6Opiniões
- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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Mc acts like a 2 year old who got super powers ............................................................................................................................
It goes by too fast, needs more substance between one action and the next. Besides that a great story.
so far I think it's really good and would say has great potential though that depends on the follow on chapters
Thank you for reading!!!!!!!!!!! I don't know if will create more chapters to make it past chapter 10 but I will try!
Mc acts like a 2 year old who got super powers ............................................................................................................................
It goes by too fast, needs more substance between one action and the next. Besides that a great story.
so far I think it's really good and would say has great potential though that depends on the follow on chapters
Thank you for reading!!!!!!!!!!! I don't know if will create more chapters to make it past chapter 10 but I will try!