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Honestly reading the description I thought that it was really far fetched but decided to give it a try anyway. And I will say that it was pretty much what I was expecting, a big fat nothing But from what I’m seeing people are actually reading this so at least you got that going for you, and hey maybe after the first 50 or so chapters you got better but I’ll never know
I believe the story is well fleshed out, giving the MC a 3 dimensional character along with superb descriptions are suitable, his inner monologue allows the reader to understand MC’s inner thoughts, overall it is a great story thus far, I’m on chap. 48, the background of where they are and what they are doing at specific locations can get a reader confused or just misled when it comes to the writers great use of descriptions (get deeply focused in the story that you lose sight of their location)
Yo, this is great story I like the plot and everything. I hope you will focus on character development. So far all great[img=recommend]
Wow it's actually really good. It might be hypocritical for me to say this but I just hope you wont abandon this and continue to write it. There are some lacing elements in the story but every this is going to get better as a person practice more right?..... Well anyway good luck.[img=recommend]
I like this book so far I am on chapter 38 at 8:55am and have been reading all night long it’s just that good and I highly recommend it
Some minor mistakes with words but nothing that can't be fixed. Otherwise, great novel altogether.
Ah, destined searchers, you have found it at last, lemons that are so sour they'll have you looking like an angry chiwawa... Welcome. Of course if you wish to wield a greatsword like fellow men of culture, look no further, you have found it. If your tissue pack has been piling up... must I say it???
WHERES THE REST OF THE CHAPTERSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Honestly reading the description I thought that it was really far fetched but decided to give it a try anyway. And I will say that it was pretty much what I was expecting, a big fat nothing But from what I’m seeing people are actually reading this so at least you got that going for you, and hey maybe after the first 50 or so chapters you got better but I’ll never know
I believe the story is well fleshed out, giving the MC a 3 dimensional character along with superb descriptions are suitable, his inner monologue allows the reader to understand MC’s inner thoughts, overall it is a great story thus far, I’m on chap. 48, the background of where they are and what they are doing at specific locations can get a reader confused or just misled when it comes to the writers great use of descriptions (get deeply focused in the story that you lose sight of their location)
Yo, this is great story I like the plot and everything. I hope you will focus on character development. So far all great[img=recommend]
Wow it's actually really good. It might be hypocritical for me to say this but I just hope you wont abandon this and continue to write it. There are some lacing elements in the story but every this is going to get better as a person practice more right?..... Well anyway good luck.[img=recommend]
I like this book so far I am on chapter 38 at 8:55am and have been reading all night long it’s just that good and I highly recommend it
Some minor mistakes with words but nothing that can't be fixed. Otherwise, great novel altogether.
Ah, destined searchers, you have found it at last, lemons that are so sour they'll have you looking like an angry chiwawa... Welcome. Of course if you wish to wield a greatsword like fellow men of culture, look no further, you have found it. If your tissue pack has been piling up... must I say it???
WHERES THE REST OF THE CHAPTERSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS