Luka Zoric

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Jin_Shin_5845

everything you do bro it's just it's good and I like this and I hope it's just more than a one shot hope you continue writing things like this I love all of them from the rap King to the one that you're not one you're doing the other football writing all of them is just amazing

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Bright_Okyere_3120

I really like this story. Keep up with it +(Convict to the king ) & I hope u won’t drop it like other authors :)

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roubando_universo

acho que o mc tem tanto talento de brasileiros ele deveria ser o brasileiro ou o pai dele ser brasileiro para mim seria mais interessante que ele tem um talento de Neymar Ronaldinho e outros jogadores brasileiros

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evillaughter

looks promising hope you don't drop this like your other novel best of luck

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roubando_universo

I came to withdraw my critical criticisms the mc he didn't go to Portugal but the mc doesn't need to win everything at the beginning he can go through some problems and mature I think it's better but I'm not a writer you know my opinion I love it so that's it

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RainSennin

It's not bad. Actually, it's pretty interesting. The only issue I have with this sitory is the fact that it's quite obviously written by AI (or at least heavily modified by it) so that it's very VERY noticeable in every paragraph if you know how AI usually writes these kind of things, but other than making me roll my eyes it's not that big of an issue imo (but only because in my case I'm used to reading MTLs so it's not that much of a problem to me) Honestly, as far as AI stories go, this one is pretty good. If you like football I recommend you at least giving this one a chance, maybe you'll like it.

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Lollipop_gun11

Once you see “by AmSincere” put it straight in your library because he always cooks ngl Honestly a Fantastic story love how we are seeing his journey

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Osama_Osama_0721

Keep it up excellent novel 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍🔥👍🔥👍🔥🔥👍🔥👍👍🔥🔥👍🔥👍👍🔥👍🔥🔥👍👍🔥👍🔥🔥👍🔥🔥👍🔥👍👍🔥👍👍👍🔥👍👍🔥👍🔥🔥👍🔥🔥👍🔥 👍 🔥 👍 🔥 👍 🔥 👍 🔥 👍 🔥 👍 🔥 👍 🔥 👍 🔥

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4kp

I really like how it happens, interesting to be honest, adding a small time skip at some point, I hope it costs you a little more to win things with the national team since it generally happens in soap operas where they get an important cup and win it right away.

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RamenRonin

Quickly become my favourite on this app, hope it continues.

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SunWukong_

If you like his other works and you are a football fan then you gonna like this. Bro don't miss. Just hope that the MC doesn't win everything from the get go.

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heryHerylle

Great so far. I love this. Keep up!------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Deborah_Adentan

Author I think you should give Man U a chance for luka it will be a great development for him considering his age and, I feel his family should be around him to guide him through his mental state also given the fact he still love’s England utd seem right for him for now just saying though

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abhishek_korde

best keep it up 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍

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nameyelus

loving the book …………………………………… …………………….

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you18q8mystery

good novel, please don't drop...........

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Kyura_Chan

Keep going mate, I'm waiting for the next chapter

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sword_saint838

this story here is also about football, very interesting, her name is Pitch Perfect the mc only really starts to stand out after he plays as the attacking midfielder

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4kp

Great book, asome.