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this just like every other brain rot content same generic mc,plot,character etc to fit all the self insert wish fulfillment fantasy here
Overall fun read, interesting concepts (when it comes to the heroines hating the MC) that make you want to see how it’ll pan out when it comes to the future of the novel. Some times feels like author is bending over backwards to appease fans but that could be a good thing in some cases. Word of warning though, you gotta be freaky af to the enjoy the romance. It ain’t for me but I won’t let it dictate my review.
Review needs 40 characters so I'm writing this, but don't waste your time and read it already.
After MC loses virginity, the story is becoming much more boring. There are also limited characters with MC getting stronger at fast rate and became lovestruck .....
pessoal e ser esse tempo todo o protagonista original Ethan fosse uma mulher kkk voz afeminada isso tem chance de acontece seria um plotar Twist demais e a história para mim ficaria melhor por que tudo ser resolveria com ele o Ethan ser tonando o harém de Richard Guys, if all this time the original protagonist Ethan was a woman, lol, effeminate voice, there's a chance this could happen, it would be too much of a Twist plot and the story would be better for me because everything
So far I’m hooked. I haven’t reached that far into story but the mystery between both of the worlds is piquing my curiosity and let’s not forget the yandere mother in his current world and yandere sister in original. Keep up the good work
Not bad, I would however find it particularly more interesting, astonishing even, if the mother had her past life memories as well, specially when the MC dies. so she can protect her son from those heroines.
The story is good the only thing that is lacking is a discord server.Please post the sever link.
The writing quality is brilliant, the story development is great too, the character design, update stability and the world background is brilliant too.
Read till ch 17 The novel is great with very few plot holes that can be used as plot devices later. The Mc seems great, not wimpy and has personality There are yanderes The original world is also significant to the story Almost everything is great, except: Having only 17 free ch is a wasted opportunity, a huuuge waste I really want to read more but I would need to use my hard earned FP but I am not that invested in the story yet(cuz only 17 ch duh) I would rather spend those FP on novels that I am already following I wanted to read more but... :(
If I had money, I would definitely read all the chapters of this delight. **********************************************************************************
It's a good book, but 15 chapters are too few to read, so I don't think it's possible to make a review .................................................
This story is one of the best I've seen in all with great character dev and good plot with the perfect cliffhangers
Definitely a banger novel, read till 18 chapters and safe to say i found a masterpiece, author don't drop and please be consistent with the update, I really like the story, the mc and his interaction with other characters.
Thank goodness this app has limited free days. The story is better then I thought it would be, going forward, i will continue reading and will start purchasing chapters.
So, I thought why not? What can you expect from this story? Good interaction. Good Character Development. Okay-ish battles. Good romance+ eventual smut. And a load of Slice of Life. If you have any questions regarding the story, ask here.
It's a pretty new novel only 30 chapter's so don't know much about the world and all. But it's pretty unique, like i haven't seen anything like the system this novel has, the MC is kinda crazy and don't even get me started on the potential lovers.
Revelar Spoiler I'm loving this story, I really am but it locks so dang early and if it doesn't meet my expectations by the time it's on chapter 40, I'm gonna be so upset to have wasted my time and money on this story. I'll wait for others to comment and let me know if the development then I'll start buying chapters.
The book has potential i must say so I'd recommend it to y'all to read. I know WB has done a number on us with the poison we've read but try this book. I was also hesitant but I gave it a try and I'm enjoying it right now. I usually dislike giving book reviews but for this one it definitely has potential to be very good if the author is consistent with what he has shown so far. For writing quality it's one of if not the best I've seen on Webnovel so a 5. For the story development, so far it's looking good and we are looking to see what the author plans to do so a 4, character design is great, the relations between the characters in the story allows you the reader to immerse yourself in the story without making the story feel bland, it's realistic enough and you can see that thought and creativity were put behind the dialogues and interactions, so that's a 5. World background I give a 3 cos so far there hasn't been any real expansion on the world in general and how things work, from culture to the food, to even the currency and the continents and races and what not but I'm sure it will be properly expanded on in the academy arc so a 3 for now. Lastly my issue is the updates it's a bit inconsistent but manageable, though i hope there will be consistency in updates pretty soon cos for a book to survive on Webnovel consistent updates is a must, else this book won't survive and it has a good potential so i wanna see this book become quite renowned, hence overall the book rating is a 4 for now and subject to a possible edited review if the book goes far and doesn't get dropped.
The book is great, undated are stable but wish there was more chapters, and it’s a enjoyable read. 👍
Review up to chapter 71 The idea of the regression of heroines and the idea of the parallel / future world mean that history and future development can have many mysteries and ways to follow. The descriptions of the characters of the 3 heroines, of the mother (sister?)and Lilia are well made and make it clear what kind of people they are and how they would behave. The newcomer (Amelia) as well as Ethan and the fourth heroine are still to be discovered while the main problem concerns the main character. Richard is flat: he knows that heroines may suspect him but being carried away by events makes him weak despite the fact that he continues to train to become stronger. Unlike them, he knows that they know the future and knows all their future characters, strengths and weaknesses as well as all their secrets so he can make patterns put them in their place. Right now he looks like just someone who doesn't want to be helpless but isn't determined enough to take his new life in hand. The fact that you don't take full advantage of the system is also unnerving ... The system can help him in everything, even to become a demon King from what he says, so why not use it in his training? Furthermore, when he finishes the missions, despite doing it for his sister, he does not rush to redeem his reward but also keeps days waiting and it has also happened that he has not used the Stat after the end of the mission. The functionality of reading Emily's thoughts has never been used or she could have found out what the other 3 heroines were plotting. However, the real problem with the novel at the moment is people's scale of strength: it is totally busted. Various sentences and various situations so far have led to total confusion ... I give examples: 1) Eleonor is told that the Duchess is an entity close to divinity beyond rank. From such an entity I expect his perception to be out of scale so that Eleonor does not even dare to "control" it but instead is not even discovered; 2) Lilia's mother is an adventurous S-Rank and Lilia herself is stronger than she ... Although the adventurers ranking is not the same as the wizards, how are they classified? Based on the ether in their nuclei? Or based on certain tests in the 4 fundamentals? According to Eleonor's words at the moment they have 1/10 of their previous strength however Elizabeth did not think she had problems manipulating the mind of Lilia's mother and Lilia herself so this implies that their "Skills" of past life make them be stronger than an S-Rank despite having 1/10 of their past ether. It seems to me really too confused. I understand that the proficiency in the bases as well as the knowledge of higher spells can make them better in their own rank or even in 1/2 higher however I believe that well-defined walls must be imposed in the levels of force that cannot be overtaken otherwise even if characters like Bellarine are described as the strongest if an Elizabeth is enough to control her, she looks like a joke. However there is a lot of tasty food on this table if the author manages to organize the dishes it could be a great meal, good luck Chef.
Revelar Spoiler this just like every other brain rot content same generic mc,plot,character etc to fit all the self insert wish fulfillment fantasy here
Overall fun read, interesting concepts (when it comes to the heroines hating the MC) that make you want to see how it’ll pan out when it comes to the future of the novel. Some times feels like author is bending over backwards to appease fans but that could be a good thing in some cases. Word of warning though, you gotta be freaky af to the enjoy the romance. It ain’t for me but I won’t let it dictate my review.
Review needs 40 characters so I'm writing this, but don't waste your time and read it already.
After MC loses virginity, the story is becoming much more boring. There are also limited characters with MC getting stronger at fast rate and became lovestruck .....
pessoal e ser esse tempo todo o protagonista original Ethan fosse uma mulher kkk voz afeminada isso tem chance de acontece seria um plotar Twist demais e a história para mim ficaria melhor por que tudo ser resolveria com ele o Ethan ser tonando o harém de Richard Guys, if all this time the original protagonist Ethan was a woman, lol, effeminate voice, there's a chance this could happen, it would be too much of a Twist plot and the story would be better for me because everything
So far I’m hooked. I haven’t reached that far into story but the mystery between both of the worlds is piquing my curiosity and let’s not forget the yandere mother in his current world and yandere sister in original. Keep up the good work
Not bad, I would however find it particularly more interesting, astonishing even, if the mother had her past life memories as well, specially when the MC dies. so she can protect her son from those heroines.
The story is good the only thing that is lacking is a discord server.Please post the sever link.
The writing quality is brilliant, the story development is great too, the character design, update stability and the world background is brilliant too.
Read till ch 17 The novel is great with very few plot holes that can be used as plot devices later. The Mc seems great, not wimpy and has personality There are yanderes The original world is also significant to the story Almost everything is great, except: Having only 17 free ch is a wasted opportunity, a huuuge waste I really want to read more but I would need to use my hard earned FP but I am not that invested in the story yet(cuz only 17 ch duh) I would rather spend those FP on novels that I am already following I wanted to read more but... :(
If I had money, I would definitely read all the chapters of this delight. **********************************************************************************
It's a good book, but 15 chapters are too few to read, so I don't think it's possible to make a review .................................................
This story is one of the best I've seen in all with great character dev and good plot with the perfect cliffhangers
Definitely a banger novel, read till 18 chapters and safe to say i found a masterpiece, author don't drop and please be consistent with the update, I really like the story, the mc and his interaction with other characters.
Thank goodness this app has limited free days. The story is better then I thought it would be, going forward, i will continue reading and will start purchasing chapters.
So, I thought why not? What can you expect from this story? Good interaction. Good Character Development. Okay-ish battles. Good romance+ eventual smut. And a load of Slice of Life. If you have any questions regarding the story, ask here.
It's a pretty new novel only 30 chapter's so don't know much about the world and all. But it's pretty unique, like i haven't seen anything like the system this novel has, the MC is kinda crazy and don't even get me started on the potential lovers.
Revelar Spoiler I'm loving this story, I really am but it locks so dang early and if it doesn't meet my expectations by the time it's on chapter 40, I'm gonna be so upset to have wasted my time and money on this story. I'll wait for others to comment and let me know if the development then I'll start buying chapters.
The book has potential i must say so I'd recommend it to y'all to read. I know WB has done a number on us with the poison we've read but try this book. I was also hesitant but I gave it a try and I'm enjoying it right now. I usually dislike giving book reviews but for this one it definitely has potential to be very good if the author is consistent with what he has shown so far. For writing quality it's one of if not the best I've seen on Webnovel so a 5. For the story development, so far it's looking good and we are looking to see what the author plans to do so a 4, character design is great, the relations between the characters in the story allows you the reader to immerse yourself in the story without making the story feel bland, it's realistic enough and you can see that thought and creativity were put behind the dialogues and interactions, so that's a 5. World background I give a 3 cos so far there hasn't been any real expansion on the world in general and how things work, from culture to the food, to even the currency and the continents and races and what not but I'm sure it will be properly expanded on in the academy arc so a 3 for now. Lastly my issue is the updates it's a bit inconsistent but manageable, though i hope there will be consistency in updates pretty soon cos for a book to survive on Webnovel consistent updates is a must, else this book won't survive and it has a good potential so i wanna see this book become quite renowned, hence overall the book rating is a 4 for now and subject to a possible edited review if the book goes far and doesn't get dropped.
The book is great, undated are stable but wish there was more chapters, and it’s a enjoyable read. 👍
Review up to chapter 71 The idea of the regression of heroines and the idea of the parallel / future world mean that history and future development can have many mysteries and ways to follow. The descriptions of the characters of the 3 heroines, of the mother (sister?)and Lilia are well made and make it clear what kind of people they are and how they would behave. The newcomer (Amelia) as well as Ethan and the fourth heroine are still to be discovered while the main problem concerns the main character. Richard is flat: he knows that heroines may suspect him but being carried away by events makes him weak despite the fact that he continues to train to become stronger. Unlike them, he knows that they know the future and knows all their future characters, strengths and weaknesses as well as all their secrets so he can make patterns put them in their place. Right now he looks like just someone who doesn't want to be helpless but isn't determined enough to take his new life in hand. The fact that you don't take full advantage of the system is also unnerving ... The system can help him in everything, even to become a demon King from what he says, so why not use it in his training? Furthermore, when he finishes the missions, despite doing it for his sister, he does not rush to redeem his reward but also keeps days waiting and it has also happened that he has not used the Stat after the end of the mission. The functionality of reading Emily's thoughts has never been used or she could have found out what the other 3 heroines were plotting. However, the real problem with the novel at the moment is people's scale of strength: it is totally busted. Various sentences and various situations so far have led to total confusion ... I give examples: 1) Eleonor is told that the Duchess is an entity close to divinity beyond rank. From such an entity I expect his perception to be out of scale so that Eleonor does not even dare to "control" it but instead is not even discovered; 2) Lilia's mother is an adventurous S-Rank and Lilia herself is stronger than she ... Although the adventurers ranking is not the same as the wizards, how are they classified? Based on the ether in their nuclei? Or based on certain tests in the 4 fundamentals? According to Eleonor's words at the moment they have 1/10 of their previous strength however Elizabeth did not think she had problems manipulating the mind of Lilia's mother and Lilia herself so this implies that their "Skills" of past life make them be stronger than an S-Rank despite having 1/10 of their past ether. It seems to me really too confused. I understand that the proficiency in the bases as well as the knowledge of higher spells can make them better in their own rank or even in 1/2 higher however I believe that well-defined walls must be imposed in the levels of force that cannot be overtaken otherwise even if characters like Bellarine are described as the strongest if an Elizabeth is enough to control her, she looks like a joke. However there is a lot of tasty food on this table if the author manages to organize the dishes it could be a great meal, good luck Chef.
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