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- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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This is a solid story about OP kids who don’t think or act like kids. Writing quality is typically good, but a couple of chapters are full of minor obvious typos. I guess they didn’t get the same editing time or a spellchecker. It’s immersive during the fights. It's not very original so far, but it's got an uncommon spin or two. Furthermore, it’s still early in the story and the prose and scenes are done well. The issue is that this is a very common type of story and it hasn't given me enough of a hook so far. But, it's a matter of taste. If you like stories about OP kids growing up, you likely won't be disappointed.
Yeah, this is already an easy 5 star rating. I’m totally adding this to my reading list.
As the author, it's only right I try and support my book. For any future readers, please bear with me and my uploading speed. Thank you for picking up this book.
This is a solid story about OP kids who don’t think or act like kids. Writing quality is typically good, but a couple of chapters are full of minor obvious typos. I guess they didn’t get the same editing time or a spellchecker. It’s immersive during the fights. It's not very original so far, but it's got an uncommon spin or two. Furthermore, it’s still early in the story and the prose and scenes are done well. The issue is that this is a very common type of story and it hasn't given me enough of a hook so far. But, it's a matter of taste. If you like stories about OP kids growing up, you likely won't be disappointed.
Yeah, this is already an easy 5 star rating. I’m totally adding this to my reading list.
As the author, it's only right I try and support my book. For any future readers, please bear with me and my uploading speed. Thank you for picking up this book.
okay the title got me really curious, i hope this does not disappoint