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This book ruined all other books on this site for me. Only one I come back for daily and pay for the unreleased chapters. Story is beyond great worth ever second you read. Writing quality is peak anywhere but it does slow down a little around 100-150 but don’t let that discourage you because even that is still gold. But it gets better after 150 every chapter is a banger and it has been consistently getting better all the way to 500+. The story is developed and characters have personality, Lucavion is one of if not the best protagonist I’ve read. Motivations are there and the banter is great. Worth trying at least
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hey author, if I am being honest this novel has a good story as a hole and mc's character development was great UNTIL the battlefield. After that dialogue like "raising his hands in mock surrender" , "his smirk, grin" or what not. Now whenever I read ,the mc feels very cringe and it sends shivers on my spine. He is too f*cking arrogant. Now if you want to make improvement in his character make him less cringe or remove his smirk from his face. he has become a typical Chinese mc .Now if you don't want any advice then you can ignore this msg👊
I liked story and emotional description of characters how they feel as well as points of views from different directions
Aside from pacing everything else is well done imo. Since the authors'sapproach of writing is different it's understandable plot progression even after dozens of chaps
This is a good story but got my blood boiling to the point I might just have broken my phone cuz how and why that mf mc is crying like an idiot, if it were me I would be glad that my(mc's parents) left me alive. I will fight and survive and become unbelievably strong and then give them death at last after killing those Duke bastards first. Cuz in my diary, who ever hurts or harms me, I will kill them, no matter who it is.
what is it with authors obsessing with creating a wimpy mc that gets abused at the start, its just so unenjoyable to read, and dont try to hide it under the disguise of "character development" just lame overall, if the tone is like this already 13 chapters i already know how its gonna progress dont waste your time on this one
Mc has a hero/ saviour complex. Mc is confused weather he should be depressed/ all gloomy or cheerful. It's fill with cringe heroism. Unrealistic intelligence of the mc. Power level is screwed. And all the same crap like other extra's novel on web novel, unnecessary interference by killing the main story before it even start and reason being for paving the path for original mc. It's a crap story if the person reading it has an even a shred of intelligence.
CAUTION --anyone who reads my comments ... don't read this book .. it's a drug .. author created a drug .I am warning you not to read this book if you read you will be addicted to it..... [img=update]
This story is incredible imo, char development and world building is excellent, writing shifts between really good and somewhat useless at times, but for people who like the weak to strong edgy mc’s I think this is for you. The pacing can be off, but I’m really enjoying it :)
when does he meet elara again. What chapter? if he still did not meet her in 400 chapters, I'll drop
Amazing story ! Really love the development of the main cast it’s my best part of the novel for me, the development of relation between the cast feel alive and genuine even if Lucarion can be frustrating sometime. The writing also improved from the beginning of the book even if I have hard time reading in English I can feel it. Keep going author im really hyped for the rest of the story.
I hope it is like Author's pov and novel's extra, other than that I read a lot of chapters on my other account and it does the trope well enough, the mc maybe juts lacks depth sometimes
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Hello I'm new here,there's a question I want to ask the writer of this book is JESSE going to be together with our MC please Answer My question is burning In my mind , because I don't like novel where the writer gives stage light to a character falling in love with the mc and at the end all the developments become useless when the mc did not accept her.
The start of this novel was so forced. Also the author doesn't seem to understand the meaning of transmigration. What's the point of transmigration if his memory are sealed? And even when they come back they don't seem to have much of an impact in the story. And last but not the least the author talks about his novel having a lot emotions. I get that but why create all this frustrating moments without a way for us readers to release them. Where's the satisfaction in that? That's basically like mentally torturing us readers. And to think that some readers actually lik. that seems pretty sadistic to me including the author. What I mean by that is add some fucking revenge.
Such an amazing story. The character development of not just the Mc but also the supporting cast is great. Originally read hunter academy then found out the author had another novel. Haven’t payed for privilege chapters in a while but had to with this. Not only does the story not stagnant or get boring it improves. On top of that I think the writing has gotten much better in recent chapters; I feel it flows much clearer and the dialogue feels more real. The only negative thing i’d have to say is the small grammar errors, but that is completety reasonable considering the update frequency and the lack of a proof reader. The fact your doing this all well in what I assume is college is crazy to me. This update frequency well taking classes is wild. Keep it up author u the goat.
Hello brother kindly restart Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses novel please... We are waiting please consider my opinion you are good novel writer...
It is official, we novel has been taken over By A. I stories. This novel after ch 50+ is completely A. I Generated Nonsense. It's to the point you can't enjoy the story regardless of how goodly it's worded or written. There's that Itch, that human flavor and soul that this story doesn't possess. The author doesn't even bother to hide it, atleast he should make a statement that he used A. I despite it being so clearly written By A. I Final Thoughts: If I or anyone else wanted to Enjoy such A. I Garbage we would've done it and not come here to read it on Webnovel.
I'm sorry for my English, but I love reading so much that even Google Translate doesn't become an obstacle. The story started fantastically, the atmosphere, the tension, even through the translator, the flow of words captured me headlong. It was the first time in a very long time that a short story could evoke such strong emotions in me. I thought it was a masterpiece! But I was very much mistaken... Up until the hero's escape from the battlefield into the forest, everything was gorgeous, not a single unnecessary phrase of an event or character, at least I didn't notice any flaws, but then it went downhill. If earlier I couldn't tear myself away from the work, then when the forest arch came I thought ‘when will it finally end?’ It was very boring and unnecessary. The hero could have understood the power of death on the battlefield or later and nothing would have changed. The quest with the new sword is also not very good. The feeling of ‘the hero needs a sword at any cost’ was rather ‘it would be nice to get a sword’. Yes, we were shown that the current sword would not withstand the new power, but in the same chapter we were told that it was due to a lack of control. The value of the new sword plummets. But this is nothing compared to the most disappointing thing. The hero suddenly, for no apparent reason, became a sage of psychology and philosophy. When he was giving advice to a girl from a military camp, it seemed logical, the hero was sharing his own experience. However, after leaving the forest, the hero begins to teach a mythical beast, sees through every person, has deep philosophical conversations and is generally the coolest schemer in the world.I have only one question: where in this damned forest can I sign up for courses in philosophy and psychology? Why is the hero so playful? Did he learn this on the battlefield where death is everywhere? Or maybe in a forest filled with monsters? Where did this change come from? But if the author wants to... Cat, absolutely useless and unnecessary character 227 chapter and only three useful things she did: taught the hero the fire of life, helped to tie up the bandits 1 time, and helped to absorb the energy of death from the fish. I love cats, but I have never seen such a useless character in my life. And finally, the last drawback. The author has a stereotype that men don't understand hints. That is, men do not understand the true meaning of their partner's words. Words that are spoken with the mouth. But in this work, I noticed a thing that every character, from an aristocrat to a waitress in a distant village, understands on an instinctive level what a subtle glint in the eyes, a subtle change in tone, a subtle change in smile, and the rest of the body language means. All the people in the novel are lie detectors of the highest level. That's why I was very curious when the author sat on the splits. I mean the episode when the pink knight noticed how the hero's expression changed when he looked at the dumplings, and did not understand the hints of the girl from the Cult. It's a fiasco when the hero needs to understand what lies behind the glint in the eye and the same hero doesn't understand the hints in words!!!!
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one of the best novel i have come across....authors story writing and character set up is awesome....definitely recommented to read u wont be getting bored ..🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
it was going great until the mc met the female protag again and after he ruined her life and her hater for him she somehow forgot his face that right that can tell you how bad the rest of the novel is gonna be
Seen a few comments and reviews on here saying that this is A.I. I was curious myself so i put it into multiple trusted A.I detectors and various recommended plagiarism checkers, all of which said that it is human written. There are also a few grammatical errors which would not happen if it was written by A.I (for example, occasionally forgetting to put speech marks at the beginning of dialogue, adding an extra full stop when using ellipsis, and more). Just wanted to write this to dispel some of the comments that may stop other readers from reading this because this book is pretty good and is NOT A.I.
15 Chapters Long prologue. Supreme Use Of Chatgpt. Waste Of Time. I Regret Reading It. I really should have read The reviews first.
ngl i read this out of being bored and enjoyed it more than i thought i would. some parts of cringe but what i personally like is the type of weapon the mc uses. finally! not a katana
The writing isn't bad, but the number of spelling errors and what I assume is auto corrected words make it difficult to stay immersed in the story.
Author: I really enjoyed another of your works and that's why I started reading this one with excitement but I'm suffering a lot from reading the first volume. I understand the point and why you do it but I think that thinking that I have to endure volume 1 to enjoy the novel is wrong, I see it when there are already many chapters. If I read it when it just started I would stop without hesitation even if they promise me or tell me that it will get better later. After reading 50 chapters I don't know if I like the novel or the story. I'm curious and hopeful but I don't think I'll enjoy it. I'm writing the review here because in normal cases I would abandon it, but I'll read a little more.
suprisingly bad for how well it starts, too many shallow characters and dialogue, protagonist has murder addiction, its tecnically a transmigation but a large part of it doesn't feel like it, there too much unecessary exposition and kinda repetitive, some things even get repeated in another pov. At some point i just started skipping stuff and it didn't feel like i missed anything important
After the first volume, everything is too drawn out. ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎
Amazing book with a beautiful storyline. Unlike a lot of other books on this site you can tell that this author is actually taking the time to explore our characters development and build a story, instead of the usual wake up and power up we can see our characters struggle and humanity. The common sense that a lot of novels tend to lose in exchange for a rush to power ups.
Hello, Author here. In this thread, I will clarify some questions regarding the start of the book, and you can treat it as a Q&A as well. Firstly, the novel will seem a little odd to you at the start since it starts differently. But, I must insist that you read the free chapters, the first volume, until the end and bear with it a little since it is just an introduction to the work. I know at the start of the novel, Lucavion doesn't start as your typical main character of such novels, which is something I intended since, at the start of the novel, the main character is 14 years old and mentally unstable due to all the events surrounding him. Even though I know it may be frustrating to read a little, I also think that it is an accurate description of how a person who was put into such a position would think at those moments and the type of psychology that they would have. However, at the end of the first volume, his mentality and everything will have undergone a huge change, making it a lot more readable, and from then on, the story will stretch with many interpersonal relationships going on. For now, this is all I have to say about the book, and you may continue with your questions here. I will answer them if I can.
This book ruined all other books on this site for me. Only one I come back for daily and pay for the unreleased chapters. Story is beyond great worth ever second you read. Writing quality is peak anywhere but it does slow down a little around 100-150 but don’t let that discourage you because even that is still gold. But it gets better after 150 every chapter is a banger and it has been consistently getting better all the way to 500+. The story is developed and characters have personality, Lucavion is one of if not the best protagonist I’ve read. Motivations are there and the banter is great. Worth trying at least
Revelar Spoiler hey author, if I am being honest this novel has a good story as a hole and mc's character development was great UNTIL the battlefield. After that dialogue like "raising his hands in mock surrender" , "his smirk, grin" or what not. Now whenever I read ,the mc feels very cringe and it sends shivers on my spine. He is too f*cking arrogant. Now if you want to make improvement in his character make him less cringe or remove his smirk from his face. he has become a typical Chinese mc .Now if you don't want any advice then you can ignore this msg👊
I liked story and emotional description of characters how they feel as well as points of views from different directions
Aside from pacing everything else is well done imo. Since the authors'sapproach of writing is different it's understandable plot progression even after dozens of chaps
This is a good story but got my blood boiling to the point I might just have broken my phone cuz how and why that mf mc is crying like an idiot, if it were me I would be glad that my(mc's parents) left me alive. I will fight and survive and become unbelievably strong and then give them death at last after killing those Duke bastards first. Cuz in my diary, who ever hurts or harms me, I will kill them, no matter who it is.
what is it with authors obsessing with creating a wimpy mc that gets abused at the start, its just so unenjoyable to read, and dont try to hide it under the disguise of "character development" just lame overall, if the tone is like this already 13 chapters i already know how its gonna progress dont waste your time on this one
Mc has a hero/ saviour complex. Mc is confused weather he should be depressed/ all gloomy or cheerful. It's fill with cringe heroism. Unrealistic intelligence of the mc. Power level is screwed. And all the same crap like other extra's novel on web novel, unnecessary interference by killing the main story before it even start and reason being for paving the path for original mc. It's a crap story if the person reading it has an even a shred of intelligence.
CAUTION --anyone who reads my comments ... don't read this book .. it's a drug .. author created a drug .I am warning you not to read this book if you read you will be addicted to it..... [img=update]
This story is incredible imo, char development and world building is excellent, writing shifts between really good and somewhat useless at times, but for people who like the weak to strong edgy mc’s I think this is for you. The pacing can be off, but I’m really enjoying it :)
when does he meet elara again. What chapter? if he still did not meet her in 400 chapters, I'll drop
Amazing story ! Really love the development of the main cast it’s my best part of the novel for me, the development of relation between the cast feel alive and genuine even if Lucarion can be frustrating sometime. The writing also improved from the beginning of the book even if I have hard time reading in English I can feel it. Keep going author im really hyped for the rest of the story.
I hope it is like Author's pov and novel's extra, other than that I read a lot of chapters on my other account and it does the trope well enough, the mc maybe juts lacks depth sometimes
Revelar Spoiler Hello I'm new here,there's a question I want to ask the writer of this book is JESSE going to be together with our MC please Answer My question is burning In my mind , because I don't like novel where the writer gives stage light to a character falling in love with the mc and at the end all the developments become useless when the mc did not accept her.
The start of this novel was so forced. Also the author doesn't seem to understand the meaning of transmigration. What's the point of transmigration if his memory are sealed? And even when they come back they don't seem to have much of an impact in the story. And last but not the least the author talks about his novel having a lot emotions. I get that but why create all this frustrating moments without a way for us readers to release them. Where's the satisfaction in that? That's basically like mentally torturing us readers. And to think that some readers actually lik. that seems pretty sadistic to me including the author. What I mean by that is add some fucking revenge.
Such an amazing story. The character development of not just the Mc but also the supporting cast is great. Originally read hunter academy then found out the author had another novel. Haven’t payed for privilege chapters in a while but had to with this. Not only does the story not stagnant or get boring it improves. On top of that I think the writing has gotten much better in recent chapters; I feel it flows much clearer and the dialogue feels more real. The only negative thing i’d have to say is the small grammar errors, but that is completety reasonable considering the update frequency and the lack of a proof reader. The fact your doing this all well in what I assume is college is crazy to me. This update frequency well taking classes is wild. Keep it up author u the goat.
Hello brother kindly restart Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses novel please... We are waiting please consider my opinion you are good novel writer...
It is official, we novel has been taken over By A. I stories. This novel after ch 50+ is completely A. I Generated Nonsense. It's to the point you can't enjoy the story regardless of how goodly it's worded or written. There's that Itch, that human flavor and soul that this story doesn't possess. The author doesn't even bother to hide it, atleast he should make a statement that he used A. I despite it being so clearly written By A. I Final Thoughts: If I or anyone else wanted to Enjoy such A. I Garbage we would've done it and not come here to read it on Webnovel.
I'm sorry for my English, but I love reading so much that even Google Translate doesn't become an obstacle. The story started fantastically, the atmosphere, the tension, even through the translator, the flow of words captured me headlong. It was the first time in a very long time that a short story could evoke such strong emotions in me. I thought it was a masterpiece! But I was very much mistaken... Up until the hero's escape from the battlefield into the forest, everything was gorgeous, not a single unnecessary phrase of an event or character, at least I didn't notice any flaws, but then it went downhill. If earlier I couldn't tear myself away from the work, then when the forest arch came I thought ‘when will it finally end?’ It was very boring and unnecessary. The hero could have understood the power of death on the battlefield or later and nothing would have changed. The quest with the new sword is also not very good. The feeling of ‘the hero needs a sword at any cost’ was rather ‘it would be nice to get a sword’. Yes, we were shown that the current sword would not withstand the new power, but in the same chapter we were told that it was due to a lack of control. The value of the new sword plummets. But this is nothing compared to the most disappointing thing. The hero suddenly, for no apparent reason, became a sage of psychology and philosophy. When he was giving advice to a girl from a military camp, it seemed logical, the hero was sharing his own experience. However, after leaving the forest, the hero begins to teach a mythical beast, sees through every person, has deep philosophical conversations and is generally the coolest schemer in the world.I have only one question: where in this damned forest can I sign up for courses in philosophy and psychology? Why is the hero so playful? Did he learn this on the battlefield where death is everywhere? Or maybe in a forest filled with monsters? Where did this change come from? But if the author wants to... Cat, absolutely useless and unnecessary character 227 chapter and only three useful things she did: taught the hero the fire of life, helped to tie up the bandits 1 time, and helped to absorb the energy of death from the fish. I love cats, but I have never seen such a useless character in my life. And finally, the last drawback. The author has a stereotype that men don't understand hints. That is, men do not understand the true meaning of their partner's words. Words that are spoken with the mouth. But in this work, I noticed a thing that every character, from an aristocrat to a waitress in a distant village, understands on an instinctive level what a subtle glint in the eyes, a subtle change in tone, a subtle change in smile, and the rest of the body language means. All the people in the novel are lie detectors of the highest level. That's why I was very curious when the author sat on the splits. I mean the episode when the pink knight noticed how the hero's expression changed when he looked at the dumplings, and did not understand the hints of the girl from the Cult. It's a fiasco when the hero needs to understand what lies behind the glint in the eye and the same hero doesn't understand the hints in words!!!!
Revelar Spoiler one of the best novel i have come across....authors story writing and character set up is awesome....definitely recommented to read u wont be getting bored ..🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
it was going great until the mc met the female protag again and after he ruined her life and her hater for him she somehow forgot his face that right that can tell you how bad the rest of the novel is gonna be
Seen a few comments and reviews on here saying that this is A.I. I was curious myself so i put it into multiple trusted A.I detectors and various recommended plagiarism checkers, all of which said that it is human written. There are also a few grammatical errors which would not happen if it was written by A.I (for example, occasionally forgetting to put speech marks at the beginning of dialogue, adding an extra full stop when using ellipsis, and more). Just wanted to write this to dispel some of the comments that may stop other readers from reading this because this book is pretty good and is NOT A.I.
15 Chapters Long prologue. Supreme Use Of Chatgpt. Waste Of Time. I Regret Reading It. I really should have read The reviews first.
ngl i read this out of being bored and enjoyed it more than i thought i would. some parts of cringe but what i personally like is the type of weapon the mc uses. finally! not a katana
The writing isn't bad, but the number of spelling errors and what I assume is auto corrected words make it difficult to stay immersed in the story.
Author: I really enjoyed another of your works and that's why I started reading this one with excitement but I'm suffering a lot from reading the first volume. I understand the point and why you do it but I think that thinking that I have to endure volume 1 to enjoy the novel is wrong, I see it when there are already many chapters. If I read it when it just started I would stop without hesitation even if they promise me or tell me that it will get better later. After reading 50 chapters I don't know if I like the novel or the story. I'm curious and hopeful but I don't think I'll enjoy it. I'm writing the review here because in normal cases I would abandon it, but I'll read a little more.
suprisingly bad for how well it starts, too many shallow characters and dialogue, protagonist has murder addiction, its tecnically a transmigation but a large part of it doesn't feel like it, there too much unecessary exposition and kinda repetitive, some things even get repeated in another pov. At some point i just started skipping stuff and it didn't feel like i missed anything important
After the first volume, everything is too drawn out. ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎
Amazing book with a beautiful storyline. Unlike a lot of other books on this site you can tell that this author is actually taking the time to explore our characters development and build a story, instead of the usual wake up and power up we can see our characters struggle and humanity. The common sense that a lot of novels tend to lose in exchange for a rush to power ups.
Hello, Author here. In this thread, I will clarify some questions regarding the start of the book, and you can treat it as a Q&A as well. Firstly, the novel will seem a little odd to you at the start since it starts differently. But, I must insist that you read the free chapters, the first volume, until the end and bear with it a little since it is just an introduction to the work. I know at the start of the novel, Lucavion doesn't start as your typical main character of such novels, which is something I intended since, at the start of the novel, the main character is 14 years old and mentally unstable due to all the events surrounding him. Even though I know it may be frustrating to read a little, I also think that it is an accurate description of how a person who was put into such a position would think at those moments and the type of psychology that they would have. However, at the end of the first volume, his mentality and everything will have undergone a huge change, making it a lot more readable, and from then on, the story will stretch with many interpersonal relationships going on. For now, this is all I have to say about the book, and you may continue with your questions here. I will answer them if I can.