be romance? if there is, choose a female character who is not cliché, I recommend one of the big mom pirates... Also show Marco's generous side, in the original work he is very nice and a capable doctor, I hope you explore this side.
Its great, a bit slow start but picks up quickly, great translation, the MC is interesting, takes no BS no prisoners i hope it continiues...
Gona give myself a 5 star and Thank you all for all support!! If you have questions feel free to leave below and i try answer them [img=proud]
Finnally we get to see marco use phoenix to its potentional -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
[img=disgusted][img=proud][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=disgusted][img=proud][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=disgusted][img=proud][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
This is actually really great so far, Nice take on what happens during 2 time skip and Marco starting to hunt down his enemies and possibly re-shape the once whitebeard pirates?
YESS finally a fanfic where the phoenix fruit main focus, i always tought with strong haki its the most OP ...................................
Marco Phoenix is my favorite character, well his devil fruit is. Love this take how he becoems the hunter and we see him more offensive and how he uses healing factor as advantage in fights rather just defend
