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This is my first time writing I no I made mistakes I will try to do better .not all will be based on tv show . Give me feedback all is appreciated and give me ideas. Thank you
yes I knew I wasn't going to last long on this story, (c03) the mc has 7 wishes (eight the author is wrong) and two things make me leave the story. 1 the MC is intelligent but risks his life in excess of speed when there is no hurry for him. 2 the mc's wishes are too powerful, from chapter three, we can't imagine the mc having any problems at all... unless we make twd hellish with demons of the gods... because the mc is ultra benefited with these wishes. Personally, the overpowering mc makes me sick to this point, and once again I don't see how an author who has this quality of writing (and who publishes a bunch of images of the mc's weapons, cars, etc.) will be able to render such an exciting story to read.
This is my first time writing I no I made mistakes I will try to do better .not all will be based on tv show . Give me feedback all is appreciated and give me ideas. Thank you
yes I knew I wasn't going to last long on this story, (c03) the mc has 7 wishes (eight the author is wrong) and two things make me leave the story. 1 the MC is intelligent but risks his life in excess of speed when there is no hurry for him. 2 the mc's wishes are too powerful, from chapter three, we can't imagine the mc having any problems at all... unless we make twd hellish with demons of the gods... because the mc is ultra benefited with these wishes. Personally, the overpowering mc makes me sick to this point, and once again I don't see how an author who has this quality of writing (and who publishes a bunch of images of the mc's weapons, cars, etc.) will be able to render such an exciting story to read.