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Honest Review. I think the author was dripping when he wrote this novel. And most likely he forgot about Mc's powers.
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It was all good for the op mc part but as i read on it started to get boring. There is nothing unique about it and i would say the story development could be better. The fight scenes needs improvement. The description of power, skills, realms etc sounds awesome but the utilisation needs work. Well you could give it a try if you want but keep your expectations in check 😆........
Author can you please release chapter from privilege condition? I want to read more
this story is good 👍👍. would have loved if you hadn't dropped your infinite system novel
Mc is very op which is good and the story is fast which I like too, but there are some chapters that are just full of information and nothing else which I dislike bit, but overall very good and chill to read!
I personally enjoyed it. I love OP characters so this is right up my alley. Even though its a little evident that AI was used. So what? The story is a little good so enjoy it. The only thing I dont like a bit is harem thing but since the story doesnt resolve around the harem its a good read. I stopped purchasing coins a while ago since the stories nowadays are utter trash. But this was worth purchasing coins for.
Author, you should write conversation between every character with a more flexible touch. Specially, the conversation between Adams and Anderson. You are not showing their natural human behaviour. Also in some chapter you didn’t explain how Anderson felt after seeing Adams newborn power against Vitto. I hope you will work MORE on subtle common sense explanation in various conversation also with more flexible touch. Not like first 10 chapters where those conversation felt like some robots are talking. This book has the potential. Specially I am liking this very much. But due to robotic conversation I am very much frustrated.. I hope you will focus in this sector so that reader like us can appreciate your efforts.[img=recommend]
Mc is the peak of existence right from the start. Love the fact that he’s originally from Nigeria.
This is a good book only if you like really and I say REALLY OP mc from the start, Adam is already broken in the second chapter so if you don't like this kind of stories this isn't for you. There are only 8 chapters so i can't say much about the plot or in wich way it will progres but i'm looking forward to more chpter, good eork author. (ps. sorry for the bad english, not my main leanguage)
Author, could you please speed up the process? I dont like reading the Remembering The Past Chapters. It felt sad for me. Could you please tell me the synopsis of that chapter ?
Honest Review. I think the author was dripping when he wrote this novel. And most likely he forgot about Mc's powers.
Revelar Spoiler It was all good for the op mc part but as i read on it started to get boring. There is nothing unique about it and i would say the story development could be better. The fight scenes needs improvement. The description of power, skills, realms etc sounds awesome but the utilisation needs work. Well you could give it a try if you want but keep your expectations in check 😆........
Author can you please release chapter from privilege condition? I want to read more
this story is good 👍👍. would have loved if you hadn't dropped your infinite system novel
Mc is very op which is good and the story is fast which I like too, but there are some chapters that are just full of information and nothing else which I dislike bit, but overall very good and chill to read!
I personally enjoyed it. I love OP characters so this is right up my alley. Even though its a little evident that AI was used. So what? The story is a little good so enjoy it. The only thing I dont like a bit is harem thing but since the story doesnt resolve around the harem its a good read. I stopped purchasing coins a while ago since the stories nowadays are utter trash. But this was worth purchasing coins for.
Author, you should write conversation between every character with a more flexible touch. Specially, the conversation between Adams and Anderson. You are not showing their natural human behaviour. Also in some chapter you didn’t explain how Anderson felt after seeing Adams newborn power against Vitto. I hope you will work MORE on subtle common sense explanation in various conversation also with more flexible touch. Not like first 10 chapters where those conversation felt like some robots are talking. This book has the potential. Specially I am liking this very much. But due to robotic conversation I am very much frustrated.. I hope you will focus in this sector so that reader like us can appreciate your efforts.[img=recommend]
Mc is the peak of existence right from the start. Love the fact that he’s originally from Nigeria.
This is a good book only if you like really and I say REALLY OP mc from the start, Adam is already broken in the second chapter so if you don't like this kind of stories this isn't for you. There are only 8 chapters so i can't say much about the plot or in wich way it will progres but i'm looking forward to more chpter, good eork author. (ps. sorry for the bad english, not my main leanguage)
Author, could you please speed up the process? I dont like reading the Remembering The Past Chapters. It felt sad for me. Could you please tell me the synopsis of that chapter ?