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The only real negative thing I have to say about this story is that we are 15 chapters in and there is no clear primary protagonist. If there isn't going to be one, I have to say I am not a fan of event driven stories as we aren't seeing a journey but a series of events.
As of chapter 7, the background and development are pretty solid so far. the pacing isn't too fast or slow, in my opinion. It's still quite early on, but I'm looking forward to seeing how the story further unfolds
Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
i dont like this narrated writing style there are times it repeats its self it feels like a narrated version of a tv show when it breaks for commercial and come back to a recap i did listen to all the 15 chapter so far and i started it at 7:30 and it just ended at 2:00 so it did keep me wondering what was going happen next but there is the timeline i dont know how long it took for the longest time i didnt even know when it was in the timeline as they said something about harry and the magical world but he ended up being only 6 at this time and should know nothing about it so even though it kept me wondering i am still at a loss to describe what the hell is going on and when
The only real negative thing I have to say about this story is that we are 15 chapters in and there is no clear primary protagonist. If there isn't going to be one, I have to say I am not a fan of event driven stories as we aren't seeing a journey but a series of events.
As of chapter 7, the background and development are pretty solid so far. the pacing isn't too fast or slow, in my opinion. It's still quite early on, but I'm looking forward to seeing how the story further unfolds
Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
i dont like this narrated writing style there are times it repeats its self it feels like a narrated version of a tv show when it breaks for commercial and come back to a recap i did listen to all the 15 chapter so far and i started it at 7:30 and it just ended at 2:00 so it did keep me wondering what was going happen next but there is the timeline i dont know how long it took for the longest time i didnt even know when it was in the timeline as they said something about harry and the magical world but he ended up being only 6 at this time and should know nothing about it so even though it kept me wondering i am still at a loss to describe what the hell is going on and when