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I like how the story progresses, keep writing Author this is a masterpiece, and highly recommended can't wait to read the next update 🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
Gave the Writing quality a 2 because it was still coherent and understandable in the beginning, story development there's really nothing much to say here apart from the fact that again in tgw beginning it was alright with the world building and his skills but it all went down the drain, the worst part of all these is that the mc gets NTrd almost all his girls sleep with one man or the other, at some point the author just changed MC name to Rae. All in all it was pretty good at the start but everything starts going downhill at the story progresses a shame. NTR novel but the MC gets NTRD a waste of time.
Haha, this is good! The smut scenes are very to my liking, and there's a lot of them too! The story idea is also very interesting. Looking forward for more. But author, you need a synopsis!
Man... how could you? you make a kinky and beautiful emotional naration of smut story and just giving me that much and then just return to normal chapter right after that. give me back my horniness! >:c
Really *cultured* :) Read this if you are a man of culture looking for a good read
Author here, I am trying to develop the characters and write a world where the MC would get woman but not everyone of them, trying to keep it real. I appreciate suggestion, Criticism, as well as your opinion.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing advance chapters of this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
I like how the story progresses, keep writing Author this is a masterpiece, and highly recommended can't wait to read the next update 🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
Gave the Writing quality a 2 because it was still coherent and understandable in the beginning, story development there's really nothing much to say here apart from the fact that again in tgw beginning it was alright with the world building and his skills but it all went down the drain, the worst part of all these is that the mc gets NTrd almost all his girls sleep with one man or the other, at some point the author just changed MC name to Rae. All in all it was pretty good at the start but everything starts going downhill at the story progresses a shame. NTR novel but the MC gets NTRD a waste of time.
Haha, this is good! The smut scenes are very to my liking, and there's a lot of them too! The story idea is also very interesting. Looking forward for more. But author, you need a synopsis!
Man... how could you? you make a kinky and beautiful emotional naration of smut story and just giving me that much and then just return to normal chapter right after that. give me back my horniness! >:c
Really *cultured* :) Read this if you are a man of culture looking for a good read
Author here, I am trying to develop the characters and write a world where the MC would get woman but not everyone of them, trying to keep it real. I appreciate suggestion, Criticism, as well as your opinion.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing advance chapters of this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you