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it could be good needs a rewrite or something it's like you slap his stats together at first like how was he good at school with 30 iq or 3 int he was a laborer had like 3 strent avg is 10 so the mc is equal to child on its deathbed also how tf did he complete his dailies when he had the stamina equivalent to a 400 pound fat man with asthma
Was a good concept but the fast pace of the system and the mc not even using the system most of the time is dumb as f*ck. Like bruh he has tons of things he can easily get from the system with those points of his yet his not even using them, and he literally has millions or billions of lottery tickets(if I remember it correctly cause I dropped this some time ago) and he isn't even using them instead he's just using thousands at a time instead of millions like what the f*ck? It's like the system is just a design in this story it doesn't even exist.
Why does the story has no Updating Stability. It's been Five Days since last update... Some of the characters are also not with the flow of story. Like AI who suddenly one day wants to be in a relationship with her creater, etc.
The writing quality starts off a little rough and in certain chapters, certain plot holes form. However the author has tremendously improved in his writing throughout the book. The overall story is very good and have loved reading his work!
It’s a good novel, but the technical stuffs it's too much. Sometimes it feels like he spend two whole chapters explaining things that could’ve been summed up in a few paragraphs. It slows down the pace and pulls me out of the story, which can be frustrating. Sometime the mc do thing that's so dumb that I want to hit him myself . Cuz EVEN with all the INT stats up it's no use 😮💨
the novel is great for it's genre.only the romance part is disappointing,feels rushed like author thinks it's a must to get into romance for progression though it feels unnecessary. even the relationship feels forced as if the author had no other choice since she's the only female character available for the romance though they had an appearance only once in the story before the romance thing
The MC is unjustifiably stupid. And his stupidity crosses the boundaries of common sense.
Just very bad in about every possible way except maybe the grammar. Doesn’t make any sense, not realistic, plot hole left and right and the most annoying thing is the stupidity of the Mc. And it’s kinda plagiarized from Getting a technological system. Sorry author but I would scrap that or rewrite it altogether.
140ch: I wish the author diverged more from the other novel "Getting a Technology System in Modern Day", there were other different way he could have taken the story, just take one technologie and take to the extremes like " self replicating nanothenlogie" or superpower route and with the MC not having any timeline goal or any urgency it turned into slice of life, that's why the other novel introduced a threath very early to push the story forward I don't mind the similarities to other works it just need to be diffrent early on and not go through the same steps 😑
Grammar and the like is really good, but the Author sometimes mess upnto numbers which is annoying and affects the flow while reading. What story development? The whole story is incomprehensible. Mc starts with 3 int and the average is 10.... How is he even functionin? It's just a bunch of made up bs as the story goes on to try and fit plot. The story itself was flawed from the beginning. 10x in terms of money is too op for any story and the Author sucks at making this feel good or feel tension or anything at all. The whole story is pale, just dead. Charaters are copy and psste from chinese novels of similar plot, lame faceslapping, mc being a simpy cry baby etc. Girlfriend getting stolen by bully and then school reunion after mc gets buggati and millions of dollars. Just boring and predictable. Its earth so i mean backgroud is ok.
I made it to chapter 29 the main character is dumb as a rock. it's an interesting concept just too fast paced
novel super cool . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5*
I read through this, and I was really hooked. Was meant to read only 10 chapters saw myself reading till 50. I must say, mine pales in comparison. Although it's a bit fast paced, the authors writing skill made up for it. Thanks so much for the wonderful book
greetings everyone, is there any novel that's similar to this one? please recommend me some.
so this dude gets a system where he gets endless money. then he also gets- . just read it. it's fun.
Revelar Spoiler
The book is actually decent but the issue lies in the fact that there are no characters the mc is the only character there’s only so far a story can go with one person. everyone else is extremely shallow even his own brother isn’t exempt the lack of a female lead is also annoying and don’t say lunar is a female lead she’s a ducking AI there are other ppl who were introduced but never focused on like serah, Emma and Chloe assuming they were focused on more and possibly love interests along with his brother being focused the series would be ten times better but seeing how there’s no hint of this happening and the mc is focused on work instead spending time with his family or socializing he’s wasting his youth im gonna drop it but if it happens just tell me I’ll go read it. This review is till ch125
Revelar Spoiler
Dropped at chapter 28, the novel is decent compared to some you can find on this app don’t mistake me, I just don’t like the integration of super powers / cultivation in this type of novels and that’s what happened there. Good read to whoever likes that
honestly not bad for a first book , i hope the few bad reviews does not discourage the author from improving and learning from mistakes 👍
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It is one of the productions that deserves the legendary title that can be clearly said to be the best of the modern system series. .............................................................................................................................................................................................
I'm so sorry to write a bad review, but I found this novel to be really mediocre. I read 26 chapters and couldn't go on anymore as I felt that I was actually wasting my time on it. - The MC is as dumb as a rock. He is truly stupid. - The pacing if the story is messed up, on one hand, the progress with the system is way too fast it feels like it's being expedited, but on the other hand, the actual plot (if there IS one) hasn't really even started yet. - There are some passages that are just awkward and it feels like they were just inserted in the middle of random scenes. like the time the MC is going to buy a house and some random secretary starts feeling turned on lol, don't get me wrong I don't mind smut and erotica at all but the scene felt so out of place. it had nothing leading up to it and no follow up either... - The English is actually decent. I don't remember seeing grammatical mistakes and I'm usually meticulous about that so, although the writing style is average but the grammar is solid. I will not be continuing this novel, but those who like stories like this might enjoy it more than me so I still suggest people give it a try and judge by themselves, and I wish the author much more progress and success in the future.
Review done at chapter 40. Honestly this novel is just a cookie-cutter version of other novels in this genre. The story is running at 1000 mph, often resulting in mistakes or plot holes that can take one out of the story. This results in characters just being cardboard cutouts of people or being thrown to the side, such as the MC’s family. Additionally, the MC is just not engaging or interesting in my opinion, he feels like an empty vessel just being dragged around by the story, rarely facing any pushback or opportunities to really grow outside of fake raising his stats. I say fake because while he upgrades his stats, he still feels like the same person. Despite having intelligence stats 10x stronger than the average human, he sounds and acts like a clueless bumpkin most of the time that impulsively does things. Also this story is kinda predictable that there’s rarely any unique twists to this story. It feels like I’m reading a lower version of Getting a Technology System in The Modern Day. Honestly I would say if you like this genre that story is 10x more thought out than this one and characters are more interesting.
Personally speaking, I feel like this book has potential ;it being a rebate type system, however the fact that it's EXTREMELY fast past, and I do very much emphasize the extremely really throws readers off because it's pace is faster than the luxury cars being introduced after only what...2 days? that alot of things are not fleshed out and the characters aren't given much depth because of this. For example, he suddenly drives a luxury car despite being poor and depressed 24-48 hours before yet his brother has 0 reactions or thoughts, his father's girlfriend is like 'oh well, he probably won the lottery. He takes his brother shopping, packs the bags into the car after purchasing a luxury watch(which, by calculations should have been over his budget) , yet there's no mention of the brother after and he just goes to his new condo to sleep....where did the little boy disappear to during the shopping trip? There are actually a lot more plots holes that stems from the novel being too fast pace. Hopefully the author slows down, reviews and revise and insert some necessary filler chapters and patch the holes.
Great story, author. I hope you continue at the same pace.١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١
This novel is brain rot, so if you like that go for it. At first I thought the author was trying to be clever by writing a dumb protagonist through his own point of view but as he ‘upgrades’ his intelligence stat, he continues to make extremely poor choices. This is just a Chinese urban novel set in America. Decide for yourself if you want to read.
it could be good needs a rewrite or something it's like you slap his stats together at first like how was he good at school with 30 iq or 3 int he was a laborer had like 3 strent avg is 10 so the mc is equal to child on its deathbed also how tf did he complete his dailies when he had the stamina equivalent to a 400 pound fat man with asthma
Was a good concept but the fast pace of the system and the mc not even using the system most of the time is dumb as f*ck. Like bruh he has tons of things he can easily get from the system with those points of his yet his not even using them, and he literally has millions or billions of lottery tickets(if I remember it correctly cause I dropped this some time ago) and he isn't even using them instead he's just using thousands at a time instead of millions like what the f*ck? It's like the system is just a design in this story it doesn't even exist.
Why does the story has no Updating Stability. It's been Five Days since last update... Some of the characters are also not with the flow of story. Like AI who suddenly one day wants to be in a relationship with her creater, etc.
The writing quality starts off a little rough and in certain chapters, certain plot holes form. However the author has tremendously improved in his writing throughout the book. The overall story is very good and have loved reading his work!
It’s a good novel, but the technical stuffs it's too much. Sometimes it feels like he spend two whole chapters explaining things that could’ve been summed up in a few paragraphs. It slows down the pace and pulls me out of the story, which can be frustrating. Sometime the mc do thing that's so dumb that I want to hit him myself . Cuz EVEN with all the INT stats up it's no use 😮💨
the novel is great for it's genre.only the romance part is disappointing,feels rushed like author thinks it's a must to get into romance for progression though it feels unnecessary. even the relationship feels forced as if the author had no other choice since she's the only female character available for the romance though they had an appearance only once in the story before the romance thing
The MC is unjustifiably stupid. And his stupidity crosses the boundaries of common sense.
Just very bad in about every possible way except maybe the grammar. Doesn’t make any sense, not realistic, plot hole left and right and the most annoying thing is the stupidity of the Mc. And it’s kinda plagiarized from Getting a technological system. Sorry author but I would scrap that or rewrite it altogether.
140ch: I wish the author diverged more from the other novel "Getting a Technology System in Modern Day", there were other different way he could have taken the story, just take one technologie and take to the extremes like " self replicating nanothenlogie" or superpower route and with the MC not having any timeline goal or any urgency it turned into slice of life, that's why the other novel introduced a threath very early to push the story forward I don't mind the similarities to other works it just need to be diffrent early on and not go through the same steps 😑
Grammar and the like is really good, but the Author sometimes mess upnto numbers which is annoying and affects the flow while reading. What story development? The whole story is incomprehensible. Mc starts with 3 int and the average is 10.... How is he even functionin? It's just a bunch of made up bs as the story goes on to try and fit plot. The story itself was flawed from the beginning. 10x in terms of money is too op for any story and the Author sucks at making this feel good or feel tension or anything at all. The whole story is pale, just dead. Charaters are copy and psste from chinese novels of similar plot, lame faceslapping, mc being a simpy cry baby etc. Girlfriend getting stolen by bully and then school reunion after mc gets buggati and millions of dollars. Just boring and predictable. Its earth so i mean backgroud is ok.
I made it to chapter 29 the main character is dumb as a rock. it's an interesting concept just too fast paced
novel super cool . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5*
I read through this, and I was really hooked. Was meant to read only 10 chapters saw myself reading till 50. I must say, mine pales in comparison. Although it's a bit fast paced, the authors writing skill made up for it. Thanks so much for the wonderful book
greetings everyone, is there any novel that's similar to this one? please recommend me some.
so this dude gets a system where he gets endless money. then he also gets- . just read it. it's fun.
Revelar Spoiler The book is actually decent but the issue lies in the fact that there are no characters the mc is the only character there’s only so far a story can go with one person. everyone else is extremely shallow even his own brother isn’t exempt the lack of a female lead is also annoying and don’t say lunar is a female lead she’s a ducking AI there are other ppl who were introduced but never focused on like serah, Emma and Chloe assuming they were focused on more and possibly love interests along with his brother being focused the series would be ten times better but seeing how there’s no hint of this happening and the mc is focused on work instead spending time with his family or socializing he’s wasting his youth im gonna drop it but if it happens just tell me I’ll go read it. This review is till ch125
Revelar Spoiler Dropped at chapter 28, the novel is decent compared to some you can find on this app don’t mistake me, I just don’t like the integration of super powers / cultivation in this type of novels and that’s what happened there. Good read to whoever likes that
honestly not bad for a first book , i hope the few bad reviews does not discourage the author from improving and learning from mistakes 👍
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It is one of the productions that deserves the legendary title that can be clearly said to be the best of the modern system series. .............................................................................................................................................................................................
I'm so sorry to write a bad review, but I found this novel to be really mediocre. I read 26 chapters and couldn't go on anymore as I felt that I was actually wasting my time on it. - The MC is as dumb as a rock. He is truly stupid. - The pacing if the story is messed up, on one hand, the progress with the system is way too fast it feels like it's being expedited, but on the other hand, the actual plot (if there IS one) hasn't really even started yet. - There are some passages that are just awkward and it feels like they were just inserted in the middle of random scenes. like the time the MC is going to buy a house and some random secretary starts feeling turned on lol, don't get me wrong I don't mind smut and erotica at all but the scene felt so out of place. it had nothing leading up to it and no follow up either... - The English is actually decent. I don't remember seeing grammatical mistakes and I'm usually meticulous about that so, although the writing style is average but the grammar is solid. I will not be continuing this novel, but those who like stories like this might enjoy it more than me so I still suggest people give it a try and judge by themselves, and I wish the author much more progress and success in the future.
Review done at chapter 40. Honestly this novel is just a cookie-cutter version of other novels in this genre. The story is running at 1000 mph, often resulting in mistakes or plot holes that can take one out of the story. This results in characters just being cardboard cutouts of people or being thrown to the side, such as the MC’s family. Additionally, the MC is just not engaging or interesting in my opinion, he feels like an empty vessel just being dragged around by the story, rarely facing any pushback or opportunities to really grow outside of fake raising his stats. I say fake because while he upgrades his stats, he still feels like the same person. Despite having intelligence stats 10x stronger than the average human, he sounds and acts like a clueless bumpkin most of the time that impulsively does things. Also this story is kinda predictable that there’s rarely any unique twists to this story. It feels like I’m reading a lower version of Getting a Technology System in The Modern Day. Honestly I would say if you like this genre that story is 10x more thought out than this one and characters are more interesting.
Personally speaking, I feel like this book has potential ;it being a rebate type system, however the fact that it's EXTREMELY fast past, and I do very much emphasize the extremely really throws readers off because it's pace is faster than the luxury cars being introduced after only what...2 days? that alot of things are not fleshed out and the characters aren't given much depth because of this. For example, he suddenly drives a luxury car despite being poor and depressed 24-48 hours before yet his brother has 0 reactions or thoughts, his father's girlfriend is like 'oh well, he probably won the lottery. He takes his brother shopping, packs the bags into the car after purchasing a luxury watch(which, by calculations should have been over his budget) , yet there's no mention of the brother after and he just goes to his new condo to sleep....where did the little boy disappear to during the shopping trip? There are actually a lot more plots holes that stems from the novel being too fast pace. Hopefully the author slows down, reviews and revise and insert some necessary filler chapters and patch the holes.
Great story, author. I hope you continue at the same pace.١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١
This novel is brain rot, so if you like that go for it. At first I thought the author was trying to be clever by writing a dumb protagonist through his own point of view but as he ‘upgrades’ his intelligence stat, he continues to make extremely poor choices. This is just a Chinese urban novel set in America. Decide for yourself if you want to read.