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Other then the story being far better then the goofy dxd fics that exist in this platform. It also doesn’t follow the generic story line which can get stale as part of the charms of reading a fic is seeing a different take on the story. Also the author is my gf gotta support my lover fr fr❤️🔥
10/10 story, amazing plot, great plot, great writing stability, great grammar, amazing upload schedule, kissable author that I wanna bend over fr, overall would recommend to everyone.
this story feels like it was written by someone with an underdeveloped brain or mentally disabled. the characters are so badly written and the dialogue is so cringe it feels like and is written like a wish fulfillment story. on top of that the mc is just boring i couldn’t keep reading a boring and repetitive mc anymore.
Aburrido 😒 🥱 《● ■》 <_______> / \ / \ ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
sweet chilli green potatoes, sweet chilli green potatoes, sweet chilli green potatoes
este fanfic es oro, hace tiempo no me reía con una novela así y sobre todo alguien alfil escribe sobre vermeil, Best waifu forever PD: un crosover con el amigo en el futuro sería genial, puro desastre sería eso
The writing quality is good but not awesome, there are are few ( very very few ) grammar mistakes such as incorrect use of form of verb or a comma missing, but still easily readable. Loving this fic, hope you don't drop it.
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here's a proper review since i see none on this fic. the writing quality is decent barely any spelling mistake updates are pretty frequent as well. however the characters are lazily written while the premise of the story was that the mc will be a lazy bum it also blocks off any realistic character development. his relation with his sister and maid are just too cliche the typical bro con older sister and a maid who gets jealous over someone else serving the mc. And why would great red of all beings have a complex for serving the mc even if he was asked to be his maid there was no development about their relation . there is only few chapters worth of material right now to give a longer review currently. however up until now the story has been pretty mid. it is not bad per say but its one of those lazily written stories that has really noting going around them and you read them only out of boredom.
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I love it he is living 1 fifth of my dream just sleeping all the time very good character building so far good too love it
Here's a simple recipe for red sauce pasta: Ingredients - 250g pasta (your choice) - 2 tablespoons olive oil - 3 cloves garlic, minced - 1 onion, chopped - 1 can (400g) crushed tomatoes - 1 tablespoon tomato paste - 1 teaspoon sugar - Salt and pepper to taste - 1 teaspoon dried basil - 1 teaspoon dried oregano - Fresh basil leaves for garnish - Grated Parmesan cheese (optional) Instructions 1. Cook Pasta: Boil pasta in salted water according to package instructions until al dente. Drain and set aside. 2. Prepare Sauce: - Heat olive oil in a pan over medium heat. - Sauté garlic and onion until soft and translucent. - Add crushed tomatoes and tomato paste. - Stir in sugar, salt, pepper, basil, and oregano. - Simmer for 10-15 minutes, stirring occasionally. 3. Combine: - Add the cooked pasta to the sauce. - Toss until pasta is well-coated with the sauce. 4. Serve: - Garnish with fresh basil leaves. - Sprinkle with Parmesan cheese if desired. Enjoy your delicious red sauce pasta!
Ngl, i like this Fic, i always enjoy seeing it get a new Chap cuz i can't help but be excited about what will happen next. of course, there are some annoying parts such as Harem, but it's DxD, and at this point, it's a customary. Also KYS
Other then the story being far better then the goofy dxd fics that exist in this platform. It also doesn’t follow the generic story line which can get stale as part of the charms of reading a fic is seeing a different take on the story. Also the author is my gf gotta support my lover fr fr❤️🔥
10/10 story, amazing plot, great plot, great writing stability, great grammar, amazing upload schedule, kissable author that I wanna bend over fr, overall would recommend to everyone.
this story feels like it was written by someone with an underdeveloped brain or mentally disabled. the characters are so badly written and the dialogue is so cringe it feels like and is written like a wish fulfillment story. on top of that the mc is just boring i couldn’t keep reading a boring and repetitive mc anymore.
Aburrido 😒 🥱 《● ■》 <_______> / \ / \ ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
sweet chilli green potatoes, sweet chilli green potatoes, sweet chilli green potatoes
este fanfic es oro, hace tiempo no me reía con una novela así y sobre todo alguien alfil escribe sobre vermeil, Best waifu forever PD: un crosover con el amigo en el futuro sería genial, puro desastre sería eso
The writing quality is good but not awesome, there are are few ( very very few ) grammar mistakes such as incorrect use of form of verb or a comma missing, but still easily readable. Loving this fic, hope you don't drop it.
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here's a proper review since i see none on this fic. the writing quality is decent barely any spelling mistake updates are pretty frequent as well. however the characters are lazily written while the premise of the story was that the mc will be a lazy bum it also blocks off any realistic character development. his relation with his sister and maid are just too cliche the typical bro con older sister and a maid who gets jealous over someone else serving the mc. And why would great red of all beings have a complex for serving the mc even if he was asked to be his maid there was no development about their relation . there is only few chapters worth of material right now to give a longer review currently. however up until now the story has been pretty mid. it is not bad per say but its one of those lazily written stories that has really noting going around them and you read them only out of boredom.
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I love it he is living 1 fifth of my dream just sleeping all the time very good character building so far good too love it
Here's a simple recipe for red sauce pasta: Ingredients - 250g pasta (your choice) - 2 tablespoons olive oil - 3 cloves garlic, minced - 1 onion, chopped - 1 can (400g) crushed tomatoes - 1 tablespoon tomato paste - 1 teaspoon sugar - Salt and pepper to taste - 1 teaspoon dried basil - 1 teaspoon dried oregano - Fresh basil leaves for garnish - Grated Parmesan cheese (optional) Instructions 1. Cook Pasta: Boil pasta in salted water according to package instructions until al dente. Drain and set aside. 2. Prepare Sauce: - Heat olive oil in a pan over medium heat. - Sauté garlic and onion until soft and translucent. - Add crushed tomatoes and tomato paste. - Stir in sugar, salt, pepper, basil, and oregano. - Simmer for 10-15 minutes, stirring occasionally. 3. Combine: - Add the cooked pasta to the sauce. - Toss until pasta is well-coated with the sauce. 4. Serve: - Garnish with fresh basil leaves. - Sprinkle with Parmesan cheese if desired. Enjoy your delicious red sauce pasta!
Ngl, i like this Fic, i always enjoy seeing it get a new Chap cuz i can't help but be excited about what will happen next. of course, there are some annoying parts such as Harem, but it's DxD, and at this point, it's a customary. Also KYS