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Super cool concept and a really fun story so far. Hope it doesn't get dropped. I honestly hope this becomes a subgenre so I can read more stories like this.
This is total innovation within the fanfiction genre, The story is like a regular webnovel but its power system revolves around the fanfiction aspect of the story and it blends amazingly well together. The characters feel real and the dialogue is nice and the power system is really cool with everyone having unique powers that dont take chapters of info dump to understand, the MC also has his own unique powers (being a wanderer) without needed something cliche and boring like a system or some special bloodline. The author needs a million dollar check.
Extremely good but you lowkey need to update it bro 😭 it’s been 2 months
WHERE IS IT ? I NEEEEED IT , I VE BEEN WAITING FOR IT EVERYDAY FOR THE LAST MONTH BUT NO UPDATEEEE, AUTHOR JUST DON T DROP IT ON US RIGHT NOW
The Idea is Creative as hell but it gets boring pretty quickly, dropped at chapter 88 there are also no new chapters for a month as of 12 October 2024 so there’s that
I was really liking it until chapter 88 They forced the friends to brothers the mc barely hanged out with them it was just automatic.
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I can honestly say this is a near perfect fanfic/novel amazing writing quality, captivating character design, a well written story/background that you would think is impossible but the author somehow does it. This is definitely in my top 3 for most original fanfics[img=update][img=update][img=update]
My favorite part was when he said 'Its Wandering Time' and started wandering all over the place Now to fill up empty space, ................
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Great start. Recent chapters obliterated any interest I had in this novel. Recent chapters has turned this into a dogshit shounen-type thing with friends betraying him and him going all naruto on them. Terrible.
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Honestly this makes me feel weird, the develpment of the story isn't the best, the MC hides his powers just because he feels like it, the reason the author give us for that is cheap. Anyway the idea around the story is really creative and a cool idea you can find interesting things in the story but the way the caracthers interact it's also cheap they don't feel alive they feel like bad written villains I think the authors take too much of Xianxia shit because everyone feels like a young master even more the prodigies I can recommend the story and tell you all to give it a try to write your own conclusions but it fails to deliver a lot.
This is absolutely amazing i wait each day for the update and for more story’s like this
Honestly this is good great even,the concept is interesting as hell, i like the character they don’t feel like cardboard cutouts ,but i just have one teny tiny problem, it has been boring for a couple of chapters now and the MC in nerfing himself which in his situation isn’t exactly a bad thing but 3 chapters for just ONE fight is absolutely crazy bro
It's good, but I'm tired from execive cliffhanger in every chapter. when reading this story, it's like reading a filler chapter despite it not being a filler chapter or if you watch Dragon Ball, you know what I mean how it feels.
This ff is different than others, uniquer and just better. The story is very original, not like most of the trash copy and paste stories on this platform. If the update schedule continues, than this could be the next hit.
Muy buen fic tiene una fuerte inspiración en shadow slave con una sacudida del autor que realmente te engancha [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=Feeling it][img=More pls]
might've given this a 4 star atleast if only he wasn't power hiding as much as he was if he was atleast top 10 or had a brain it would've been better, the writing quality is top-notch 5/5, development is like 1.5, I'd have given 0 for character design if possible, stability and background is ok, you will definitely like the story if you don't hate powerhiders, I'm only continuing with the hope tha he stops bein a Lil pusi later and actually shows his powers properly
This is great, I just hope you keep the scenarios with similar pacing. I ended up hating 48 hours a day and the oracle paths because some arcs ended up having 100+ chapters.
This is one of the best fanfics Ive ever read, And take my word when i say that this story is Phenomenal, i think this book has the potential to be better than 99 percent of the books, cant wait to see where the author goes with this story.
It's really good. There's a few hiccups in grammar every once and a while, but it is top notch most of the time and the pace of the strory is great. The scenario which is the first arc is amazing.
This is perfect. I hope you will continue to be able to produce this level of perfection.
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Is it possible to ask for a bargain? "for the next three days, for every 25/50 (or whatever) number of five star reviews, one chapter will be released." man I need more chapters.
It’s almost as good as it gets. This is an original that takes elements from other stories to elevate itself. Amazing writing and fantastic worldbuilding. 10/10.
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Has the potential to be at the level of really great novels like shadow slave and the author's POV. Love the writing style and the pace keep it up author.
So far the story is super engaging, so full marks, I would like to ask what works you intend to bring to this universe, what do you think of a character inheriting powers from Jujutsu kaisen or maybe someone inheriting Guts from Berserk? Great job!
applause for the author for making this works, never have i read novel like this, the world, power system and etc , this is just not a fanfic but a properly written original story novel
Super cool concept and a really fun story so far. Hope it doesn't get dropped. I honestly hope this becomes a subgenre so I can read more stories like this.
This is total innovation within the fanfiction genre, The story is like a regular webnovel but its power system revolves around the fanfiction aspect of the story and it blends amazingly well together. The characters feel real and the dialogue is nice and the power system is really cool with everyone having unique powers that dont take chapters of info dump to understand, the MC also has his own unique powers (being a wanderer) without needed something cliche and boring like a system or some special bloodline. The author needs a million dollar check.
Extremely good but you lowkey need to update it bro 😭 it’s been 2 months
WHERE IS IT ? I NEEEEED IT , I VE BEEN WAITING FOR IT EVERYDAY FOR THE LAST MONTH BUT NO UPDATEEEE, AUTHOR JUST DON T DROP IT ON US RIGHT NOW
The Idea is Creative as hell but it gets boring pretty quickly, dropped at chapter 88 there are also no new chapters for a month as of 12 October 2024 so there’s that
I was really liking it until chapter 88 They forced the friends to brothers the mc barely hanged out with them it was just automatic.
Revelar Spoiler I can honestly say this is a near perfect fanfic/novel amazing writing quality, captivating character design, a well written story/background that you would think is impossible but the author somehow does it. This is definitely in my top 3 for most original fanfics[img=update][img=update][img=update]
My favorite part was when he said 'Its Wandering Time' and started wandering all over the place Now to fill up empty space, ................
Revelar Spoiler Great start. Recent chapters obliterated any interest I had in this novel. Recent chapters has turned this into a dogshit shounen-type thing with friends betraying him and him going all naruto on them. Terrible.
Revelar Spoiler Honestly this makes me feel weird, the develpment of the story isn't the best, the MC hides his powers just because he feels like it, the reason the author give us for that is cheap. Anyway the idea around the story is really creative and a cool idea you can find interesting things in the story but the way the caracthers interact it's also cheap they don't feel alive they feel like bad written villains I think the authors take too much of Xianxia shit because everyone feels like a young master even more the prodigies I can recommend the story and tell you all to give it a try to write your own conclusions but it fails to deliver a lot.
This is absolutely amazing i wait each day for the update and for more story’s like this
Honestly this is good great even,the concept is interesting as hell, i like the character they don’t feel like cardboard cutouts ,but i just have one teny tiny problem, it has been boring for a couple of chapters now and the MC in nerfing himself which in his situation isn’t exactly a bad thing but 3 chapters for just ONE fight is absolutely crazy bro
It's good, but I'm tired from execive cliffhanger in every chapter. when reading this story, it's like reading a filler chapter despite it not being a filler chapter or if you watch Dragon Ball, you know what I mean how it feels.
This ff is different than others, uniquer and just better. The story is very original, not like most of the trash copy and paste stories on this platform. If the update schedule continues, than this could be the next hit.
Muy buen fic tiene una fuerte inspiración en shadow slave con una sacudida del autor que realmente te engancha [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=Feeling it][img=More pls]
might've given this a 4 star atleast if only he wasn't power hiding as much as he was if he was atleast top 10 or had a brain it would've been better, the writing quality is top-notch 5/5, development is like 1.5, I'd have given 0 for character design if possible, stability and background is ok, you will definitely like the story if you don't hate powerhiders, I'm only continuing with the hope tha he stops bein a Lil pusi later and actually shows his powers properly
This is great, I just hope you keep the scenarios with similar pacing. I ended up hating 48 hours a day and the oracle paths because some arcs ended up having 100+ chapters.
This is one of the best fanfics Ive ever read, And take my word when i say that this story is Phenomenal, i think this book has the potential to be better than 99 percent of the books, cant wait to see where the author goes with this story.
It's really good. There's a few hiccups in grammar every once and a while, but it is top notch most of the time and the pace of the strory is great. The scenario which is the first arc is amazing.
This is perfect. I hope you will continue to be able to produce this level of perfection.
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Revelar Spoiler Is it possible to ask for a bargain? "for the next three days, for every 25/50 (or whatever) number of five star reviews, one chapter will be released." man I need more chapters.
It’s almost as good as it gets. This is an original that takes elements from other stories to elevate itself. Amazing writing and fantastic worldbuilding. 10/10.
give me mooooore [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Has the potential to be at the level of really great novels like shadow slave and the author's POV. Love the writing style and the pace keep it up author.
So far the story is super engaging, so full marks, I would like to ask what works you intend to bring to this universe, what do you think of a character inheriting powers from Jujutsu kaisen or maybe someone inheriting Guts from Berserk? Great job!
applause for the author for making this works, never have i read novel like this, the world, power system and etc , this is just not a fanfic but a properly written original story novel