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The story is good, although I found the beginning slow in terms of finding out what his "cheat" did, but it was worth it, it's interesting and different, it's a good ff
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Extremely, EXTREMELY bad start. As a reader you are excited to see MCs new powers and how he uses them, What's the current state of the world and how the MC interacts with it. But all you get is useless, pathetic attempt to romance where all all the females are swooning over MC for some reason. I don't know if it gets better later, but just an advice for author for future works: Try to make the starting chapters as intersting as you can.
wait a minute, does he has 15 inches usb drive or its a real one usb drive? i havent read it btw
i think you should focus more on the usb rather than recreating things from our world, you literally have a super op thing and dont use it but i am only in chapter 11, so i will give this novel another chance in the future
Well how to start the grammar is awesome the words used are used for that context are just perfect and the direction of the story is the same the interaction between the characters doesn't seem forced just natural really good 👍.
As someone who enjoyed the original novel the cheat came from I think this fanfic is great. So far it doesn't seem like a necessity to have read the original to enjoy this one either but decently worth checking out if you haven't already read it.
It's peak... 🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️ Like this was the one for me, it was literally the story I was trying to find. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . So. . . . . . . Read . . . . .IT . . . . . . . . . . . .And . . . . . . . . . . . . . . WhyTF . . . . . . . . Are . . .You . . . . . . . . .Still . . . . . . . . . . . Here . . . . ? . . . . GO . . . . . .Read . . . . . . . It .... . . . . . . .. ... .... ..... ...... ....... ........
It's been a while since I read this good of a novel the only problem is the lack of chapters. ..............................................................
Damn, it's been a while since I found a fanfic that could excite me. This actually has tons of potential. Looking forward to more updates. P.S: Pls don't drop. I have seen many Fanfics with great potential but we're dropped.
Pretty slow paced as I want to try to delve into the character of the character and explore many aspects of one's existence. I tried to make it readable and enjoyable as much as possible knowing that it won't suit everyone's tastes. I give myself a modest 4.6 since I don't update daily lol. Um, and if you haven't yet read "I Have A Super USB Drive" please read it. It's an interesting read and I got the idea from there but incorporated the whole shebang in Marvel instead. Thanks for the review... I guess
The overall concept is good but the way you wrote the dialogues is exaggerated and annoying that is my main complaint with this book.
História bem interessante, só espero que não seja abandonada. É isso, continue com o bom trabalho.[img=recommend] História bem interessante, só espero que não seja abandonada. É isso, continue com o bom trabalho.[img=recommend]
very good story development with interesting power choice Write a review Reading Status: C28 Translation Quality Stability of Updates Story Development Character Design World Background The total score 5.0
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This fanfiction is a nice surprise, I admit I was a bit reluctant with the concept but the author has managed it well so far. Thank you for the story, author, I hope you keep going until the end.
the honest review is this fic literally just harem in marvel, even though the story starts with clear background of MC, it's started to go sideways with MJ and Gwen when the story started to get interesting behold a wild carol danver came and the MC start to flirt. This fic just felt like it's going nowhere.
(5/5) Alright you got me. I'm on 9th chapter, and I'm hooked. Keep on sending the good stuff. 👍 (Will review again, at 100chp) -----------------------------------------------
In all honesty the novel intro duction is good, kinda action LN but after reading it for 15 chapter I feel like it only good for soap drama lover. it supposed to be action type light novel because of the world setting but become to much unneeded banters between characters that has nothing to do with the main plot at all. I guess the LN can be categorized as slice of life not real action novel which sadly i was thinking like that. the plot work slower than my cup of tea and kinda boring even after 15 chapters I read. so sorry boss... 3.2 for review.
The story is good, although I found the beginning slow in terms of finding out what his "cheat" did, but it was worth it, it's interesting and different, it's a good ff
..........................................................................................................................................................good
Extremely, EXTREMELY bad start. As a reader you are excited to see MCs new powers and how he uses them, What's the current state of the world and how the MC interacts with it. But all you get is useless, pathetic attempt to romance where all all the females are swooning over MC for some reason. I don't know if it gets better later, but just an advice for author for future works: Try to make the starting chapters as intersting as you can.
wait a minute, does he has 15 inches usb drive or its a real one usb drive? i havent read it btw
i think you should focus more on the usb rather than recreating things from our world, you literally have a super op thing and dont use it but i am only in chapter 11, so i will give this novel another chance in the future
Well how to start the grammar is awesome the words used are used for that context are just perfect and the direction of the story is the same the interaction between the characters doesn't seem forced just natural really good 👍.
As someone who enjoyed the original novel the cheat came from I think this fanfic is great. So far it doesn't seem like a necessity to have read the original to enjoy this one either but decently worth checking out if you haven't already read it.
It's peak... 🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️ Like this was the one for me, it was literally the story I was trying to find. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . So. . . . . . . Read . . . . .IT . . . . . . . . . . . .And . . . . . . . . . . . . . . WhyTF . . . . . . . . Are . . .You . . . . . . . . .Still . . . . . . . . . . . Here . . . . ? . . . . GO . . . . . .Read . . . . . . . It .... . . . . . . .. ... .... ..... ...... ....... ........
It's been a while since I read this good of a novel the only problem is the lack of chapters. ..............................................................
Damn, it's been a while since I found a fanfic that could excite me. This actually has tons of potential. Looking forward to more updates. P.S: Pls don't drop. I have seen many Fanfics with great potential but we're dropped.
Pretty slow paced as I want to try to delve into the character of the character and explore many aspects of one's existence. I tried to make it readable and enjoyable as much as possible knowing that it won't suit everyone's tastes. I give myself a modest 4.6 since I don't update daily lol. Um, and if you haven't yet read "I Have A Super USB Drive" please read it. It's an interesting read and I got the idea from there but incorporated the whole shebang in Marvel instead. Thanks for the review... I guess
The overall concept is good but the way you wrote the dialogues is exaggerated and annoying that is my main complaint with this book.
História bem interessante, só espero que não seja abandonada. É isso, continue com o bom trabalho.[img=recommend] História bem interessante, só espero que não seja abandonada. É isso, continue com o bom trabalho.[img=recommend]
very good story development with interesting power choice Write a review Reading Status: C28 Translation Quality Stability of Updates Story Development Character Design World Background The total score 5.0
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This fanfiction is a nice surprise, I admit I was a bit reluctant with the concept but the author has managed it well so far. Thank you for the story, author, I hope you keep going until the end.
the honest review is this fic literally just harem in marvel, even though the story starts with clear background of MC, it's started to go sideways with MJ and Gwen when the story started to get interesting behold a wild carol danver came and the MC start to flirt. This fic just felt like it's going nowhere.
(5/5) Alright you got me. I'm on 9th chapter, and I'm hooked. Keep on sending the good stuff. 👍 (Will review again, at 100chp) -----------------------------------------------
In all honesty the novel intro duction is good, kinda action LN but after reading it for 15 chapter I feel like it only good for soap drama lover. it supposed to be action type light novel because of the world setting but become to much unneeded banters between characters that has nothing to do with the main plot at all. I guess the LN can be categorized as slice of life not real action novel which sadly i was thinking like that. the plot work slower than my cup of tea and kinda boring even after 15 chapters I read. so sorry boss... 3.2 for review.