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CouchPotatoDandy

If you wish to read about an MC who is constantly nerfed, drunk, drugged or goes berserker then this fanfic is for you. As the story progressed and I read more chapters I thought the MC will grow up and learn from his mistakes, but every step he takes forward, he takes ten back. Till Chapter 100 I don't think I have read a battle he ever won. Each time he is nerfed so hard or his opponents are described as way too OP then they really are, that he loses badly and almost get killed each time. He is a complete moron that lets everyone manipulate him as he dance to there music. Also from chapter 85 the author starts making mistakes about the MC's system status numbers and impregnate rewards. My guess is that this is happening because of the long periods of time between each chapter release, making him forget what he previously wrote.

7h
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Yo_leo

The truth is that I couldn't get past the 34 chapters, I tried but it wouldn't stop, a good novel only the MC damaged it in such a way that everything positive was lost... even what was written, everything that touches what was done was lost even the novel itself.

1d
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Arbab_Mughal_6960

This story is unreasonable due to MC Treating people like objects for his personal use and leaving girls after making them pregnant. This story is awful.

5d
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Roberto_Carriles

It's really good. At the beginning you gonna hate the mc (trashy person) but a while after he became better. Bad things about this is that autor is wasting his potential in a fanfic and it's taking a slow development on the story (which is not bad but im anxious to know what happens next).

14d
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MadLogic999

Peak ff. Reminds me of the mafia series mafia 1 and mafia 2 peak games. Love those games chilling driving a 1956 Pontiac Club de Mer while listening to radio touring little italy. This ff has a really trashy mc but hes not a japanese beta otacuck. Hes one of those trashy red necks gambling, drunk, have seggs with the bar waitress, go home drunk af, then beats up their wife at home that kind of trash. Hes really right up villain. Aside from his unique personality the story tho resembles very much like those mafia games where he is recruited and navigates that life of an italian mafia. Over all peak ff.

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23d
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Sid_Chauhan1104

I like this fan fiction a lot since this is the first ff I have read where the mc doesn't know whole mcu timeline. I first expected it to start from 2008 but when I read it , it took me to the different times. I have read 30+ chapters and it has me hooked. but there are also some problems: first of all , the mcu doesn't use his systems powers at all. I know we have seen most of the mc relying on their system for everything but when you don't use the abilities you have been provided like he got the crow but didn't use it much expected for using it to impress maria. that crow has fudging genjutsu for god's sake.

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27d
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McTiger03

This probably my favorite fanfic on this site. I’m obsessed with it, the character development is supremely good, the way the author implement the system is so creative and perfect and love that he doesn’t become all powerful from the get go. Love how the real life history is implemented in this story, you can really see all the research behind the time setting. It all feel so natural.

1mth
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VoidOverlord

The story has potential, but the protagonist is utterly worthless, making the entire experience unbearable. No further explanation is needed. The main character is so frustratingly useless that it ruins any enjoyment. This story is a complete waste of time and should be avoided at all costs.

1mth
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Sir_Aguiar

Simply incredible, to be honest I started reading looking for smut, but the unfolding of the plot and the character's growth was worth every second of reading

1mth
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Aye_itz_cloudz

The best marvel fic on the internet Author=G.O.A.T

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1mth
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Yonsy_Arellano

is crazy how a smut novel have a lot better plot the most novels on this platform

1mth
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Fishstick843

this is by far the best marvel fan fiction I have found, also are you gonna make any other stories if so please do a game of thrones story I feel that would go great with your writing style

1mth
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Lameduck

Author made the worst MC he could. Super toxic, annoying, unable to grow and keeps getting drunk and making same mistakes caring about no one. Also has almost nothing to do with marvel at all 35 chapters in and other than a young cap and bucky there is nothing marvel about it, all the girls are OCs

1mth
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Aye_itz_cloudz

5/5 cuz I said so.

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1mth
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BadUser1337

Дуже дуже дуже годно. Офіційно найкращий MVP фанфік. Від побудови світу до персонажів. Гг не лиходій, а людина, яку поламало життя. Є класний character development і герой перетворюється в true giga chad.

1mth
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Umut_Cepken_6839

Wonderful story and writing! I didn't think I would love it this much as everything pointed to an OP character with a wish fulfilment narrative but boy was I wrong. It is one of the best novels in terms of character development with a relatable MC. A question for the author, are you planning to carry the novel to the modern times?

1mth
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BadUser1337

Man, it's peak! Character development is long but great, good world creation and big chapters. I like it! Mc loves women first of all, but who don't, right?

1mth
Ver 0 Respostas
FairyCannon

The protagonist is a kid playing at being an Italian mafia character throughout the entire fanfic. It doesn't blow up the system, it doesn't blow up the universe, and it honestly feels like watching a kid's cartoon. Sorry.

1mth
Ver 16 Respostas
Wolfur
LV 12 Badge

All I can say is that this is PEAK..I came here expecting some stupid smut but I was instead met with an absolute masterpiece, I have never been more thoroughly invested in a story before, I recommend this story fully.

1mth
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sllab
LV 12 Badge

Overall, it's a good story with good pacing, great character development, and a cohesive layout. The only issue is that the language used feels very robotic at times.

1mth
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KazumaEquality

one of the greatest marvel fic I've ever read try it first before saying anything

2mth
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delusionalxdreamer

Honestly, sometimes I kinda feel down and fanfiction is my escapism, especially, harem ones. Even if it is my escapism, I kinda cringe most of the time when I read them. This one was a great story with a scum mc in the beginning but that scum slowly transformed into a better person. I kinda binge read it after chapter 80. I really want to see more of the father-child interactions of the mc and kinda hope the author won't just forget about his children

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2mth
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DemonoidKing

You know, i’ve seen you get the credit that you deserve, but i don’t think you’ve ever truly been recognized in how you truly made such an amazing piece of art with this story. like the amount of research you must have put in to not only the mafia of the 1900s but the world surrounding it and you’re interweaving this story so well with so many historical figures that it’s insane. it the craziest part is that it all seems natural. it doesn’t seem out of place at all in fact it only makes me more invested to see real people from our history interacting with one of my favorite fictional franchises. i seriously have to give you the credit cuz this might actually be the best smut fic on webnovel.

2mth
Ver 0 Respostas
That1AsianDude

Honestly came looking for gold ingots and found a stack of diamonds.

2mth
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Luis_Luiz

You know , after everything that was said and done , what really made me turn against the protagonist was this miserable bullying against this innocent child in chapter 112 ! Would he really have been violent if the boy didn't obey him ?

2mth
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nigemcplebagen

I was going to wait until I fully caught up to leave a review, but as of finishing chapter 71, I have to leave one. No fanfiction has any right to be this well written, and I will forever hate the author for making me enjoy a story called "impregnation system" as much as I do.

2mth
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CH1LLGUY

This will be a sincere review. To start, I think this author has so much potential. The writing and structure have been clean so far. It is above average for web novel terms. Most times, I expect errors and bad sentences, especially for a novel that is fanfiction. So just that in itself wows me. The system down to the way he gets rewards I like. The bad reviews for this novel I can understand. I just think they are exaggerated. Most of them call out the character. I admit, that the MC personality can be a bit too much and takes a long time to develop. It just doesn't warrant to give the novel a two or one star. If I personally didn't see it from another review. That the MC will change in chapter 70. I maybe would have dropped it. My problems with the novel: I personally don't like how long it took for his character development. I think after the first two times of his same drunk crash out. We could tell how he is. It got a bit too dragged out by doing it a lot of times over and over again. I just think that the true story starts around chapter 70. Since then I have loved this story. I hope author if you read this, that you can go far with it. Although I understand that the novel is intended to be practice for you. Conclusion: The story is great besides mc annoying personality that takes a bit too long to change.

2mth
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Ronnin_Hellrise

Esta Historia es tan buena de leer que tengo miedo de que nunca se termine, no tienen idea de lo bien que se disfruta del personaje principal, su arco de desarrollo y historia en el mundo marvel que apenas con menos de 200 capítulos se ha tocado, un digno merecedor de ser el sucesor de las novelas de los 2 milenios! solo algunos tienen este derecho, esta historia tiene para mínimo 2000 capítulos con todo el jugo y esencia que se le puede sacar, no te puedes perder de leer esta historia de marvel fics muy diferente de las que normalmente hay a montones [img=boleto dorado]

2mth
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BlazeSavage

I was skeptical at the start of the story, the mc’s personality in the begging is utter flaky garbage. Though as the story progresses the number of times you empathize with him increses and you start to understand why he is or was this way. He does grow as a person and becomes someone reliable eventually, though its a slow process with countless setbacks. imo this is exactly where this story shines. It shows how real people deal with bad habits and addiction. People don’t just cast them off suddenly, its very inhuman. In most cases bad habits will rear their ugly heads later on in life at most inopportune moments. There are many other good points in the story. The dialogue is smooth. The narrative is well connected, there may be some minor plot holes but they aren’t impactful and can be glossed over easily. The characters feel real and aren’t just yes men to the mc and the mc isn’t getting s*cked of at every given chance metaphorically, literally maybe~ Overall love the story. Keep it coming author and good luck. Goated story, goated author. [img=recommend]

2mth
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siccricc

I'm happy I held my patience for this story. At first I wasn't sure if it would be worth it reading because of the almost unlikable main character, but the character development I was promised came through. The execution took a long time but I think it was well executed. Please give this story a chance.

2mth
Ver 0 Respostas
CouchPotatoDandy

If you wish to read about an MC who is constantly nerfed, drunk, drugged or goes berserker then this fanfic is for you. As the story progressed and I read more chapters I thought the MC will grow up and learn from his mistakes, but every step he takes forward, he takes ten back. Till Chapter 100 I don't think I have read a battle he ever won. Each time he is nerfed so hard or his opponents are described as way too OP then they really are, that he loses badly and almost get killed each time. He is a complete moron that lets everyone manipulate him as he dance to there music. Also from chapter 85 the author starts making mistakes about the MC's system status numbers and impregnate rewards. My guess is that this is happening because of the long periods of time between each chapter release, making him forget what he previously wrote.

7h
Ver 0 Respostas
Yo_leo

The truth is that I couldn't get past the 34 chapters, I tried but it wouldn't stop, a good novel only the MC damaged it in such a way that everything positive was lost... even what was written, everything that touches what was done was lost even the novel itself.

1d
Ver 0 Respostas
Arbab_Mughal_6960

This story is unreasonable due to MC Treating people like objects for his personal use and leaving girls after making them pregnant. This story is awful.

5d
Ver 1 Respostas
Roberto_Carriles

It's really good. At the beginning you gonna hate the mc (trashy person) but a while after he became better. Bad things about this is that autor is wasting his potential in a fanfic and it's taking a slow development on the story (which is not bad but im anxious to know what happens next).

14d
Ver 0 Respostas
MadLogic999

Peak ff. Reminds me of the mafia series mafia 1 and mafia 2 peak games. Love those games chilling driving a 1956 Pontiac Club de Mer while listening to radio touring little italy. This ff has a really trashy mc but hes not a japanese beta otacuck. Hes one of those trashy red necks gambling, drunk, have seggs with the bar waitress, go home drunk af, then beats up their wife at home that kind of trash. Hes really right up villain. Aside from his unique personality the story tho resembles very much like those mafia games where he is recruited and navigates that life of an italian mafia. Over all peak ff.

img
23d
Ver 0 Respostas
Sid_Chauhan1104

I like this fan fiction a lot since this is the first ff I have read where the mc doesn't know whole mcu timeline. I first expected it to start from 2008 but when I read it , it took me to the different times. I have read 30+ chapters and it has me hooked. but there are also some problems: first of all , the mcu doesn't use his systems powers at all. I know we have seen most of the mc relying on their system for everything but when you don't use the abilities you have been provided like he got the crow but didn't use it much expected for using it to impress maria. that crow has fudging genjutsu for god's sake.

Revelar Spoiler
27d
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McTiger03

This probably my favorite fanfic on this site. I’m obsessed with it, the character development is supremely good, the way the author implement the system is so creative and perfect and love that he doesn’t become all powerful from the get go. Love how the real life history is implemented in this story, you can really see all the research behind the time setting. It all feel so natural.

1mth
Ver 1 Respostas
VoidOverlord

The story has potential, but the protagonist is utterly worthless, making the entire experience unbearable. No further explanation is needed. The main character is so frustratingly useless that it ruins any enjoyment. This story is a complete waste of time and should be avoided at all costs.

1mth
Ver 1 Respostas
Sir_Aguiar

Simply incredible, to be honest I started reading looking for smut, but the unfolding of the plot and the character's growth was worth every second of reading

1mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Aye_itz_cloudz

The best marvel fic on the internet Author=G.O.A.T

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1mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Yonsy_Arellano

is crazy how a smut novel have a lot better plot the most novels on this platform

1mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Fishstick843

this is by far the best marvel fan fiction I have found, also are you gonna make any other stories if so please do a game of thrones story I feel that would go great with your writing style

1mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Lameduck

Author made the worst MC he could. Super toxic, annoying, unable to grow and keeps getting drunk and making same mistakes caring about no one. Also has almost nothing to do with marvel at all 35 chapters in and other than a young cap and bucky there is nothing marvel about it, all the girls are OCs

1mth
Ver 6 Respostas
Aye_itz_cloudz

5/5 cuz I said so.

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1mth
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BadUser1337

Дуже дуже дуже годно. Офіційно найкращий MVP фанфік. Від побудови світу до персонажів. Гг не лиходій, а людина, яку поламало життя. Є класний character development і герой перетворюється в true giga chad.

1mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Umut_Cepken_6839

Wonderful story and writing! I didn't think I would love it this much as everything pointed to an OP character with a wish fulfilment narrative but boy was I wrong. It is one of the best novels in terms of character development with a relatable MC. A question for the author, are you planning to carry the novel to the modern times?

1mth
Ver 0 Respostas
BadUser1337

Man, it's peak! Character development is long but great, good world creation and big chapters. I like it! Mc loves women first of all, but who don't, right?

1mth
Ver 0 Respostas
FairyCannon

The protagonist is a kid playing at being an Italian mafia character throughout the entire fanfic. It doesn't blow up the system, it doesn't blow up the universe, and it honestly feels like watching a kid's cartoon. Sorry.

1mth
Ver 16 Respostas
Wolfur
LV 12 Badge

All I can say is that this is PEAK..I came here expecting some stupid smut but I was instead met with an absolute masterpiece, I have never been more thoroughly invested in a story before, I recommend this story fully.

1mth
Ver 0 Respostas
sllab
LV 12 Badge

Overall, it's a good story with good pacing, great character development, and a cohesive layout. The only issue is that the language used feels very robotic at times.

1mth
Ver 0 Respostas
KazumaEquality

one of the greatest marvel fic I've ever read try it first before saying anything

2mth
Ver 0 Respostas
delusionalxdreamer

Honestly, sometimes I kinda feel down and fanfiction is my escapism, especially, harem ones. Even if it is my escapism, I kinda cringe most of the time when I read them. This one was a great story with a scum mc in the beginning but that scum slowly transformed into a better person. I kinda binge read it after chapter 80. I really want to see more of the father-child interactions of the mc and kinda hope the author won't just forget about his children

img
2mth
Ver 0 Respostas
DemonoidKing

You know, i’ve seen you get the credit that you deserve, but i don’t think you’ve ever truly been recognized in how you truly made such an amazing piece of art with this story. like the amount of research you must have put in to not only the mafia of the 1900s but the world surrounding it and you’re interweaving this story so well with so many historical figures that it’s insane. it the craziest part is that it all seems natural. it doesn’t seem out of place at all in fact it only makes me more invested to see real people from our history interacting with one of my favorite fictional franchises. i seriously have to give you the credit cuz this might actually be the best smut fic on webnovel.

2mth
Ver 0 Respostas
That1AsianDude

Honestly came looking for gold ingots and found a stack of diamonds.

2mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Luis_Luiz

You know , after everything that was said and done , what really made me turn against the protagonist was this miserable bullying against this innocent child in chapter 112 ! Would he really have been violent if the boy didn't obey him ?

2mth
Ver 0 Respostas
nigemcplebagen

I was going to wait until I fully caught up to leave a review, but as of finishing chapter 71, I have to leave one. No fanfiction has any right to be this well written, and I will forever hate the author for making me enjoy a story called "impregnation system" as much as I do.

2mth
Ver 0 Respostas
CH1LLGUY

This will be a sincere review. To start, I think this author has so much potential. The writing and structure have been clean so far. It is above average for web novel terms. Most times, I expect errors and bad sentences, especially for a novel that is fanfiction. So just that in itself wows me. The system down to the way he gets rewards I like. The bad reviews for this novel I can understand. I just think they are exaggerated. Most of them call out the character. I admit, that the MC personality can be a bit too much and takes a long time to develop. It just doesn't warrant to give the novel a two or one star. If I personally didn't see it from another review. That the MC will change in chapter 70. I maybe would have dropped it. My problems with the novel: I personally don't like how long it took for his character development. I think after the first two times of his same drunk crash out. We could tell how he is. It got a bit too dragged out by doing it a lot of times over and over again. I just think that the true story starts around chapter 70. Since then I have loved this story. I hope author if you read this, that you can go far with it. Although I understand that the novel is intended to be practice for you. Conclusion: The story is great besides mc annoying personality that takes a bit too long to change.

2mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Ronnin_Hellrise

Esta Historia es tan buena de leer que tengo miedo de que nunca se termine, no tienen idea de lo bien que se disfruta del personaje principal, su arco de desarrollo y historia en el mundo marvel que apenas con menos de 200 capítulos se ha tocado, un digno merecedor de ser el sucesor de las novelas de los 2 milenios! solo algunos tienen este derecho, esta historia tiene para mínimo 2000 capítulos con todo el jugo y esencia que se le puede sacar, no te puedes perder de leer esta historia de marvel fics muy diferente de las que normalmente hay a montones [img=boleto dorado]

2mth
Ver 0 Respostas
BlazeSavage

I was skeptical at the start of the story, the mc’s personality in the begging is utter flaky garbage. Though as the story progresses the number of times you empathize with him increses and you start to understand why he is or was this way. He does grow as a person and becomes someone reliable eventually, though its a slow process with countless setbacks. imo this is exactly where this story shines. It shows how real people deal with bad habits and addiction. People don’t just cast them off suddenly, its very inhuman. In most cases bad habits will rear their ugly heads later on in life at most inopportune moments. There are many other good points in the story. The dialogue is smooth. The narrative is well connected, there may be some minor plot holes but they aren’t impactful and can be glossed over easily. The characters feel real and aren’t just yes men to the mc and the mc isn’t getting s*cked of at every given chance metaphorically, literally maybe~ Overall love the story. Keep it coming author and good luck. Goated story, goated author. [img=recommend]

2mth
Ver 0 Respostas
siccricc

I'm happy I held my patience for this story. At first I wasn't sure if it would be worth it reading because of the almost unlikable main character, but the character development I was promised came through. The execution took a long time but I think it was well executed. Please give this story a chance.

2mth
Ver 0 Respostas
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