/ Historical Romance / Missing Diamond
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The betrayal of the past leading to the revenge of many, but the diamond must be kept safe
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Writing and English both barely understandable, but the concept seems nice. I'd like to see the author try again after improving their skills. Don’t give up!
O começo da história foi um pouco confusa, então não entendi algumas coisas. Mas me parece legal e interessante.
This needs a lot of editing before publishing; seeing it from the first chapter, I already have seen most of its flaws. And I wonder if this was even reviewed before being included as an entry in this contest.
The grammar is one of the biggest flaws of this. It would greatly help the author if they put their story is a word document or grammarly or etc before publishing, because the amount of grammar mistakes makes me think they made it in under an hour an were cutting corners.
This story reminds me of a old house I used to live inside when my mom lost the diamond in her ring and we searched for it in the back yard
What the F*** did I just read? Is this how it feels like to be high? To call this a novel is laughable. Completely awful. If I could rate it a 0, I would. I can’t believe I’m actually writing something like this in a review. I tend to not leave mean reviews, but this is just… I can’t even describe this monstrosity.
I think the story is somewhat very not bad