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(5/5) I'm at 7th chapter. The story progress is decent for now. Keep up the good work 👍 (Will review again at 100chp) -----------------------------
I like the concept mate, but you should put in more limitations and weaknesses to the power copying and not make it permanent. It is honestly boring if a protagonist can just drop in, copy the powers of everyone around completely in just a few seconds, and then come out on top almost instantly. Make it more gritty and raise the stakes of the story and you are perfect.
Great story so fare I hope it's harem recommended characters: Scarlet Witch Wanda, Polaris Lorna Dane, Magik Illyana Rasputin, Psylocke Bestsy Braddock, Rogue Annie Marie, Pheonix Jean Grey, Goblin Queen Madelyne Pryor, Shadowcat Kitty Pride, White Queen Emma Frost, Black Queen Selene Galio
can the ability mc copy be merge together to evolve ? and it would interesting if you merge phoenix force and other force to get new type of energy all those force ability but better In power
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make it more of a business politics and own faction building fanfic not just mutants and their own world
Just don't make this a harem. Seriously, harem is just overrated nowadays. Instead give him a yandere girlfriend.Ciao.Mudafuka.................................,....,...,...,...........,,.....................
(5/5) I'm at 7th chapter. The story progress is decent for now. Keep up the good work 👍 (Will review again at 100chp) -----------------------------
I like the concept mate, but you should put in more limitations and weaknesses to the power copying and not make it permanent. It is honestly boring if a protagonist can just drop in, copy the powers of everyone around completely in just a few seconds, and then come out on top almost instantly. Make it more gritty and raise the stakes of the story and you are perfect.
Great story so fare I hope it's harem recommended characters: Scarlet Witch Wanda, Polaris Lorna Dane, Magik Illyana Rasputin, Psylocke Bestsy Braddock, Rogue Annie Marie, Pheonix Jean Grey, Goblin Queen Madelyne Pryor, Shadowcat Kitty Pride, White Queen Emma Frost, Black Queen Selene Galio
can the ability mc copy be merge together to evolve ? and it would interesting if you merge phoenix force and other force to get new type of energy all those force ability but better In power
[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
make it more of a business politics and own faction building fanfic not just mutants and their own world
Just don't make this a harem. Seriously, harem is just overrated nowadays. Instead give him a yandere girlfriend.Ciao.Mudafuka.................................,....,...,...,...........,,.....................