My Hitman System

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John_Titor234432

I started writing this novel fully knowing that it's not going to be perfect. Perfection at times attracts inaction and that is totally against my motive for starting this novel. My goal you ask? It's to finish this novel. A simple goal for some but also a very difficult one for some others. Coming back to my novel, I've kept the story simple so that anyone could follow. At times in my life, I've relied on a few online novels to accompany me in times of struggle. They weren't impressive, they weren't great but for some reason they relieved the stress that I had accumulated throughout the day as I worked hard towards my goals. I've tried to replicate that with my bare passable abilities. My story isn't perfect, it has a lots of faults but I will keep on writing and will finish it. Just like how I hope that you, my dear reader, will keep on chasing after your goals no matter how imperfect you are at present. Good luck to the both of us!

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DaoistKQVXSL

came into this expecting it to be trash but from the very first moment it grabbed my attention and I'm glad i read this or else i would've missed out on a gem continue uploading author

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Deus_magnus

maybe It's just not there yet, but the system seems more like a serial killer system than a hitman. I mean isn't the system supposed to give points for successful assassinations on a designed target, not a random cop and definitely not 'matured' street bullies. but so far, the story is great, just hoping that he will develop from a street psycho killer into a 'big name' underworld hitman.

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ReaderMan

Great novel, Unique and well done premise. Good and well done characters with a world that so far makes sense. Reminds me somewhat of the Hitman games. Definitely recommend!

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Defitleya

It's good. There're some problems in it, like the lack of world building in most of the free chapters (I've read till 33), in those chapters we don't really know how Jin looks like, just that he's poorer than I am in WebNovel. If the Author does some worldbuilding later on, I have no idea because I'll never read since I lack the coins. The story development, I see no problem, there ain't no cliché, well, I never saw one. Overall, 3.8/5. Now, my personal opinion, I hope the Author does not stray from his path and may finish this novel. It's a good novel for people who are just starting to read them. - Defitleya

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Ballerina_72

Really enjoying this, so far. Can't wait to see how ml develops and deals with his missions. More chapters please 😁

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Demon_Gouhl

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MrKaskaKitty

Maybe it's not my place to say this, but I think updating the character's appearances will increase the quality of the novel.

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Goodorbad

Mmm i thought that i wrote a review in this novel but never mind i got to say that this is a good novel but when is he going to become a hitman i mean i know that the novel had just started but i feel that it will take forever and i keep seeing that the author has shorted the word which it not good you should keep it like last time this is good so far