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Hoping for an future rewrite as now author knows how to do the interactions and he also stopped simping for alison later on too late to continue as i believe it now lost it peak height/powerstones recomendations. (ps don't do the girls encouraging alison if you do rewrite again she have to make the decision and not have it handed to her)
Bueno primero me gusta mucho la historia, de hecho es una de las mejores historias que he leído pero me desagrada un poco es que a Scott , lo pongan más idiota de los que es , después de eso es una buena historia
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Yo author wondering if you still gonna continue and please give an heads if its an break please you can lose alot of people if not and are you dropping or not
Great start and I’ve only read the first chapter! Fan of the show, although I’ve never finished the whole series. Looking forward to this book!. Please keep it going.
historia boa, com bom desenvolvimento e um grande potencial, odiaria ver essa historia ser dropada por causa de um bando de idiotas que só sabe encher saco do autor, só porque não gostou de alguns pontinhos praticamente insignificantes na obra e dando 1 estrela logo de cara
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So far your fanfiction is the best it's been and I love the way it's progressing. Please continue on this path and this way of writing, focus more on the character because he is very good.
The author will read feedback and fix his mistakes aa he did recently as he messed up in the story and seemed to delete the chaps to fix his mistakes which is something i haven't seen as people will just wing it and drop the story later on major respect for the author and he seems to read and listen to the critics👍
Because its awsome give full five star dont care about those who hate harem stories dont want to read then move on stop rewing a story just because of a tag
Support for the author was here when the was 3 k views and 0 power stones i believe i started the algorithem but now its blowing up so there will be hate Hope you deal with it well and whats your opnion on the pop off its starting to have?
The one major issue I have seen is the spacing between sentences it is too hard to read when it is all clumped together other than that it is a good read. I have no clue what those 2 one star reviews are on about
So far I like it, it's fun I hope you don't leave it👍👍👍👍👍🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
The story is very good. Both the character and interactions are perfect. A character who says what he wants, when he wants, but still cares about people. Perfect. The only thing that could be fixed is the writing. It's not that it's bad in terms of grammar, it's more because of the huge paragraphs and lines put together.Sometimes it's hard to follow. But other than that the story is going very well. Congratulations.
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Amazing story so far, keep up the great work! By far the best teen wolf story I've read so far. 5/5
I can wait to see what you will do I have watched the whole show and the movie keep up the good work. I love it. It’s a very good story so far. it looks is still one of the best ones I’ve read so far.
Suprizingly one of the best so far I'll start giving my free powerstones away hope you get more recongnition
Solid first chapter hopefully this doesn’t get abandoned as I’m looking forward to this.
Hoping for an future rewrite as now author knows how to do the interactions and he also stopped simping for alison later on too late to continue as i believe it now lost it peak height/powerstones recomendations. (ps don't do the girls encouraging alison if you do rewrite again she have to make the decision and not have it handed to her)
Bueno primero me gusta mucho la historia, de hecho es una de las mejores historias que he leído pero me desagrada un poco es que a Scott , lo pongan más idiota de los que es , después de eso es una buena historia
Revelar Spoiler Yo author wondering if you still gonna continue and please give an heads if its an break please you can lose alot of people if not and are you dropping or not
Great start and I’ve only read the first chapter! Fan of the show, although I’ve never finished the whole series. Looking forward to this book!. Please keep it going.
historia boa, com bom desenvolvimento e um grande potencial, odiaria ver essa historia ser dropada por causa de um bando de idiotas que só sabe encher saco do autor, só porque não gostou de alguns pontinhos praticamente insignificantes na obra e dando 1 estrela logo de cara
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So far your fanfiction is the best it's been and I love the way it's progressing. Please continue on this path and this way of writing, focus more on the character because he is very good.
The author will read feedback and fix his mistakes aa he did recently as he messed up in the story and seemed to delete the chaps to fix his mistakes which is something i haven't seen as people will just wing it and drop the story later on major respect for the author and he seems to read and listen to the critics👍
Because its awsome give full five star dont care about those who hate harem stories dont want to read then move on stop rewing a story just because of a tag
Support for the author was here when the was 3 k views and 0 power stones i believe i started the algorithem but now its blowing up so there will be hate Hope you deal with it well and whats your opnion on the pop off its starting to have?
The one major issue I have seen is the spacing between sentences it is too hard to read when it is all clumped together other than that it is a good read. I have no clue what those 2 one star reviews are on about
So far I like it, it's fun I hope you don't leave it👍👍👍👍👍🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
The story is very good. Both the character and interactions are perfect. A character who says what he wants, when he wants, but still cares about people. Perfect. The only thing that could be fixed is the writing. It's not that it's bad in terms of grammar, it's more because of the huge paragraphs and lines put together.Sometimes it's hard to follow. But other than that the story is going very well. Congratulations.
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Amazing story so far, keep up the great work! By far the best teen wolf story I've read so far. 5/5
I can wait to see what you will do I have watched the whole show and the movie keep up the good work. I love it. It’s a very good story so far. it looks is still one of the best ones I’ve read so far.
Suprizingly one of the best so far I'll start giving my free powerstones away hope you get more recongnition
Solid first chapter hopefully this doesn’t get abandoned as I’m looking forward to this.
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