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This fic is so good that it became my reason to live. Keep your health up author, we want to see you stay in the kitchen so you can keep cooking!
Man, I had forgotten about this peak and just remembered and checked up on it, thank goodness its not dropped, just rewritten, plz don't drop it like how Slayerking1 dropped Trials of the Multiverse , continue writing, peak.
The old version was good, but the rewrite is miles better, in terms of writing quality, character development, pacing and pretty much everything. The only thing worse is the upload schedule but I much rather you taking the time to put real effort into the fic, this is really good quality❤️
THE GOAT IS BACK! I KNEW BRUZZAH WOULDN'T LET US DOWN! GOATJOHNS STRONG RETURN! CHILLS 🥶🥶🥶🥶
Of all the fanfics I saw about the quintuplets, this is undoubtedly the best, Megumi's trauma has a lot of logic, the interactions between the characters are fluid and entertaining, the only thing I would require is that in the end Megumi stays with the five sisters
I'll keep it short One of the best written story ever. And it's rare to find gotoubun no hanayome fanfic so it's great. Read it it's amazing if you like well written story.
very good story, it has much more content than I expected, I hope it continues like this (I hope you finish it)👍
Nothing much just wanted to make the ratings orignal cuz a fool decided to rate it low without understanding the authors problems
Love this book hoping for at least one chapter every 2 days amazing character development with each of the sisters hoping for more[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Carta de amor a la literatura pero carajo me hubiera gustado que nobara la mostraras que siguiera en coma y que luego muriera y megumi tuviera que hacer su funeral o algo para darle un mejor final digno al personaje minino que merecía:c
The premise looked weird at first and I wasn't expecting much. But this is genuinely good. The crossover in natural, characters are on point and grammar is flawless.
It’d be a crime at this point to not give this a 5/5, I was expecting some goofy little character insert, what I received was peak character development and something that feels real
I've been looking for a good bumgumi fanfic and I found the best one but honestly the story is really good. like maybe I have a low threshold for good stories but overall the story is great. the pacing's good. the characters are awesome! I love how you address his trauma. oh it's so good. the characters are interesting but now you've me like all of them now I'm forcing you author, you must make this harem otherwise you're going to break my heart
First off, I just started reading this particular story because of Megumi. Of course, I am familiar with the Quintuplets, but I am not a fan of rom-coms. However, this is very well executed, the premise of Megumi someone who is traumatized and depressed, helping five different girls. The themes are pretty clear. obviously romance, family, and fear/anxiety. That's my synopsis or summary. Some minor criticism from me, it's pretty noticeable that the lack of a large cast of characters is harmful. Because as soon as a scene involving the siblings starts or ends, it's easy to tell what is going to happen. Though you gave them more depth. Also, the aspect of JJK is very small so far and currently not relevant, considering the circumstances. However, I do hope it will be involved more in the future. What I think is very well executed, is the drama. It is rather easy to get immersed in. That's mostly because of the character interactions and dialogues. Everyone acts in a way that fits their character (else it would be probably harder to integrate Bumgumi), which makes the character arcs more compelling and understandable. Another strong quality is the length and release of the chapters. Until now, new chapters come after 1 or 2 days, and as already said they are pretty long (I estimate ~2000 words per chapter, take it with a grain of salt, tho). The overall writing is very satisfying, not the usual forced sophisticated style or over-descriptions and straight to the point, but not necessarily dumbed down. It's pretty familiar and approachable. I would like to see in which other directions the author can go after this fanfiction and am still very thrilled for more.
This is peak! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The story is very good and well constructed, and something I really appreciate is the interactions between the characters. The fights are good, even though they are not the focus, but for me, the main point is the way he writes Megumi. Megumi actually feels like a real person here, with traumas to overcome and internal struggles. I'm bothered by the way some authors write characters with a similar personality to Megumi as super cold edgelords who don't show emotions, but that doesn't happen here and that's one of the reasons I appreciate this story.
If you want something a little slow and soft but full of sugar, I recommend this story, not only does it have action and it has moments of purification for the soul, extremely recommended. Note: He has long monologues, although not very often.
I have to say with what I read this is story is pretty good even if it's that BUM, BUMGUMI RAAAAAAAHHH! The fight scenes could use some work but it's ok and I haven't even caught up to the latest chap yet. But author bruzzah, how about you consider this this devious idea of mine. HAREM! All the Nakano girls fall in love with him BUT WAIT! THERE'S MORE! YOU KILL HIM OFFSCREEN STYLE IN THE END! HAHAHAHAHA!
Maki no harém só ela só ela além da quíntuplas aonde assinar ou doa para eu pagar que a maki entre no harém ninguém vai reclamar tenho certeza e só dizer on doa autor a maki sofreu demais merece fica com um conhecido como o megumi fushiguro Todos vai gosta dela no harém faz votação tenho certeza que dá certo
Joder cuanto le tocará aparecer los personajes de JJK que sobrevivieron al final como todou best frendo para que se haga amigo de megumi , yuki talvez Shoko , mei mei y ui ui y talvez Miguel Jdr choso ojalá aún que estará deprimido o talvez si esta vivo culpe de todo a megumi por su debilidad y intente matarlo si es que sigue con vida o algo Seria buen arco argumental que aparezca un plan C de kenjaku donde salgan retoños malditos inteligentes de algún laboratorio de kenjaku y megumi sea obligado a volver al trabajo para capturarlos o luchar contra ellos Duda habrá harem ?¿ o tripareja dime que seee, megumi de tanto dolor se merece algo [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Cute. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Although it doesn't have many chapters, it is one of my favorite stories. Give it a try un sure you'll like it also
The story is well written and has excellent character development. It deserves a 100/10. This story is incredible. ..........................
amazing story with characters that feel real ! coolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcool
I'm genuinely enjoying this story so far. The characters are done great. Keep it up!
Fast updates, interesting plot, no rushed character development or forcing things, and this story flows smoothly overall very enjoyable. Bonus because the chapter are a decent length
This fic is so good that it became my reason to live. Keep your health up author, we want to see you stay in the kitchen so you can keep cooking!
Man, I had forgotten about this peak and just remembered and checked up on it, thank goodness its not dropped, just rewritten, plz don't drop it like how Slayerking1 dropped Trials of the Multiverse , continue writing, peak.
The old version was good, but the rewrite is miles better, in terms of writing quality, character development, pacing and pretty much everything. The only thing worse is the upload schedule but I much rather you taking the time to put real effort into the fic, this is really good quality❤️
THE GOAT IS BACK! I KNEW BRUZZAH WOULDN'T LET US DOWN! GOATJOHNS STRONG RETURN! CHILLS 🥶🥶🥶🥶
Of all the fanfics I saw about the quintuplets, this is undoubtedly the best, Megumi's trauma has a lot of logic, the interactions between the characters are fluid and entertaining, the only thing I would require is that in the end Megumi stays with the five sisters
I'll keep it short One of the best written story ever. And it's rare to find gotoubun no hanayome fanfic so it's great. Read it it's amazing if you like well written story.
very good story, it has much more content than I expected, I hope it continues like this (I hope you finish it)👍
Nothing much just wanted to make the ratings orignal cuz a fool decided to rate it low without understanding the authors problems
Love this book hoping for at least one chapter every 2 days amazing character development with each of the sisters hoping for more[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Carta de amor a la literatura pero carajo me hubiera gustado que nobara la mostraras que siguiera en coma y que luego muriera y megumi tuviera que hacer su funeral o algo para darle un mejor final digno al personaje minino que merecía:c
The premise looked weird at first and I wasn't expecting much. But this is genuinely good. The crossover in natural, characters are on point and grammar is flawless.
It’d be a crime at this point to not give this a 5/5, I was expecting some goofy little character insert, what I received was peak character development and something that feels real
I've been looking for a good bumgumi fanfic and I found the best one but honestly the story is really good. like maybe I have a low threshold for good stories but overall the story is great. the pacing's good. the characters are awesome! I love how you address his trauma. oh it's so good. the characters are interesting but now you've me like all of them now I'm forcing you author, you must make this harem otherwise you're going to break my heart
First off, I just started reading this particular story because of Megumi. Of course, I am familiar with the Quintuplets, but I am not a fan of rom-coms. However, this is very well executed, the premise of Megumi someone who is traumatized and depressed, helping five different girls. The themes are pretty clear. obviously romance, family, and fear/anxiety. That's my synopsis or summary. Some minor criticism from me, it's pretty noticeable that the lack of a large cast of characters is harmful. Because as soon as a scene involving the siblings starts or ends, it's easy to tell what is going to happen. Though you gave them more depth. Also, the aspect of JJK is very small so far and currently not relevant, considering the circumstances. However, I do hope it will be involved more in the future. What I think is very well executed, is the drama. It is rather easy to get immersed in. That's mostly because of the character interactions and dialogues. Everyone acts in a way that fits their character (else it would be probably harder to integrate Bumgumi), which makes the character arcs more compelling and understandable. Another strong quality is the length and release of the chapters. Until now, new chapters come after 1 or 2 days, and as already said they are pretty long (I estimate ~2000 words per chapter, take it with a grain of salt, tho). The overall writing is very satisfying, not the usual forced sophisticated style or over-descriptions and straight to the point, but not necessarily dumbed down. It's pretty familiar and approachable. I would like to see in which other directions the author can go after this fanfiction and am still very thrilled for more.
This is peak! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The story is very good and well constructed, and something I really appreciate is the interactions between the characters. The fights are good, even though they are not the focus, but for me, the main point is the way he writes Megumi. Megumi actually feels like a real person here, with traumas to overcome and internal struggles. I'm bothered by the way some authors write characters with a similar personality to Megumi as super cold edgelords who don't show emotions, but that doesn't happen here and that's one of the reasons I appreciate this story.
If you want something a little slow and soft but full of sugar, I recommend this story, not only does it have action and it has moments of purification for the soul, extremely recommended. Note: He has long monologues, although not very often.
I have to say with what I read this is story is pretty good even if it's that BUM, BUMGUMI RAAAAAAAHHH! The fight scenes could use some work but it's ok and I haven't even caught up to the latest chap yet. But author bruzzah, how about you consider this this devious idea of mine. HAREM! All the Nakano girls fall in love with him BUT WAIT! THERE'S MORE! YOU KILL HIM OFFSCREEN STYLE IN THE END! HAHAHAHAHA!
Maki no harém só ela só ela além da quíntuplas aonde assinar ou doa para eu pagar que a maki entre no harém ninguém vai reclamar tenho certeza e só dizer on doa autor a maki sofreu demais merece fica com um conhecido como o megumi fushiguro Todos vai gosta dela no harém faz votação tenho certeza que dá certo
Joder cuanto le tocará aparecer los personajes de JJK que sobrevivieron al final como todou best frendo para que se haga amigo de megumi , yuki talvez Shoko , mei mei y ui ui y talvez Miguel Jdr choso ojalá aún que estará deprimido o talvez si esta vivo culpe de todo a megumi por su debilidad y intente matarlo si es que sigue con vida o algo Seria buen arco argumental que aparezca un plan C de kenjaku donde salgan retoños malditos inteligentes de algún laboratorio de kenjaku y megumi sea obligado a volver al trabajo para capturarlos o luchar contra ellos Duda habrá harem ?¿ o tripareja dime que seee, megumi de tanto dolor se merece algo [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Cute. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Although it doesn't have many chapters, it is one of my favorite stories. Give it a try un sure you'll like it also
The story is well written and has excellent character development. It deserves a 100/10. This story is incredible. ..........................
amazing story with characters that feel real ! coolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcool
I'm genuinely enjoying this story so far. The characters are done great. Keep it up!
Fast updates, interesting plot, no rushed character development or forcing things, and this story flows smoothly overall very enjoyable. Bonus because the chapter are a decent length
This is, like, pretty fucking good! Please don’t drop it author!