Reincarnated with a Country Creation System

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MobsterShark

Got about 12 chapters in. The dialog is pretty weird. Not terrible. Feels unnatural. The MC is a hypocrite who adds nothing to the story even though it is about him. A random time skip happens with no mention from the author? Overall it seemed like a mess thrown together and called a story

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Michele_Lopes

I read all your histories, hope one day u do a Alexander the Great based novel. or one in Germany before WWĺl. love your write.

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IIIXIIII

It’s a “SorryImJustDiamond” Book what did you expect

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Zero_36

10/10 great novel loving every second of it

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Jarod_Lane_8547

WOW. This is a great find, I really hope you continue with this it has the potential to be so amazing. Good job author you have my support!

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GGCalamity

Review after 110+ Chapter. While reading this novel i have noticed 3 problems. 1: It has way too many plot holes, certain things Don't make sense. We are introduced to too many things all at once and honestly most of them Don't make sense. 2: For me personally at least, the narrative is very confusing. Many Important things are not explained and this creates a lot of confusion. 3: I'm sure at least some people reading this has realized, the words and sentences feel like they are A.I generated. I personally Don't think that the author is at fault for using it. I've seen many others use it mostly to fix spelling mistakes and such. But the amount of the Unity, Friendship and other nonsense is just too much in this novel. I sincerely hope that author see my review and try to fix some of these problems in the future, i Believe this novel has great potential and i am also a fan of Author's previous works which is why this is bugging me even more than usual.

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AaatEae

MC serves 0 purpose like everything is handled by system & the people it's summoned. even after 100 chapters, MC is still a dumbass who just sits around and does fuck all & contributes nothing to the country he was given. y'all go read something else with some depth

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Mewmoewer

I am at ch 60+ however it is different from your other works are you using AI on this?

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Epic_Buddie123

A interesting and incredible story that deserves to be read! An dtoryline that get you intruigt and close to the world with the background not lacking!

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Ray_Bonavente_2245

Does the author forget the mc has a system?

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Ha_Loo

wtf is this novel... everything is syste m work..

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usman_farooq

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Cussy_jackson

Pretty fun Mc nation is basically Madagascar